Glancing at Eiri, Kasumigaoka Shiyu said disapprovingly: "Her character is one of obscurity and dedication. She does more and talks less. If she has too many lines, her spirit of selfless dedication cannot be reflected."
"Even so, she still likes [Mu Fan], so why does it end with her heartfelt blessing to Mu Fan?"
Ying Lili pointed to the character description above and wrote: "Also, what kind of appearance is this? The bangs of the twin tails are too long to cover the eyes and face. Can you tell me what kind of fresh and refined face this is? What's the scene? It’s okay if you don’t have a lot of lines, but you don’t want to show your face, aren’t you too shameless?”
Kasumigaoka Shiyu crossed her arms and said calmly: "In the plot of the novel, not showing your face can increase the mystery. Some supporting actresses will die after seeing the light."
Eiri said contemptuously: "Then why don't you design a hairstyle like this for Ichinose Yu? Let her be mysterious too!"
... ..
Listening to the quarrel between the two women, Mu Fan put down the text. Although this story seemed simple, it was filled with many special meanings.
And it is restored with Kasumigaoka Shiha's delicate writing style, and occasionally adds some slightly beautiful sentences, which makes it appear very poetic and has the realistic color of KyoAni in the previous life.
Especially the psychological description of how she ignored [Muho]'s persuasion to Ichinose Rain at the beginning, and how Ichinose Rain later refused to listen to Mufan's invitation. She was so eager to prove her talent in light novels that she decided to follow the readers' expectations. The mental attitude that writing in the right direction will lead to success.
In the end, when she suffered a blow, her attitude changed with the greater her expectations, the greater her disappointment. Mu Fan, who finally jumped down to save Ichinose Rain at all costs, said that he would continue walking with her. It brings tears to one's eyes.
Because Mu Fan helped Ichinose Rain because he had always remembered Ichinose Rain's help when he was a child, and Riko, who was selfless for love, had always loved Mu Fan silently, and finally understood Ichinose Rain and Mu Fan. Love, still unspoken, silently blessing their psychology.
Transforming this book from its original depressive nature into a passionate story of friendship and love.
If it were expressed through Eiri and his understanding of comics and storyboards, it would be enough to make people cry inadvertently.
"Senior sister, I feel like you should at least show Riko's face, because your book describes passersby as having a face, but Riko doesn't even have a face. As the female supporting character in the novel, it seems a bit too mysterious." Mu Fan also agreed.
Eiri immediately agreed and glared at Kasumigaoka Shiu: "That's right, why do I feel that you are targeting this supporting actress? Supporting actresses have no human rights!"
"Okay, let's change her into a blue-haired single ponytail."
Hearing Mu Fandu say this, and the comic festival was about to start, Kasumigaoka Shiyu could only agree. Anyway, changing a person's appearance would not have much impact on the plot of the book. After the three of them studied the character design, It was up to Mu Fan and Ying Lili to start drawing comics.
Since Kasumigaoka Shiyu had no talent for comics, she could only watch the two people's drawings, and occasionally bring tea and water to maintain Mu Fan and Eiri's mental state.
Seeing the hard-working Kasumigaoka Shiu, Eiri was very happy. She took this opportunity to open her mouth and call her senior sister.
"Please get me a drink."
"I'm hungry. I remember there is a supermarket near your house. I went to buy some French fries."
"Can you please stop standing next to Mu Fan and staring at him? It will disturb his painting."
Kasumigaoka Shiyu, who had just returned from outside with a bag of snacks, was a little annoyed when she heard Eirili's orders again. She stuffed a potato chip into her mouth and said coldly: "I advise you to put it in her mouth." If you waste my time on drawing comics, I won’t be able to spare you if you don’t make it to the comic festival.”
Looking at Kasumigaoka Shiyu's cold and pretty face with clenched teeth, Eirili recalled that there were only less than four days left. She understood the urgency of time and could only start painting with concentration again.
Mu Fan and Eiri were at Shiyu's house in Kasumigaoka for a whole day. However, they spent a lot of time researching the plot and characters. If they were rushing to finish the manuscript, it might be too late tonight. Mu Fan could only give Lily some time. I made a phone call and asked her to take care of Sagiri, and decided to stay with Eiri at Kasumigaoka Shiu's house tonight.
Mu Fan and Eiri, Kasumigaoka Shiu light novel authors and painters all have careers where they stay up late for a long time, so it's okay to stay up all night occasionally.
