"Qianshou Village Zheng actually gave up on his own initiative?"
Seeing Qian Shou Cun Zheng's serious expression, Mu Fan was slightly shocked.
To be able to make the genius light novel girl Sei Senjumura take the initiative to admit defeat is enough to prove how wonderful the script written by the senior sister is.
After the plot of "Transformation" was played, the entire venue was silent for about a minute before the judges recovered from the comic plot and pressed the scorer in their hands.
At the same time, five scores appeared one after another on the big screen.
91 points, 94 points, 96 points, 92 points, 97 points—
Seeing these scores, Mu Fan's heartbeat suddenly accelerated, because in his calculations, the average score of this work had surpassed Qian Shou Cun Zheng's script!
Because the rules of the competition are to remove the highest score and the lowest score and select the average score. Seeing the final result, the host’s voice became louder and he laughed: “I didn’t expect that the final work did not disappoint us all. Disappointed, excluding the highest score of 97 points and the lowest score of 91 points, the average score of "Transformation" is 94 points-"
"We would like to congratulate the short comic "Transformation" drawn by Kashiwagi Eri, Mugumo Morchen and the plot written by Kasumi Shiko for winning first place in this comic festival."
Hearing the voice announcing their victory, Mu Fan's heart became completely excited at this moment.
She is truly worthy of being a senior who has read countless classics and books. She has the potential to write a plot that also contains a profound meaning of life, which is why she directly won the first place in this competition!
"Very good!"
Yinglili on the side screamed even more excitedly, and when she saw Mu Fan turning around, she couldn't help but throw herself into Mu Fan's arms, and said excitedly: "Mu Fan, Mu Fan, our comic has finally won First place, it’s great that our efforts have not been in vain these days!”
As she spoke, Yinglili actually cried, rubbing her head against Mu Fan's chest, and her tears wet Mu Fan's clothes.
Mu Fan couldn't help but touch Ying Lili's hair with some distress.
These days, Yinglili has been working hard for her senior sister's affairs, and she hasn't even slept well these past few nights.
In fact, the success of the senior sister is not hers alone, but also depends on Eri's painting skills, which fully reveals the character, demeanor, and behavior of Ichinose Rain, making the character of Ichinose Rain more lifelike.
Only then did five beautiful looks of Ichinose Rain appear in everyone's memories.
From the plot point of view, the plot written by the senior sister is naturally impeccable, but the exquisite success of the comic must be attributed to Eri Riri.
As for him, he also plays a big role. One is as Eiri's assistant, and the other is that without his cooking, these two girls would have fainted from hunger. How could they write such a comic
Standing in front of her seat, looking at the score on the big screen that was two points higher than her script, Qianjumura Zheng smiled happily.
In fact, when seeing Kasumi Shiko write such a plot, Senjumura Zheng knew that she failed.
Although she has always been hailed as Dengeki Bunko's youngest genius and possesses Dengeki Bunko's greatest imagination and imagination, she is only a junior high school student, and there is still a long way to go for light novels in the future. It is impossible for her to write all of them at such an age. learned.
Although her understanding of long light novels is impeccable, short stories have always been her flaw compared to long plots. Her understanding of short story plots is not deep enough, which is why she lost to Kasumi Shiko.
But in any case, Kasumi Shiko's short story plots are more accomplished than hers. Senjumura Sei feels that if Kasumi Shiko can bravely overcome the difficulties she faces this time, she will definitely become her top-ranked novel in Dengeki Bunko in the future. enemy.
Of course, Qianju Cunzheng was not jealous of Kasumi Shiko, but was pleased, and hoped that Kasumigaoka Shiyu could get out of the predicament, return to Dengeki Bunko, and become friends with her.
The audience and cartoonists in the audience did not have any objections to the final result. On the contrary, they agreed very much.
Although the author belongs to Kasumi Shiko, no matter from which point of view, when comparing the plots of Senjumura Sei and Kasumi Shiko, they all tend to prefer Kasumi Shiko's story of the difficult life of a light novel writer with the simplest plot. .
He even wrote about their lives in the most straightforward way, telling them that only by persevering can they achieve happiness.
"By the way, is this script really written by Kasumi Shiko?"
"She is actually able to write such a good script. It seems we have to go back and read her "Metronome of Love" and "Guide to Love in Magic Academy" carefully."
"How could such a talented author make such a low-level mistake in 'The Magic Academy Love Guide'?"
After a moment of silence, the audience's comments spread throughout the venue.
They didn't understand the reason, and they didn't know why Kasumi Shiko, who had such high attainments in light novels, would write such a low-IQ plot, which was circulated on the Internet and was reviled by others.
At this time, the senior cartoonist just pushed up his glasses and said with a smile: "Maybe Xia Shizi encountered some difficulties some time ago. As a cartoonist, I can also understand the writer's mentality. Once the mentality is affected, the plot of the novel will also change." be affected accordingly.”
