It's the end of the month again, so I'll summarize as usual. First, let's talk about the update. It's 200,000 words, 60,000 words less than last month. I'm ashamed. I was really unwell for a few days in the middle of this month. And if I had kept writing 8,000 words, it would have felt bland and boring.
I still can't guarantee that February will be more than January, because every day it will be more or less, it still depends on the status. This is also the reason why I dare not ask for rewards, because I really can't do anything.
The main reason is that my body really can't take it. Fortunately, with everyone's support in the area of anti-theft, the pressure has been reduced a lot. I don't have to stay up late, and I'm half alive.
Then there is the plot. When I first read the book, I thought they were all minor problems, but after writing it down, I found that I had missed a part, which led to a bigger problem - the character setting.
Bai Wu, Wujiu, Lin Wurou, Yin Shuang, and Liu Chengzi are considered to be well-established characters, and Yan Jiu is also quite decent. However, Shang Xiaoyi, Bai Xiaoyu, Qin Lin, and Wang Shi are too thin.
Many book friends have mentioned this problem. In fact, I had noticed it when I had written 300,000 words, but why didn’t I correct it after 800,000 words
It's just that there's really no room for them to develop in the later plots. I wanted to finish telling some stories too much, so Wang Shi, Shang Xiaoyi, and Bai Xiaoyu, who I wanted to portray seriously in the early days... didn't have the chance to appear and be written about in detail.
In this regard, I feel sorry for the readers, because I have not presented a good picture of the world. It is a bit biased. Of course, the story is still long, and it can be corrected slowly later. There is still a chance to portray these characters through some methods other than the copy.
In short, I still have a lot to learn, and I will try my best to write the sequel.
Finally, I will not keep negative reviews from some book friends. First, any comments you give me, in order not to affect other readers, I will delete the negative reviews directly. But I do not reject readers' opinions, I suggest you send them private messages.
Secondly... I would also like to say this to some of my fellow readers who like to give advice. I suggest that you upgrade your title to apprentice before teaching me how to do things. Otherwise, I am a very realistic person~
I wish you all good health and happiness in February and every month that follows.