Grumpy old man, online education.
If you feel uncomfortable, please exit.
Not much to say, just start spraying.
A certain book friend posted such a post in the book review area last night.
"Anatomy? I want to scold the author... I have no objection to dissecting a dead body, but does dissecting a living person make it a little inhumane, and is the protagonist of the dungeon world too mature? From an inexperienced novice , suddenly turned into a business tycoon who turned over and over again, isn't this turning point a bit too big?"
I habitually turned on the writer's assistant to explain, but the more I looked at the id, the more familiar it became, and then I remembered that in the previous chapter, this is the real grumpy old man.
After I turned to the previous chapter, I remembered that I had posted such a screenshot in the old group a month ago.
Ask the group of friends, are people so hostile nowadays? I don't know how many people can see it, but I can definitely find it by looking through the group chat records.
And the id and avatar of that book friend.
At that time, it seemed to pass after a few random words, but this book friend still left a very deep impression on me.
Because the first one to call out Tu Cun and father X in this chapter, it seems that he is the first one.
And it has been said in two consecutive chapters, it is difficult not to impress me.
Although I was surprised at the time, I didn't say much. After all, there is a lot of hostility on the Internet, and most of the villagers are portrayed by me as foolish villains. Being able to say such things shows that I have portrayed them well.
Let's take it as a "crazy" compliment for now.
Later, I saw that many people liked it, or made other suggestions.
After all, this is a two-dimensional novel. The readers are younger than other genres, and their emotions are more easily infected and biased, which is also understandable.
I was thinking at the time, should I write it darker
Later, I half-cleared the priest and made it very clear that some older people may have a deeper understanding, and I agree with their point of view more.
The Almighty has already made it very clear that Yaeji is just following his old path. The divine master wanted to save his sister when he was young, but unfortunately he didn't have Yaeji's fighting power.
From some detailed descriptions, it can also be seen that the god master still loves their children very much, but since the death of the previous generation of witches, his heart has died.
Like the book friend 'Qing Mei Xiang Zi Zi', my views and his are highly overlapped, and his comments are also very accurate.
"I didn't have a choice before, and I don't have a choice now."
And what about our cranky book friend? I typed his comments in the comments section, but I couldn't post them at all!
What is he commenting on
Volume 1, Chapter 48 It's Better to Leave
Text: This weird atmosphere lasted for about five minutes, and Yae's hoarse voice came: "Shall we talk?"
A certain book friend: Talking about your mb, you will die!
It's understandable, after all, I haven't started to clean up. After the next chapter, the god master is half-cleared, Qingmei Shuyou said my favorite sentence so far, which is that sentence before...
Then Chapter 49 Everyone will eventually become what they hate the most
The last sentence of the text: "After all, this is my home."
A book friend commented: Come back with a hammer, the next time you come back is the time to slaughter the whole village! If the author writes the protagonist as a virgin, he will be a fan of it!
It should be this sentence, I posted a screenshot to the old group, and jokingly asked all the book friends, are people so hostile now
Then I was very impressed with him, which directly caused the scene where I exploded emotionally and sprayed directly.
The first one says he's crazy! It was my emotional explosion at the time, which happened to remind me of the description of the beast tide in the previous three chapters, which was less than 7000 words, and the portraits of the five groups of people were called water because of the big move.
At that time I was an instant explosion! I was eating out with my friends and almost dropped my phone.
After all, it’s a fan, it’s been said many times in the beginning of destiny, rewarding dungeons.
The buff of language proficiency + efficient learning has also appeared at least three times in the main text.
The main character came up with the beginning of Destiny, a person from the United States, who had a large amount of shares left to him by his parents, and then he sold it logically to become a start-up capital.
Those few chapters are really good for the foreshadowing, or that sentence, this is a fan, I want to write a detailed business war, I don’t need to guess, I know someone will jump out and criticize me, saying what you wrote? Is this still from Tokyo
So I checked a lot of information, the subprime mortgage crisis in the United States in 2007, Wall Street "empty god" John, the collapse of funds of two large mortgage groups, directly affected many funds, the Federal Reserve rescued the market...
In the financial crisis, Citigroup shares plummeted, and most of the world's financial markets were devastated.
