Before writing, I have been struggling, thinking,
Ah, if you don’t have a testimonial, you can dove. I always feel tired to write. After all, it’s not good to write a summary.
It’s okay for Kawen, but Kawen’s speech is too sad
But in the end I wrote it like this. I always feel that I have been sticking to it for a long time. It’s not good if I don’t write it.
So let's talk about this volume, not counting the tenth volume of the extra volume,
From the end of July last year to the present, Kalaikaqu has finally finished writing
It took more than half a year, 182 chapters, it is really a slow update
It may be the residual influence of the European volume. After writing that volume with all my strength and challenging myself to go online, I feel a sense of exhaustion after the passion.
There is nothing in the mind,
I can’t remember what I was thinking before writing this volume. I flipped through the outline of the notes,
I just drew the timeline, where is the plot in the green rate, and what is missing in the overall situation
Organized the growth progress of Xiaran,
Then I decided to write this volume, which can be regarded as a plot advancement that fills in the foreshadowing of the day-to-day.
I wrote about Fangran's life after returning to daily life, how the changes after growing up are different from before,
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The structure of this volume, the general paragraph structure is,
night palace
night game
Linfu District,
Summer Yao - Template Day,
Tang Bing - Photo
Osfia-Letter
Fang Xiaoran-ktv
Fire card - cooking
Water to Heart-A date on a rest day
Night Crow - push to
little queen/queen
the first half of midnight/the second half of midnight
end-of-semester exams
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There are thirteen paragraphs in total, and each paragraph has its own meaning,
While writing the main idea clearly, insert vivid and interesting descriptions as much as possible, and interesting daily development without digressing,
After all, no one likes a plot that hasn't let up after a big battle, right
Then starting from the Linfu block, I also used intermissions as endings, some for transition, some for conclusion, in short, most of them are like partitions
Let the paragraph structure of this volume be clearer
I really did my best to finish writing this volume.
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As for the subject of this volume,
The title of the volume and the epilogue have been clearly written
Probably Fangran experienced the adventure in Europe, and after growing up to recognize his desires, the feeling gradually precipitated and fermented in his daily life
If every scene has a good look,
It should be clear already, from high-altitude cheering, diary recall, fire rescue, secretly assisting the anti-narcotics police, incomplete awakening of fire cards, dating and blocking cars, qualification scenes,
In the end, chasing after the night wind, this line can't be clear anymore
In order to clarify these, the main line of the inter-act can develop logically, so that the day-to-day life of the section to which each inter-act belongs can be smoothly developed into the inter-act.
For example, Linfu is very happy to cheer at the sky, and only accepts the mission when he has a letter from Osphia, and he is bored and learns to cook, master the heat and suddenly awakens the fire card.
In order to balance the daily life and the intermission, the connection between the two is designed, while taking into account the fun and not digressing
I'm really racking my brains
After all, you can’t write about things that have nothing to do with the intermission, the sense of fragmentation is too strong,
In this volume, what I want to eliminate is the sense of separation between Fangran's daily side and night battle side
So with him, even during the daytime, he will be serious and handsome occasionally.
Before this volume, he may be the Night Crow, he may be the Demon King, but after this volume,
He is just a participant - Fangran
As the preface said, he became the person he wanted to be in the night wind
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Others, I think about what else to say in this volume, let’s talk about regrets and shortcomings
the daily part,
In the daily life of this volume, to be honest, I always feel that there is something like an 'essence',
Maybe every part of daily life is quite interesting.
But I think the most interesting, memorable and hilarious sand sculpture daily plot is missing.
For example, the shaved ice and hot springs in the capital, and the wandering in London in the European roll,
However, it is also trapped by the main plot. This book is written at this stage,
Many times, I can no longer let my temper run amok. I must clearly serve the whole book's context and plot development. Is it because I can't write as happily as before
But anyway, I don't have that kind of inspiration, just a little bit of illusory regret
And without affecting the development of the main line structure, there are some interesting daily routines that have ideas but have not been written,
That's a real pity
To give some examples, the wrong use of Jinjinou ps4 fighting game and xx kuro cards, such as substitute cards, sound cards, etc.,
Of course, there is also the plot of the bathroom accident, the daily life of a pile of sand sculptures in gourds, the daily life of playing board games with the members of the hut, which is like a double 6, and pretending to be Santa Claus and giving gifts together at Christmas,
And the interesting daily life in the middle of the night (but I really can’t think of this one)
These are really no place to put them
As for the very line,
It is a pity that in this volume, I failed to write a particularly big and special climax event,
At the end of the task list, I originally wanted to arrange a relatively large task for Fangran, such as assisting the armed police in secret operations, or solving a huge crisis on campus.