Hearing this, some viewers nodded in agreement. What the cartoonist said does make sense. Mentality can indeed affect the quality of a work.
If you have a good attitude, even if the beginning of this work is not exciting enough, the subsequent plot will still attract people.
Just one mistake by Kasumi Shiko caused such a serious phenomenon, making the audience who loved her writing "Transformation" feel a little sorry for such a talented high school student.
At this moment, a gentle female voice came from the corner: "I just took a picture of the story written by Kasumi Shiko. Let's all take out our mobile phones to forward the live broadcast of today's comic festival and clear up Kasumi Shiko's name?"
Hearing this voice, several audience members turned around and saw a beautiful girl sitting in the corner. The girl was wearing a simple beige dress, with long chestnut-colored hair hanging over her shoulders, twinkling under the lights of the venue. The crystal luster and a smile on the girl's pretty face without a trace of impurity made the audience stunned.
"This... this is not, formed..."
Recalling the eldest lady who occasionally appeared in the news, several people recognized the name of the girl in front of them and were about to exclaim. The girl blinked her amber eyes, took out her mobile phone, and said with a smile: "Let's help Xia Shi together. Please correct your name!”
... ...
Mu Fan and Ying Lili sitting in the front row did not know what was happening in the audience, but the host on the stage took the microphone and said with a smile: "I really want to thank the three teachers who wrote "Transformation" for bringing us such Beautiful story, it’s getting late, let’s all give warm applause to welcome Teacher Eri Kashiwagi, Teacher Mu Shi Fanchen, and Teacher Kasumi Shiko to the stage to receive the award.”
After the host finished speaking, there was a burst of warm applause from the audience. Everyone applauded the work "Transformation" from the bottom of their hearts, so the applause in the entire venue was as deafening as thunder.
Seeing the enthusiastic faces of the audience, the host announced that he had come on stage to receive the award. He had won the first place in the comic festival. At least he should go and receive a medal to take back with him so that he could face his senior sister. Mu Fan could only stand up. Come, look at Yinglili on the left: "Yinglili, let's go on stage."
Eiri pushed Mu Fan directly and said with a look of disgust: "I don't want it. Do you want everyone in the world to know that I am Eri Kashiwagi? Come on stage, remember not to look at me on stage, I I’m not with you!”
"Then you go back and walk by yourself, don't take my motorcycle!"
Mu Fan rolled his eyes at Ying Lili, who was worried about revealing his identity, and walked onto the stage alone.
Standing on the stage, thousands of eyes from the audience in the entire venue suddenly focused on him, and Mu Fan suddenly felt a little uncomfortable.
As an otaku, he is somewhat phobic about crowds. So many people and countless viewers in front of the TV were watching him at this moment, which made him feel nervous all of a sudden.
The host saw Mu Fan walking over, took the microphone and asked in surprise: "Are you Mr. Eri Kashiwagi?"
Mu Fan took the microphone: "No, I am Mu Shi Fanchen. As for Eri Kashiwagi... Neither she nor Teacher Xia Shizi came to the venue, so I can only accept the award this time."
Just in the middle of speaking, Mu Fan suddenly saw Ying Lili gritting her teeth and giving him a glare, and could only swallow back what she was about to say.
Well, Ying Lili didn't intend to expose her identity, so he had better not expose her, otherwise it wouldn't be fun if the young lady went berserk in front of her.
"Oh, that's how it is."
The host didn't ask any more questions, so he opened the box, handed the medal inside to Mu Fan, and asked with a smile: "Teacher Mu Shi Fanchen, I have long heard that you have written two classic light novels and are already a hot topic in the ACGN world. exists, and now it has won the Comics Festival. Is there anything you want to say?”
Can I say that now I just want to step down quickly
Can't you, the emcee who is watching my words, see that I am very nervous now
Mu Fan stood on the stage feeling helpless, but after thinking about it, he suddenly thought of his senior sister. He gritted his teeth and mustered up the courage to say seriously: "With the efforts of me, Eri Kashiwagi, and Kasumi Shiko, we can achieve this." I was moved from the bottom of my heart by winning the first place in this comic festival, because it proved that the efforts of the three of us were not in vain, and everyone recognized our success..."
After saying some polite words, Mu Fan suddenly changed the topic: "But... although it is rude to change the plot of someone else's comic, I still want to give the ending to this comic."
"ending?"
Hearing Mu Fan's words, the host was stunned for a moment, and the audience also let out a burst of exclamations.
The audience couldn't help but wonder, how does this well-known writer plan to modify the plot
The host was the first to take the microphone, looked at Mu Fan and asked the question that the audience wanted to ask: "In our opinion, the ending of this comic is already perfect. Teacher Mu Shi Fanchen is one of the three writers who co-created the comic. One, what kind of ending are you going to give it?”