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Chapter 607: Let me help you improve the script

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Daoist Tianyazi felt that he could mention this young man who wrote the script a little.

"Cough." So the Taoist head coughed and said, "This little friend, that, don't you realize that the settings of bronze, silver, and gold are a little too playful?"

Gao Moumou was taken aback. He had been standing in the shade of the villa for a long time, but he didn't even realize that there was someone standing beside him!

As soon as he turned his head, he saw a white-haired Taoist with a childlike face. Except for the slight wrinkles at the corners of his eyes, there were no traces of time on his face.

This old man is so well maintained!

Moreover, this white-haired Taoist has a good face, and the first impression is particularly good. At first sight of him, people will subconsciously feel that he is reliable and close to people.

This is Tianya Zi Daochang's natural aura of kindness, the ability to make strangers have +50 favorability to him!

It is precisely because of this strange affinity that Daoist Tianya Zi has been finding young cultivators constantly and constantly over the past three hundred years. Sell your skills!

Now, because of this cordial aura, Gao felt that the Taoist priest was very good at a glance.

If that's the case, it's okay to listen to the Taoist priest's opinion!

"Hello, Taoist priest." Gao Moumou, in front of other Taoist priests, set the cultivators to three levels of bronze, silver, and gold. Would it be a bit strange? However, he's making a movie, and he's not trying to educate people about popular science. As long as the setting is interesting, the rest doesn't matter.

"Although I know that little friend, you are going to write a script for a movie... I'm sorry little friend, I have been listening to you talking to yourself just now, so I have a general idea." The white-haired Taoist arched at Gao Moumou. Hands over, said.

"It doesn't matter, Daoist priest. Besides, what I wrote just now is just a setting." Gao Moumou smiled lightly and said: "The Daoist priest thinks, how should I set the level of monks?"

Daoist Tianyazi continued: "At least it can't be too casual. I feel that the first, second, third, fourth and so on are very good!"

Gao Moumou: "..."

Not as good as my bronze, silver, and gold, and at most platinum, diamonds, masters, and kings.

"Can't you?" Taoist Tianyazi could see from Gao Moumou's expression that his proposal was scumbag and completely unacceptable.

Gao Moumou nodded sincerely: "The first and second grades will remind me of the niche system, the first grade, the second grade and the third grade, and so on."

Daoist Tianyazi: "..."

After a while, the Taoist priest gritted his teeth and said, "Then change to the finished product. First-grade, second-grade, third-grade, is this okay?"

Gao Moumou glanced at the Taoist priest silently. In addition to numerical grades, couldn't the Taoist priest think of a more distinctive concept of hierarchy

But that's all, first-grade, second-grade, third-grade, etc., also write it down.

At that time, let Shuhang and Miss Yu Jiaojiao discuss together whether they want the metal series grade or the digital series grade.

So, Gao Moumou recorded the setting of 'grade' on his notebook.

Daoist Tianya Zi was immediately satisfied, as long as the young man changed the setting of the cultivation level, his goal would be achieved.

Logically speaking, Daoist Tianya Zi, who has achieved his goal, should retire when he succeeds.

But I don't know why... Before I knew it, Daoist Tianya Zi started talking to Gao about the plot of the story.

Thinking back on it, Tian Yazi himself felt incredible!

Obviously, he just wanted to point out the concept of 'comprehension level' set by this young man.

But for some reason, he felt that the young man in front of him was very talkative. When the two chatted, they talked about how to write the plot.

Tian Yazi has never written a story, but he has a rich life experience!

Rich life experience, as long as a little revealed, can make Gao get a lot of inspiration.

for example…

Tian Yazi: "I just saw that when my little friend was writing the setting, did he want to write a touching story? And the protagonist must be so miserable that one can't help but feel sympathy?"

"Exactly, about making the protagonist more miserable, what advice does the Taoist priest have?" He is experienced and has a unique vision, and every time he gives him more inspiration.

"Actually, when I heard the story of your protagonist's 'first love, senior sister marrying someone else', I just remembered a long time ago, a fellow Taoist from a sect next door to me. His experience is very impressive." Tianya The child sighed deeply, recalling what happened back then.

Once people get older, they especially like 'thinking about the past'.

"Back then, a fellow Taoist from the sect next door to me was very similar to the protagonist in your story, Xiaoyou. He had a younger sister who was in love with each other, and the two had been in love for more than ten years. But suddenly there was One day, under the arrangement of the elders, the younger sister is going to marry another man. Moreover, the wedding will be held a few days later."

"At that time, the younger sister said something to the fellow Taoist: On the day of my big wedding, you come to find me. As long as you come, I will give up everything and worship with you."