Notice! By this time, Yaeji had been in this world for a year! It has been rewritten in the text that, in addition to exercising, sleeping and eating, he has been in the buff of efficient learning to continuously absorb knowledge.
For Yachongji who is carrying a "carrying mother", that is not a problem at all. As long as he sleeps, he will know exactly which company will fall tomorrow and how much it will fall! If you can't get money like this, it's really a shame!
There are not a few financial giants who made their fortunes during the financial crisis, and others can become legends. Why can't Yaeji, who can "predict 100% correct"
I tried to condense and present every detail, including when Yaeji was in the office in 2009, and his assistant Christine entered, saying that the Financial Crisis Investigation Committee was here to investigate!
Don't think I'm making it up! The reality really has this organization! Wall Street "empty God" is the object of their investigation.
I think I have described all the details emphatically, and there is even no possibility of omissions, such as acquisitions, talents, etc., as much as possible, so as not to say that I am stupid.
For the last book, if I don’t write dozens of chapters on the financial crisis, I’m sorry for my name of “big water ratio” (funny)
As a result, I spent so much time and checked so much information, what did I get in exchange
"The temperament changes too quickly."
"Mature too fast."
ok ok! For such chapters, everyone has the habit of skipping and reading, even if the details are in place, just flip through a few pages, my mother, when did the protagonist become so awesome
In fact, during the financial crisis, most of them are too busy to take care of themselves, which is the best time for a typical muffled fortune! Because at this time, it is almost impossible to have powerful capital to do something to you, because they can't finish their own affairs.
By the time they free up their hands, the protagonist's business empire has already taken shape.
Moreover, the main character invests in most emerging industries, since the focus is on quick money. What was the Internet like in 2008
Afterwards, the protagonist focuses on the research of biological laboratories, and it is even less likely to involve the interests of large consortiums.
Spoiler alert, behind Citigroup there is an old consortium with heavy assets represented by Morgan.
Yaeji also boarded the boat.
It has been mentioned many times in the article that Citigroup will pave the way for the future.
But this is a novel after all, so it's so cool. If I focus on describing business wars, how many people will read it
If you can take it all in one stroke, there are not many bbs, all the details are taken care of, and the time span is not bad. You don't know what the protagonist has experienced in the past three years.
For this kind of situation, it can be rounded up no matter what the author says. After all, this is his book.
That's all, let me say a word about the construction site! I don't think I'm exaggerating.
I believe that book friends who come from old books know what kind of person I am. Except for the time when I was very busy in college, and the intermittent updates were not enough for three months, everything else is pretty normal.
I am not such a stubborn person. I have been writing for more than a year. Some people disagree, some leave silently, and some support me until the end.
As long as I can see and support genuine book friends, which post of mine has no explanation
If you have different values and worldviews, then naturally you can't be friends. As the saying goes, it's better to forget each other, hahaha, that's right.
Let's talk about this one! During the free period, I explained most of the "Author's Words", and even filled it up again and again for a period of time. I still remember a book friend teased me and said, can you understand so much without explaining so much? , with this time it is better to write the text.
I laughed, and continued to write "The Author's Words". It was put on the shelves, and I was busy, so I didn't write much.
It's over!
I only have one word for this: "Fuck!"
Before the dispute between Sakura Fubuki and Dan Ying, I asked the official, and only answered after confirmation.
From the very beginning, in order to block the mouth of the setting party and leave a way for myself, I have been saying that I will change the setting, and don't make a fuss about the official settings.
That is indeed to leave a way for myself, hehe.
I also pay attention to everyone's suggestions, right? The answer of "the author's words", the thanks in it, isn't it fake
Then let's talk about the world.
I have seen a lot of doujinshi, either ccg or kind, fight! It's boring to watch too much! boring!
I want to write something different and follow my own preferences, which has already been explained at the beginning. Otherwise, I wouldn't open a fanfiction about Honkai when the popularity of Honkai drops.
Those who were in the same period as me have all entered the high-quality goods, and the grades of this book are still poor, so it is meaningless to say these things.
As for the novel, I admit that there are some logical problems. It's my fault. I didn't take care of it enough, but with my IQ, there is no good way, so let's enjoy it.
I can't do the rhythm of five chapters of the Great God's conflict, ten chapters of small climax, and twenty chapters of great climax. Most writers can't do that.
But I can barely have a small climax in more than twenty chapters, right? Write something that can make book lovers smile.
