Fantasy System

Chapter 567: Senior sister, have you seen it? [There is something big at the end]

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My script actually defeated Sei Senjumura and won first place at the comic festival

At the same time, Kasumigaoka Shiyu, who was sitting on the sofa, looked at Mu Fan standing on the stage on the screen with surprise in her beautiful eyes, and when she heard the comments in the audience who were preparing to help her prove, her mood couldn't help but become complicated. .

As long as we work hard, can we really get everyone to recognize us again

Kasumigaoka Shiyu has always been strange. She didn't understand what she did wrong. When Mu Fan said that he wanted to give a new ending, she couldn't help but be stunned.

Looking at the audience, Mu Fan said with a serious face: "The ending I hope is that Ichinose Yu wins the comic festival. She understands that she has talent as a writer, starts to believe in herself, and her personality becomes better than before. She became stronger and more confident, regained the light novels of her time, and used her own ideas to change her failed light novels, and reappeared in the light novel world under the pen name of Ichinose Rain..."

"Are you watching, senior? Can you understand what I say?"

After saying this, a sincere smile appeared on Mu Fan's face in the close-up of the TV.

His plan from the beginning was for Kasumigaoka Shiu to participate in the comic festival.

Because Mu Fan knew the reason for the failure of his senior sister from the beginning. When they were in the restaurant, the senior sister once said that she didn’t understand how to write the second novel, so she started to read the opinions in the book review section and revise her own work. But I was not happy to write it, and in the end it still failed to gain recognition from readers.

Although taking readers’ opinions is not a bad thing.

But because of this, the senior sister has forgotten that readers like to read the books she writes, not the books they personally think of. Once it develops according to the readers' expectations, the senior sister's books will lose their original value. A well-planned soul, and if the senior sister writes such a book, she herself will not be happy.

It was not until later that she began to be unable to control the plot, which led to the collapse of the work.

In the end, we ended up like this.

The reason why Mu Fan asked Kasumigaoka Shiu to write and participate in the comic festival was precisely because this time neither he nor Eiriri would give his senior sister any opinions on the plot, leaving the senior sister to work hard alone to get among the top rankings in the comic festival. Only then can she understand her own strength, believe that she has the talent for light novels, and regain her former dreams.

Relying on herself, readers can identify with her again and change this ending that can only be avoided.

"Mu Fan..."

After listening to Mu Fan's words, Kasumigaoka Shiyu's heart trembled. After understanding Mu Fan's hidden meaning, her eyes turned red at this moment, and the TV scene in her sight also became blurred, and tears rolled down the corners of her eyes. It flowed out, from the sides of her cheeks to her chin, and dripped onto her clothes, making them wet.

"Really, what have I been doing for so long?"

Kasumigaoka Shiyu lifted up her long hair and tied it into a single ponytail with a ribbon. She wiped the tears from the corners of her eyes with a tissue, but the tears still couldn't stop flowing from the corners of her eyes.

Kasumigaoka Shiyu secretly blamed herself.

I have always been too paranoid and self-centered. I only thought that by following the readers’ ideas, I would be liked by everyone. However, I lost myself and couldn’t find the direction of my writing, which made my readers feel, The former Kasumi Shiko has left.

Mu Fan used the plot she wrote alone at the comic festival to tell her about her potential. As long as she believed in herself, readers could recognize her again.

Kasumigaoka Shiyu stood up and walked to the mirror. She looked at her pale and haggard face in the past few days. She gritted her silver teeth, closed her eyes and wiped away her tears. When she opened her eyes, her clear eyes were filled with tears again. Flashing his once confident and serious look.

Mu Fan, Eiriri, Editor Machida, and my dear readers, I have always worried you...

"Teacher Mu Shi Fanchen, Teacher Eri Kashiwagi."

After attending the comic festival, Mu Fan and Eiri had just left the venue when Kashima suddenly ran over from a distance.

Without Kashima, he would not have been able to participate in this comic festival, let alone win first place. Mu Fan had a good impression of Kashima. He stopped, turned around and said with a smile: "Senior Kashima, and What's the matter?"

Kashima seemed to have been running for a long time before catching up with them. He panted and waved his hands, grinning: "It's not a big deal. It's just that the first-place manga at the comic festival can be published and made into an anime movie. I don't know if you have any." The desire to make it into an anime movie.”

Mu Fan shook his head first, then took out his cell phone and said apologetically: "Senior Kashima, I can't make a decision yet, but I can add your contact information first, because the most important thing in the creation of this work is Kasumi Shiko. , so the consent of Kasumi Shiko is required to make it into an anime movie.”

