Tian Li had an idea, but it was a bit embarrassing for her to write it out systematically. After all, she had only written 800-character compositions before.
Fortunately, there is Liang Jinze next to him, which is different. Guan Ce handed the script to Liang Jinze because he liked his storytelling ability.
Guan Ce and Liang Jinze joined Xingyao Company together. After working together for a period of time, they naturally understood each other's abilities.
After Liang Jinze finished communicating with Tian Li, he began to write. How could he not know how such a girl should deal with difficult problems.
Change a character who needs alms from the second female lead, who needs to be dragged out of the abyss by the second female lead, into a character who works hard to get out of the predicament and the abyss.
So familiar, how could he not know how to shape this image.
Even without the appearance of the female number two, she can still walk to the bright place of life.
The second female lead was just... just... just met her, and then used the light in her heart to illuminate her haze.
How could there be no haze
The person who was sought after by others and attracted the attention of thousands of people suddenly fell to the lowest point of his life.
No matter how calm and calm the face is, it can't explain the days and nights when the heart is not at peace.
Liang Jinze had never had such a burst of inspiration at this moment.
After he quit the circle, he didn't write anything anymore, as if he was drained of inspiration all of a sudden.
And at this moment, everything seems to come back.
Tian Li didn't know the mental activity of the other party.
The two of them have a good understanding. When Liang Jinze started to write, Tian Li started to read. Her knowledge reserve is too little. She feels that the current self has actually reached a height that her knowledge reserve cannot cope with. .
She had to make it up quickly, she didn't want to hold Liang Jinze back.
A dream shared by both of them. Also do it together.
The desks of the two are facing each other, and when they look up, they can see each other's seriousness.
And little Aze was watching cartoons outside.
The greening of the community is very good, and the trees are tall. At this time, you can hear the faint sound of cicadas.
At this time, Liang Jinze had already written part of it.
Take it over, "Look, see if there is any problem. At that time, the audience of our movies should be young women. From this perspective, see if there is any problem."
Tian Li began to look up.
She knew that her male god was so talented that she would never meet in a hundred years.
But never knew that his talent has reached this point.
Under the arrangements of the other party, the original vulgar stalks not only became reasonable, but more importantly, this heroine is the kind of person she thinks in her heart!
"Male God!!" After Tian Li finished reading, she raised her head to look at Liang Jinze, "I suddenly felt that I am not worthy to be your fan..."
Liang Jinze laughed, "You are my only fan, if you are all expelled from the fan membership, I will be a polished commander."
"Believe me, when you get out of the rivers and lakes, you will definitely be worshiped by thousands of fans!" Tian Li has no doubts about this.
Liang Jinze was on the other side of Tian Li, and tapped her forehead, "Okay, tell me, is there anything that needs to be changed? Before you say anything, take off your fan filter."
"Okay." Tian Li took off something in front of her eyes in a serious manner. In fact, there was nothing, but that action was like taking off glasses.
"Next, let me comment on it fairly and openly," Tian Li said, and pretended to clear her throat, like a dean, "Liang Jinze's work, first of all, has a very good idea. The disjointed elements are reassembled and become one...”
Liang Jinze laughed, "I want to hear the shortcomings."
"You are embarrassing me!" Tian Li said with a smile, and then, Tian Li still couldn't help asking, "Well... are the female lead and the second female lead too ambiguous? In fact, it's harmless, like this Emotions are also beautiful."
Liang Jinze's throat was a little dry, and he couldn't help asking, "Is the emotional line obvious? I didn't notice it when I wrote it..."
Tian Liyu said earnestly, "Obviously, comrade, when I saw it, I really couldn't see it. You are a bachelor who doesn't believe in love. I thought you were going to leave our big fff group."
Then turned to another page, Tian Li was like a girl full of heart, holding her face and said, "Actually, the emotional drama is really super sweet, turning the original one-sided charity into a two-way redemption, especially when the second female is undergoing chemotherapy. Before, I told the hostess that without you, I might have lived in the eyes of others for the rest of my life. In other people’s evaluations, it was you who made me find myself. The girl’s heart of the old man blew up, but it was released After that, if we killed it, it was friendship, and no one else could say anything."
Liang Jinze: "..." He didn't want to talk, he wanted to be quiet...
Is it really that obvious
"I'll see for myself and improve it." Liang Jinze took the script and said.
Tian Li immediately sounded the alarm, "Don't delete the emotional scene."
Liang Jinze said solemnly, "We still have to delete the ambiguous part, so as not to destroy their pure friendship."
Tian Li snatched the notebook, "Who said that this is the interaction of the soul, the salvation of the soul! How can I use the word ambiguous to describe it..."
Liang Jinze couldn't help laughing, "I'm kidding, I won't delete the emotional scene. I'm just revising it to see if there is anything that needs to be improved."
So, Tian Li sat beside him and watched him continue to perfect the story.
Finally, after the revision was complete, Liang Jinze took a photo and sent it to Guan Ce.
Guan Ce quickly responded to the message.
"Damn it, why can't you use the computer to type?" Guan Ce's resentment was very heavy.
"No inspiration." Liang Jinze replied with three words.
"Then after reading this script, I might go blind."
"My friend, take care."
"Damn it, Liang Jinze, are you taking revenge on me for not being smart enough today?"
"Don't talk nonsense."
"This is the brother."
"What brain do you have?"
"Liang Jinze, don't think that you are still the beautiful boy with a poisonous tongue, wake up, you are already as fat as two people, you can only take the route of a good-tempered fat person~"
After half an hour, Guan Ce finished reading the script.
"Father Liang, I was wrong!"
"Go away, I don't have your son :)"