"The story is about an author who once wrote comic plots, and then transformed into a light novel writer. Although he started to write light novels and had some success, he failed later and was taken in by his companions. Finally, he helped his companions get a The first place ranking, did you understand the direction of your writing? "
In the spacious and bright living room, Eirili was sitting on the sofa with a manuscript in her hand. She looked at Kasumigaoka Shiyu with contempt and asked: "Are you sure this is not a true reflection of your heart?"
Kasumigaoka Shiu flipped her long hair, stood in front of Eiri, and said calmly: "Only someone with a brain circuit like yours, Sawamura, would think that it is a reflection of my heart. The plot of anime is different from reality. Don't you think so?" You look just like Ai Li, are you really the Ai Li who is pampered by her father all day long? "
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Eiri slapped the table angrily and stood up, snorting dissatisfiedly: "I thought you Kasumi Shiko would write what kind of plot, but I didn't expect it to be such a simple plot? How could such a plot be comparable to Qian Ju? Cun Zheng’s short story?”
"It's better than someone who can't even write, right?" Kasumigaoka Shiyu retorted unhappily.
"After all, I have done some research on original plots. I can write a plot like yours!" Ying Lili also raised her waist in displeasure.
This time, Mu Fan did not refute Ying Lili. Instead, he put down the manuscript and said seriously: "Indeed, it seems that it is difficult to win Qianju Village Zheng with a plot like this."
If there are plots that can be made into short comics, Mu Fan has many in his memory. For example, "Your Name" and "The Shape of Sound" in his previous life were very good plots, but he did not choose to write them this time. out these plots. "
Because copying books does not necessarily mean you will always be number one. The only way is to strengthen yourself.
It is true that in that world, perhaps Makoto Shinkai and Hayao Miyazaki's scripts were almost impeccable, and watching them made people want to cry and be deeply moved. However, it cannot be said that they were very good. In such a world, In the parallel world, no one can surpass him.
Not to mention others, the bald Wu Ke from the B1 production team they once knew could write a good script.
Just like "Accelerate the World" and "Blessings for a Better World" that Mu Fan copied from books, although the sales are good, there are still some difficulties in surpassing the Qianshou Village Zheng.
Perhaps it is not impossible for Senjumura Sei to write a short story in such a world that will become a script that surpasses Makoto Shinkai's.
But Kasumigaoka Shiyu has really reached this point with her own talent. If anything, the senior has just entered college, and she has great strength and potential in writing novels.
That's why Mu Fan decided that he would not participate in any revisions of the comic script, and the senior sister would be responsible for the entire plot alone.
After saying that, Mu Fan smiled again and added: "I guess this is not the only plot of senior's comics, right?"
Kasumigaoka Shiyu's eyes lit up, and she came close to Mu Fan. She narrowed her narrow beautiful eyes and let her hair hang down on her shoulders. She stared into Mu Fan's eyes and chuckled: "You are indeed a junior, you can see that." Yes, yes, this is just an outline. The real plot needs to be written through the filling in the outline. The simplicity of short stories is that they don’t need so many subplots to fill in. They only need to integrate the main line and use profound writing and sentences to make people read. Just take a moment to remember it.”
The gentle and elegant voice shook Mu Fan's spirit. He raised his head and saw the face of his senior sister leaning towards him. Mu Fan found that the senior sister's face was very delicate. The smooth face did not contain a trace of impurities. It was fresh, refined and extremely beautiful. .
Because the senior sister was looking down at her sitting on the chair, a few strands of soft hair happened to fall on the tip of Mu Fan's nose. The fragrance of the girl mixed in the hair made Mu Fan's heart beat faster. Standing up, he lowered his head with a blush on his face, but happened to see the peaks of the two senior sisters in tight clothes. Even under the cover of underwear, from a bird's eye view, you could still see the perfect outline of the snow-white peaks. color.
Seeing that Mu Fan remained silent for a long time, Kasumigaoka Shiyu blinked in shock and lowered his head. Only then did he realize what Mu Fan had just seen. A blush appeared on his pretty face, and he said angrily: "Junior, Junior Brother, Lustful..."
Hearing this, Mu Fan coughed awkwardly. To be honest, what happened just now was completely force majeure, but he had seen it anyway. No matter how much he explained, he could not change this fact. He could only smile apologetically and said: The topic said: "Senior, we only have four days left, so let's talk about the new plot! If this short comic wins first place, there is a chance it will be made into a movie."