Talk about business.
Species, also known as ghouls, originated in the Middle East according to legend, and feed on humans. From a human point of view, they are out-and-out evil monsters.
They are not people! Most of my texts are replaced by "it".
To put it bluntly, if the ghouls portrayed in Tokyo Species were all the ugly monsters in the legend, then almost no one would say "it's the world's fault", and human beings would be absolutely just! Because they are destroying monsters!
But in Tokyo Zhongli, each of them looks handsome or beautiful, no different from people.
Then as soon as the story is rendered, it naturally becomes "It's all the world's fault."
It feels wrong, you touch your chest and ask yourself, is this right? If Zhong is really ugly, even if there is a story, is it still the fault of the world
People, focusing on appearance, I think I can see it thoroughly. Don't talk to me about your connotation, you don't even look good on the outside, who will understand your connotation? Do you really think you are Ma Yun's daddy
Right, after all, I am ugly, and I have a say in this aspect.
Then, I read in this chapter that there are disagreements.
There is human supremacy, and there is also a kind of last resort, which is the fault of the world.
To be honest, at first I wanted to completely kill the species with biochemical weapons. Don't play tricks here! It's really easy!
If you throw a person on earth into another world, he may die soon, because strange germs can easily destroy the immune system in the human body.
Maybe aliens come to our earth, and a cold can kill them.
Am I right about this? I don't know much about the squeak of a creature (funny)
Kind of, alas, let’s just do that, don’t make RC so amazing, it’s because they are making the world superficial. If it is in reality, turn them all into experiments in minutes.
Go on!
God on behalf of the world! Elegant and intellectual purple-haired beauty! In fact, it is a giant with a crazy appetite for humans!
In the Tokyo species, after it was acquired by Dr. Jia He, the miserable appearance, my mother, is more cruel than the pig I said before, right
What about here at Yaeji? The treatment is so good, isn't it
There are many detailed descriptions in the text, and some book friends should be able to see that God Dai Lishi is actually looking forward to Yaeji's arrival.
Because her consciousness is not as vague as in the original book, but has always been in a normal state.
Let you be locked in a nutrition cabin all the time, and a person will come in after a few days. If you can't escape, do you want to talk to him more
Spoilers involved below.
For the sake of balance and refreshment plus personal selfishness, Shindai Rishi is likely to suffer from Stockholm syndrome.
...
After deceiving the taste buds and making food, I have been trying to balance the two factions, or would it be more comfortable for me to write an extreme
Either all species will be wiped out, or a savior will come.
The outline is ok, but the card text is also stuck, and the card text is also stuck.
It's just that this balance point is hard to grasp, it's very fucking.
Back to business.
Did I do a live autopsy? Is the species human? Judging from the details of the conversation, Yaeji even gave Da Da an anesthetic!
My mother, this is heaven, isn't it! Combined with what a book friend said before, I exploded instantly!
Treating the half-cleaned priest so skimpily, and treating the beautiful big and beautiful Virgin Mary heart bursting
I say "lick" is not an exaggeration, right
For the other ones marked with *, I was mostly scolding some mother’s servers. Friends who read the book yesterday should know that the delay was so high that I posted a chapter until two hours later.
This, I admit is my fault! I apologize! sorry!
But then, commented in the trending thread this morning! I'm right!
I don't know, if you are idle and boring, you can find me in the group, and I can just post screenshots and tell stories! It doesn't matter if you take it as a funny incident. Writing novels, isn’t it just to make everyone laugh, in exchange for some subscription money
If it were a pirated version, I wouldn’t even spray it, but just delete the post and ban it, and take it away. Non-chiefs should be very clear about this.
It is precisely because this book friend made such a deep impression on me!
This is no longer hitting the muzzle of the gun, this is directly rushing into the barrel!
Man, my fault! I sincerely apologize! sorry!
But after that, I'm not wrong at all, don't tell me to calm down. This is completely different from the worldview and values, and it belongs to the category of irreconcilable things!
So many lovers broke up, not to mention netizens.
Living people and species, I can say that he took it out of context, but there is no need for that.
The irascible writer is so irritable for the time being, he can comment whatever he wants.
In the afternoon... It should be updated normally, and the hot post will be deleted after three days, so that's all.
goodbye.