Anyway, it's a bigger story.
But still limited by the plot, I could only write a simple plot of stopping a car after a date,
It makes me regret to think whether it would be better to write such a plot or something...
Well, maybe it’s not limited by the plot, it’s just that I’m too cavalier, and the inspiration and enthusiasm are not enough to get rid of this limitation, and restructure a better plot context
As for other regrets, Ziye
Before writing Midnight, book friends who still remember may see how flustered I am, how flustered I am, and there is no score in my mind.
Although the length is not short, I still feel that I have not written the characteristics of Midnight
In that independent space, the vastness and secret-like magnificence of the entire Xianshan mountain range did not feel well expressed, perhaps because there were too few locations.
The part about Fangran's practice, to be honest, I always feel that something is missing.
What is missing, I can’t think of it, forget it, don’t think about it, it’s too late to think about it after I’ve finished writing
The last regret of the Midnight period was the fairy, just like not being able to express the Midnight Fairy Mountain well,
I feel like I haven't shown the level of a fairy
Alas, but it’s true, let’s not mention the level of writing and writing, he only appeared this time in total, and it seems that no matter how hard I think about the rhetoric in the two chapters, it seems difficult to be effective.
But during that time, I couldn't figure out that the description of the artistic conception of leaving the world was true.
As for the queen, I have no regrets. I tried my best, and I feel quite satisfied.
And the most regrettable thing is,
In the daily part, there is no interaction with the members of the night bureau, which makes me very regretful
Although it's Fangran's return to daily life, I don't want to feel like all the members of the night game go offline collectively, but still, still
A cliché, limited by the plot, limited by my lack of inspiration and enthusiasm,
failed to add them to the daily development of those several paragraphs,
But in fact, I thought about it again, like the young master who mentioned in the special chapter gave Fangran tickets, or Mucheng went to the hut to get food, get special coupons,
It can also be an alchemy envoy or Uncle Lime, in short, it is some interesting interactions,
But why I can’t write it is because it’s too difficult. The hut and the night game are two circles, and the interaction is equivalent to opening a new area (understanding the spirit).
The difficulty is too great, and the level of inspiration I wrote this volume is not enough to complete,
Of course, a simple interlude is definitely okay. I recalled it before I wrote it out, but the daily schedule of that paragraph is full, and there is no way to insert a plot that is equivalent to a new start.
After all, it is still limited by the plot structure
The night battle has already been written to the tenth volume, and the plot is about two-thirds over (maybe, I haven’t considered how long the third part will be written)
Hey, it has already reached more than 2,000 words
Do it, if only the usual code words can be so simple
No need to consider the sentence structure, length, expression, wording, environment, psychology, it is so easy to write out the words in the vernacular
Think about what else to say, it seems that there is nothing
In short, this volume is a volume of various clues advancing, foreshadowing interspersed, and growth and precipitation.
It is the most neatly structured volume among all the volumes I have written.
It is a volume in which Fangran regains his wish from the end of his adventure and prepares to start again
I don't know if you are satisfied
The next volume is the story of North America, well, you ask me what state I am now,
That is,
Panic to death ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!
Damn, my mind is blank!
Can't think of a cool, funny, catchy climax!
Ha, really, the enthusiasm for inspiration has subsided, and it is not as good as before.
The root cause is still the old-fashioned problem of my life. As for the specific problem you ask,
Simply put,
Stuck in the house all day, only writing novels in life, I don’t want to waste my youth by my parents, but I don’t know where to go when I leave home.
No friends, no date, no social interaction, no entertainment
Asking for leave now is just to let me breathe, it can't make me happy at all
I am no longer a child who can feel happy playing games
The more I grow up, the more I realize that sometimes it is actually very difficult to make myself happy.
Fuck, how do I write the North American volume, I’m in a panic right now