In the evening, Mu Fan prepared some simple dishes. After the three of them finished eating, they continued to write.
Just when it reached ten o'clock, Mu Fan and Ying Lili felt that the whole room seemed much quieter than during the day.
"Strange, where is senior sister?"
The continuous silence made Mu Fan feel a little strange. After thinking about this reason, he suddenly thought of the senior sister who had been serving him and Ying Lili. It seemed that the senior sister had not appeared with them for a long time.
Mu Fan turned around in surprise. As soon as he turned around, he saw his senior who was sleeping on the table. He was immediately confused about whether to laugh or cry.
It turned out that the senior sister fell asleep because she was too tired.
Mu Fan did not disturb the senior. Instead, he took off his coat and walked over and put it on her body. Normal people need to cover themselves with quilts when sleeping at night. It is just like lying on the table without covering anything. It is easy to sleep. If you catch a cold, if you wake up your senior sister, she will probably not be able to sleep. If you put some clothes on her, there will be no problem.
Seeing Mu Fan leave, Ying Lili turned around and saw Mu Fan put clothes on Kasumigaoka Shiyu. Ying Lili felt a little envious and said, "Mu Fan, you are still as gentle as before."
Mu Fan smiled faintly: "Senior sister has been hit by novels in the past seven days, so she didn't sleep well. In the past few days, she has been thinking about the plot of short stories. It may be because we live here that she can sleep peacefully. Let her sleep peacefully."
In fact, Mu Fan had already noticed that the senior sister was a little tired. After all, the dark circles under her eyes were getting heavier and heavier. Especially for the senior student who was naturally beautiful, once there was a slight blemish on her face, it could be seen at a glance.
It could be said that Mu Fan felt a lot more relieved that his senior sister could fall asleep like this.
Hearing Mu Fan's words, Ying Lili was stunned for a moment, muttering secretly in her heart: "Although her novel has been hit, I am a little envious of her at this moment..."
Since Ying Lili said this in her heart, Mu Fan did not hear it. The two of them were sitting at a table, Mu Fan was on the left and Ying Lili was drawing on the right facing each other.
Mu Fan and Ying Lili kept drawing until 1 a.m., because drawing comics is a laborious and mentally demanding job. Even if they stayed up all night today, they still would not have the energy to draw tomorrow. Mu Fan and Ying Lili could only draw at this time at the same time. Decided to take a rest and sleep until early tomorrow morning to continue working.
They made a bunk on the ground and fell asleep next to each other without paying much attention. The next day, Mu Fan woke up and moved his body, but felt that his body seemed to be restrained by something. When he opened his eyes, he happened to see the person facing him. Looking at her quiet pretty face.
At this time, Yinglili had untied her twin tails when she went to bed last night, and her long golden hair was spread over her shoulders. Combined with her soft and peaceful sleeping posture, she looked like a sleeping beauty, extremely sweet and pretty. .
I never expected that Yinglili could be so soft and beautiful sometimes.
Mu Fan couldn't help but laugh, and when he moved, he realized that Ying Lili had dishonestly kicked off the quilt when he was sleeping last night, and now she was hugging his body tightly like an octopus with eight claws.
Faced with Ying Lili's peaceful sleeping posture, Mu Fan really couldn't bear to disturb her, so he could only decide to wait for her to arrive, lie here and watch her quietly.
But Mu Fan's struggle just now has made Ying Lili's mind clear up a lot. When she opened her eyes, she happened to see Mu Fan's angular face. She felt that her arms and hands were holding Mu Fan, and her face suddenly became confused. famous.
"You're awake, Yinglili."
Seeing Ying Lili, a blush appeared on her fair face, and Mu Fan couldn't help but smile.
"kindness."
Yingli nodded shyly, and then quickly withdrew her hand, but there was a little deer in her heart. When she slept at home, there was a big bear on her big bed that she could hug. She didn't expect that she would get used to sleeping here. Xing treats Mu Fan as a pillow.
And it happened to be seen by Mu Fan!
What a shame!
But in fact, it was Yinglili who was thinking too much. Mu Fan was not aware of Yinglili's inner thoughts, so he stood up and said, "I accidentally bumped into you just now and disturbed your rest. It's still early, please go back to sleep." Yes, I will make some breakfast. After you and senior have finished it, we can continue working."
Seeing Mu Fan who offered to make breakfast and leave after saying that, Ying Lili felt warm in her heart and smiled sweetly.
Mu Fan is such a gentle boy!