Fantasy System

Chapter 132: Shocked Yinglili

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Mu Fan watched the discussion in the group with interest. Gradually, some of the authors in the group thought that what Mu Fan had written must be a scumbag. After all, at such a speed of coding, it was obvious that he had not thought carefully about the plot, and even more so Needless to say, the quality of the work is guaranteed.

As soon as this point of view came out, many people expressed their agreement, and some even directly posted in the group @ 木色仙成.

In response to this, Mu Fan just smiled faintly and didn't bother to pay attention to these public opinions. After all, it is common for authors to be jealous of others when they have nothing to do. As long as he appears in there and says a word, he will definitely become the target of attacks by this group of authors. It would be better to Say nothing and treat their talk as nothing.

When the group was full of public opinions, Mu Fan was surprised to find that a familiar name appeared in the group. He was a famous author who appeared on the light novel sales list, called "Shidong Guoguang".

"Don't deny others because you can't do it yourself. Since Teacher Mu Shi Fanchen can write one hundred thousand words, it means that Mu Shi Fanchen has great control over his own works."

Seeing Shitong Guoguang speaking for him, Mu Fan was slightly startled. The type of light novels written by this person tended to be food articles, such as making some snack-type food articles. They were also very popular in the light novel world, but he did not expect that this person would actually Will stand up and speak for someone I have never met.

This made me take another high look at this writer's character.

Shido Kunimitsu is obviously very influential among these light novel writers. When he said this, the crowd immediately became quiet.

But the good times didn't last long, and it didn't take long before someone came out to refute: "Teacher Shitong, what is your coding speed?"

After waiting for a while, the response about Shido Kunimitsu came from the group: "About fifteen thousand words a day."

"Even Shido Kunimitsu's teacher can only do 15,000 words a day. Mu Shimochen is just a newcomer. How can he be as good as you and Yamada Youjing? Then you can be sure that his "Accelerated World" must be a masterpiece." This is a shoddy work, I really didn’t expect this kind of work to be signed by Dengeki Bunko.”

After seeing the response in the group, Mu Fan closed the group. He didn't care about everyone's comments. When the day Accelerated World starts selling, all the comments will disappear.

I turned off the computer and started to sleep. Although I slept for a while, a night of cultivating could not replenish my energy in three or four hours.

Mu Fan came to the food department in a daze the next day with two dark circles under his eyes. He decided to stay busy here for a while and make sure to sleep until school was over when he returned to class.

As for the food club at noon, I just told Asuna that the club activities will be temporarily canceled today.

However, when he just arrived at the gourmet food department, he found that the door of the gourmet food department had been opened. He thought it was Asuna inside, but he did not expect that it was Eiri, the book illustrator of the same class.

"You're finally here!" Ying Lili said through gritted teeth when she saw Mu Fan walking in.

"Starburst Ponytail-san, why are you here? Are you a classmate?"

Mu Fan put his schoolbag on the table and looked at Ying Lili in shock.

"Call me my name, and you didn't see me holding Asuna's key. What kind of attitude is this?"

Listening to Mu Fan's words, Ying Lili raised the key to the food department in her hand towards Mu Fan and said unhappily: "Asuna has something to do today, so she asked me to come here to help. From the looks of it, you must have been practicing immortality again last night. ? Is part of the game text already written

"The main plot has been completely written."

Mu Fan took out the text he printed out from his backpack and placed it on the table. He pushed it to Ying Lili and said, "Let's see if I can play your game."

"You wrote so much in one night? Are you a freak?"

Yinglili picked up the thick text on the table and couldn't help but murmured in surprise.

"Whatever you say, just look. I'll take a nap first and someone will call me."

Mu Fan was too tired to argue with Yinglili now. When he saw Yinglili picked up the text of the game, he lay down on the table in the food department and fell asleep.

"Hmph, even if you write something very late in your cultivation, I won't use it if it's not up to standard!"

Seeing Mu Fan who ignored her and fell asleep on the table, Yinglili snorted in dissatisfaction, then took out her black-rimmed glasses from her pocket and put them on.

In fact, she has always been nearsighted and only wore contact lenses, but she forgot to bring them today. Fortunately, she had ordinary glasses as a spare, and she could also start reading the text of the game made by Mu Fan.

... ...

Time passed quickly, and no one came to the food department. However, Mu Fan, who was enjoying his sleep, suddenly felt his arm being pulled by someone. He raised his head and was surprised to find Ying Lili holding the text in her hand. His eyes were filled with anger and he stared at himself.

"What's wrong, classmate Ponytail Zhan?" Mu Fan asked, squinting his eyes.

Now Mu Fan finally understands why Gabrielle looks like this every day. It turns out that she stays up until early in the morning every day. I really don't know how she takes care of herself. She has dark circles all over her eyes, but she is still so cute.

Are girls and boys different

"Call me Sawamura-san!"

Ying Lili rolled her eyes at Mu Fan, put the text in front of Mu Fan, and said angrily with a shy blush on her face: "You have the nerve to say, what kind of text are you writing?"

""The Sky of Destiny"" Mu Fan lay on the table and pointed at the title above.

"Is this "The Sky of Fate"? At least give an introduction!"

Yinglili said angrily. She originally thought from the title that this was a game about the fate of two people, but she didn't expect to find out after reading it that her previous idea was completely wrong.

This story overturned all her previous ethical concepts.

Because this story tells the story of a male protagonist named Yu Hino whose parents both died, and brought his younger sister Qiong to a pastoral town far away from the city, and began a life of taking care of his younger sister and going to school every day.

It started off well in the early stages, with school friends and childhood sweethearts, but the final plot development turned out to be that he fell in love with his sister. Although it seemed like a forbidden love, the plot of a brother and sister that subverted the concept of reality made her both heartbroken and worried. expect.

Especially Qiong Shen loves You, and the conversation between the two in the lake moved her extremely. On the one hand, there is deep love for each other, and on the other hand, there are social ethics, various pressures, and they want to get close to each other, but they are invisible. Pulling away, the feeling of wanting to give up but not being able to let go made her worried.

When she saw that the two finally decided to live together abroad, her heart relaxed.

But having said that, although this story is good, can it really win the first place in the game

Seeing Ying Lili's suspicious look, Mu Fan smiled lightly.

So, girl, you still underestimate the obsession of the girls in the two-dimensional story.

[I ask for recommendation votes every day. Today’s recommendation votes are enough for 500. I will make up for the additional 500 recommendation votes in three updates tomorrow or the day after tomorrow.]