Eiriri, who was a little displeased when she saw Kasumigaoka Shiu approaching Mu Fan, immediately complied and urged: "That's right, it's better to tell us the plot quickly."
Seeing that Mu Fan was unwilling to continue the topic just now, Kasumigaoka Shiyu could only take out another pile of printed manuscripts from the cabinet and put them on the table: "This is the entire plot of the short light novel comic."
Since time was tight, Mu Fan and Ying Lili read it carefully.
In Mu Fan's opinion, the entire plot is much more exciting than the outline. After all, the outline only outlines the plot. The same outline will be written in two completely different styles in the hands of a great author and in the hands of an ordinary author. and charm, this is the gap between authors.
Kasumigaoka Shiha is about the text author [Ichinose Rain] who submitted a text to a comic festival with a boy and a girl [Muho] and [Riko] who grew up together. In the end, he failed in the finals of the comic festival and came in second place. A story that ends famously.
Because of the failure, online manga readers who originally had expectations for the trio saw unanimous discussions on the Internet that there was something wrong with the text of the novel. Ichinose Rain left them despite Muho and Riko's attempts to stay.
Half a month later, Ichinose Yu contributed to Dengeki Bunko and became the author of Dengeki Bunko. Although the first book had some success, because the expectations on the Internet were too high, she could not figure out how to write the second book. .
Helpless, she met her former companion again, hoping that she could return to the studio to write comics again, and told her that she had always believed in her text and had never resented her because of the last failure.
But Ichinose Yu has no plans to go back, and plans to use light novels to prove her talent and strength.
After finishing the first book, she kept looking for ways to write the second book. She looked at the online comments, sorted out the mistakes of the previous book, and wrote it in the way readers thought and the way others expected. She published a second book, but it failed in the end. All the readers who loved her changed from love to hate, and even the editor stopped paying attention to her.
Ichinose Yu's previous expectations for the second book suddenly fell from the highest point of expectation after being destroyed by readers, and turned into the biggest disappointment.
At this moment, she remembered her failure at the Comic Con Festival a few years ago and the ridicule on the Internet. Frustrated, she felt that all her writing skills had betrayed her, so she hid in her room for a few days and decided to jump into the river. To end his useless life, his companion happened to be looking for her at this moment. When he saw this scene, he jumped into the deep river desperately and rescued her.
What follows is a very inspirational plot. With the guidance and persuasion of his companions, as well as many side stories and happy stories, Ichinose Yu decided to help his companions fulfill their wishes and began to carefully write a short text. , because the Comics Festival was about to begin, Ichinose Yu's text, which he worked on for three days without sleep, was finally completed before the Comics Festival. The three of them worked together for another three days to finally complete the short comic.
And they also defeated the team that defeated them last time and won the first place. Ichinose Yu, who finally won the best text, told the interview about her original intention to win the first place in the comic festival, and what happened now. Only then did she understand the importance of her partners. With the company of her never-ending companions, she succeeded, because she was no longer alone. The whole story changed from the original depression to the mutual encouragement between companions. Inspirational story.
Moreover, when interviewing his male companion, the male companion said that the reason why he helped Ichinose Rain was because his relatives and friends who wanted to become a cartoonist when he was a child did not support him. Only his schoolmate Ichinose Rain continued to encourage him. It brought him to this point, and he also wanted to fulfill Ichinose Rain's ideal at this time.
Hearing this, Ichinose Yu was moved to tears, and finally plucked up the courage to confess her love to her male companion who had been helping her during the interview.
The male companion also extended his hand to her: "I have been in love with you since I was a child..."
In the end, the two people came together because of love, and with the color of love that people yearned for, the story ended...
"etc!"
After watching the whole plot, a dissatisfied voice suddenly came. Mu Fan and Kasumigaoka Utaha turned around, only to see Eriri "slap" the text on the table. She glared at Kasumigaoka Utaha with her teeth gritted, and said unhappily: "You are going too far with your YY. How can Ichinose Yu, who has always been causing trouble, get love among the three people in the studio? The [Li Zi] who has been silently helping Mu Fan and Ichinose Yu doesn't even have a few lines!"