"However, two days before my sister's wedding, my fellow Taoist rushed to the wedding venue, ready to do everything to stop the wedding of my sister! However, on the way, he encountered a riotous... beast , and then he was seriously injured by the beast and was in a coma for several days. When he finally recovered and went to find his junior sister, the junior sister had already married another man. "

At this point, Tian Yazi sighed that if the 'monstrous beast' was a conspiracy back then, it would be fine, but then he went to check on the fellow Taoist once, and the appearance of the riotous beast was really just a coincidence.

Only, God will make people ah.

After sighing, Tianya Zidao said: "I was thinking, you can modify this paragraph and substitute it into the senior sister in your script."

"Great, great. In this way, when the male protagonist lost his senior sister because of an accident, the heart-piercing remorse and the sadness of the reverse current of the Lushan Waterfall will definitely make many people cry. ." Gao Mou wrote quickly and quickly recorded in the notebook.

Daoist Tianya Zi nodded with a smile, and then added: "In addition, I feel that since the protagonist's sadness is to be turned into a force of revenge, the level of sadness is not enough if the senior sister and his wife die. The pattern of grief and anger is too small. Xiaoyou can be a little more aggressive, and directly let the entire sect of the protagonist be wiped out by the 'evil mysterious force', so as to stimulate the grief and anger of the protagonist to the greatest extent! In this way, the plot is not limited to The children of the small family love, hate, and hate, and they are suddenly promoted to the atmosphere of the family and the country! The pattern has improved a lot."

"What the Taoist said was great." Gao Moumou felt that he had met a good teacher and a good friend, how could a dead love be compared to the whole dead family

Daoist Tianyazi continued to smile slightly: "Actually, we can also set a disease of 'hemoptysis' for the protagonist. When the sadness is extreme, a slight cough is red blood. It can even arouse the sympathy of the audience."

"Excellent!" Gao Moumou quickly recorded it.

In this way, Gao Moumou and Daoist Tianya Zi went further and further on the topic of 'abuse of the master', and there was no turning back at all.

When Song Shuhang and Yu Jiaojiao returned to the villa, they saw the white-haired Taoist priest and Gao Moumou chatting happily under the scorching sun.

This picture is just hell.

Yu Jiaojiao said in shock, "No, I thought Chuan Gong Kuang let you go, but I didn't expect him to be so persistent, and he kept coming to my house. This is just waiting for the rabbit."

As expected of the 'Gong Chuan madness' in the biography, it is not so easy to deal with. According to the fact, all the young monks who are favored by the chuan mad have accepted the ' Chuan Gong ' of the chuan mad.

Could it be that Song Shuhang could not escape this disaster in the end

"Should we escape back to the villa?" Song Shuhang asked.

But it was too late. Tian Yazi, the white-haired Taoist leader in front of him, had already sensed Song Shuhang and Yu Jiaojiao. He turned his head and smiled slightly at the two of them.

That smile, for Shuhang and Yu Jiaojiao, is definitely a 'destroy the city and the country', because people in the city and the country will be frightened by this smile...

Tian Yazi smiled and bowed to Song Shuhang: "Little brother, we meet again."

Song Shuhang smiled bitterly and returned a salute: "Daoist, you are so persistent."

"Cough, in fact, Lao Dao is not that persistent." Tian Yazi blushed and explained: "Actually, Lao Dao was entrusted by others to find a little friend... Huh?"

In the middle of the conversation, Tian Yazi saw the big bag that Song Shuhang was carrying. There are a lot of meat dumplings in it.

This smell is undoubtedly the Roujiamo made by Immortal Fairy Bie Xue.

This little fellow Taoist went to the fish head shop to buy Roujiamo

Then has he met Immortal Fairy Bie Xue

Gao Moumou asked suspiciously, "Shuhang, do you know this Taoist priest?"

Song Shuhang nodded and sighed: "In the morning, I went out to pick up a courier, and wanted to buy some food for you on the way. Then I met this Taoist priest on the way."

Then, Shuhang asked Tian Yazi again, "The Taoist priest was entrusted by someone just now? Who is looking for me?"

Tian Yazi looked at the big bag in Shuhang's hand and smiled mysteriously.

The person who entrusted me to find you has already met with you.

When Daoist Tianyazi was about to do this, suddenly, as if he had been hit by something, the whole person suddenly flew out and was hit nearly ten meters away!

Along the way, a young sapling was also broken.

Painful groans came from the priest.

what happened

Song Shuhang blinked, why was the Taoist priest suddenly knocked away? Who is sneaking in the dark

Gao Moumou was confused, flying out so exaggeratedly, was it hit by a ten-ton truck? However, he didn't see anything hitting the white-haired Daoist. (To be continued.)