"It should."

Kashima also knew that filming a movie required the consent of the members who wrote the script, but both Mu Fan and Eri Kashiwagi agreed. It should not be difficult to make this script into an anime movie. He did not bother and exchanged mobile phone numbers with Mu Fan before leaving. .

Arriving in front of the motorcycle, Yinglili looked at Mu Fan, twitched her ponytails, and asked doubtfully: "Mu Fan, are we going to Kasumigaoka Shiyu's house now?"

At this point, Eiri's pretty face turned red: "I don't care about Kasumigaoka Shiyu. What I mean is that this medal is due to her after all, so she should take it, right?"

Yinglili, do you dare to be more stubborn

Hearing what Eiri said, Mu Fan was a little speechless. Before he went out, he specifically told Kasumigaoka Shiyu that he would win first place at the comic festival, knowing that his senior sister would not be able to help but turn on the live TV broadcast. The show takes a look at the rankings at Comic-Con.

Mu Fan had some ideas about whether the senior would turn on the TV. He knew that if the senior really gave up on his career as a writer, he would not help them write scripts or worry about the "Magic Academy Love Guide" every day.

So when he knew that his senior sister would watch the show, Mu Fan said the last words that changed the ending to let his senior sister understand that she had the talent and potential for writing. Even the genius girl Qian Jumura Zhengdu was recognized her existence.

Mu Fan planned to give his senior a certain amount of rest, and said to Eiri, "Let's go back to the company. Hatsune Miku's stage plan is about to start recently. Let's go study it and let Hatsune participate in the performance during this time."

Ying Lili, who didn't understand Mu Fan's plan, was still a little worried: "What about Kasumigaoka Shiyu?"

"I believe Senior Sister will cheer up. Let's see first. Maybe today or tomorrow, Senior Sister may change."

Mu Fan smiled slightly.

He knows that senior is strong. Although it is difficult to walk out when facing difficulties, once you understand your heart, you will be stronger than others. Even Yuuki Asuna is not as strong as senior's character.

He also believes that Senior Sister will regain the love of readers.

Hearing what Mu Fan said, Ying Lili was slightly startled. She was smart as ice and snow and seemed to understand Mu Fan's plan. Without further words, she got on Mu Fan's motorcycle and headed to Gancheng with him.

He and Eiri had just returned to the company. Kawazawa Shisui and Black Cat saw Mu Fan return to the company again. When they saw the smile on Mu Fan's face, they both knew that Mu Fan had solved the problem he planned to do a week ago. things.

Seeing Mu Fan return again, Black Cat and Kawazawa Shisui couldn't help but feel relieved, and they reported the company's recent situation to Mu Fan.

Mu Fan has also begun to take over the company's affairs again, and plans to launch Hatsune Miku's virtual singer stage performance plan in three days.

On the first night, Mu Fan opened the "Magic Academy Love Guide" with some anticipation. Although the senior sister has not updated it, she has opened a single chapter in the online version, probably because there has been no news recently and there are no updates. I apologized for the novel that upset everyone, and told readers that updates would resume tomorrow.

Although the book review section still did not believe her, and some people even thought that she was short of money and deliberately deceived readers in order to make more money, but the next night, the senior sister was not hit, but her The book has been updated again.

What surprised Mu Fan this time was that the senior student updated ten chapters of "Magic Academy Love Guide" at once, and also modified the original plot.

Reading all the way from the chapter with the error, this plot turned into the previous plot of the heroine not trusting the hero, and the hero sleeping with the heroine. This was completely staged by the hero and heroine to lure out the enemy behind the scenes. , in fact, nothing happened with the female protagonist until the enemy behind the scenes appeared, and the male and female protagonists worked together to defeat the boss behind the scenes.

As soon as this plot came out, it directly explained why the previous female protagonist was mentally retarded and why the male protagonist slept with the female counterpart. All the up owners in station C were immediately slapped in the face by the senior sister's idea.

On the third day, Mu Fan clicked on the "Guide to Love in Magic Academy" and found that all the scoldings in the book review section were drowned out by the good reviews on this day, and disappeared little by little...

At the same time, Mu Fan's stage plan for Hatsune Miku has officially begun...

[To be fair, I really want to write a few more chapters to wrap things up, and then fill in the extra chapters for SAO and Asuna. But, Sagiri’s plot is so difficult. However, in order to give everyone a better ending than the current one, a perfect ending, I can only write another 200,000 words.]