I finished the first volume yesterday, Suzaku Glimpse Burning Heavenly Fire.
This inexplicable poem came to my mind for no apparent reason last year when FPX won the championship, and I wrote it down.
This first volume had many different beginnings, and it took half a year to finalize this one! Because this version of Xiang'er is the most handsome Xiang'er. Everything in the first volume also started when one day the sentence "Zhao lost its soil, so my name is Xiang" suddenly popped up in my mind. (The male protagonist’s name is also foreshadowed!)
Many readers said they did not understand the timeline at the end of the first volume. Here is an explanation. It probably goes something like this:
In his previous life, Ning practiced for a long time until he was sixteen, broke off the engagement, practiced for another twelve years, and was killed by his master. Then, time inexplicably went back to twelve years ago! When Ning Jiujiu woke up, he found himself in the body of "Ning Jiujiu", and the Ning Jiujiu mentioned in the opening chapter was still himself, but he did not meet the master's life trajectory.
In other words, after meeting his master, he will acquire the Tao and practice, and become a big boss without any hindrance. But in this life without meeting his master, he was just a little Taoist priest with mediocre qualifications. He was tricked and deceived by all kinds of traps, and was finally used as a scapegoat by his master Ning Qinshui.
These two kinds of life can be regarded as one of the infinite possibilities of time. He died at the age of 28 in one life, and then returned to the age of 16 in another life. But it's still the same world.
The first volume should be a relatively compact story overall. If you read it again, you should find some interesting little details, such as the door to the courtyard that was left open by the junior sister, and Tang Yu was not there when the junior sister went to get the medicine.
In the second volume (the title of the volume has not been decided yet), the protagonist will follow Lu Jianwen to the Yujian Tianzong to practice. It is considered ordinary and relatively routine. The sect's practice in one volume will be easier. The saddest thing is that I was too hasty to start the book. This book only has ideas and core settings, but no specific outline... So I had to make up the outline while writing, and I was a little afraid of collapse...
Spoilers and a question that readers are more concerned about: Are the master, empress and saint the same person? Answer: Three different people.
As for the question of whether the paper is finished...
My first draft was criticized by the teacher==The teacher asked me why my writing was so bad. Then I said that I was busy with other things on the first draft and was in a hurry. I must write the second draft well... My head hurts. I always feel so stressed if I don’t finish my thesis. In addition to spending money to find ghostwriters, do book friends have any useful tips... (Actually, this is the focus of my single chapter discussion on the first volume)
If you have any questions about the plot, you can ask them in the book review area so that you can answer spoilers, and I will reply! When it comes to core settings, it may be difficult to answer.
As for when the second update will be stabilized! When I finish writing my thesis and the outline is roughly complete, I will try to evolve into a second-shift beast!
If you like the first volume, you can recommend it to your friends.
that is it!
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(Thanks to today’s book friends Xuewu Yege (author of Emperor Domination of the World) and Ji Chanxi for their support!)
(Owed 0/10! I feel so disappointed when I see this denominator. The second volume is slowly starting to be paid back!)