Fantasy System

Chapter 75: An Yilun also fell into the trap

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"Okay, I'll send it to you now."

Since the coding software mobile phone and computer are interconnected, yesterday's saved manuscripts are also available on the mobile phone, which is very convenient. Mu Fan poured out the 40,000-word novel he coded yesterday from his phone and sent all of it to An Yilun.

In any case, Mu Fancai came to this world not long ago. As An Yilun is also a world-famous blogger, he should be able to tell the quality of a book and whether it meets the market.

An Yilun is a standard otaku. He usually likes to read some novels and anime and play youth love games. He makes some comments on the released light novels and animations every month, which has also won the support of many fans. , became a well-known and popular blogger famous for ACG information. It can be said that he has read countless light novels and has a profound understanding of light novels.

Today he happened to hear that his close friend Mu Fan, who worked in a restaurant and was a classmate at the same school, started writing light novels, and he immediately became interested.

In his opinion, Mu Fan is a newcomer who has just entered the game. Newcomers to light novels need to pay attention to many problems. He needs to list them one by one for Mu Fan and give him some pointers. However, those who have just read Mu Fan’s light novels need to pay attention to them. Plot synopsis, An Yilun was shocked.

"The story of "Accelerated World" takes place in a future where everyone uses a terminal device called a "neural linker" to connect and live in a networked world? Become an overclocked connector with a thousand times the speed of thinking?"

Although the story is simple in introduction, judging from the fantasy of this kind of imagination, it is very likely that a newcomer will not be able to handle this kind of subject matter.

As soon as he saw the introduction, An Yilun couldn't help but feel interested. This should be a science fiction theme. Although there are also science fiction future themes in light novels nowadays, just from the perspective of neural connection devices. Look, the setting should be a very novel theme.

But looking further down, An Yilun also frowned.

Haruyuki Arita, a student who is bullied because of his fat body and weak personality, spends his days cursing reality while hiding in a corner of the school network to improve his record of the highest score in the squash game. He can only find happiness and confidence in the game as a young boy

In today's novels and animations, starting with a fat person is definitely a taboo. After all, people who like to read novels can roughly imagine their favorite characters. However, if you start with a fat person, there may be Many people can't hold on, right

Not to mention, this fat man is relatively weak and incompetent and is bullied every day.

... ..

However, it was precisely because of the male protagonist's weakness that he wanted to see how the male protagonist would fight back to solve the incident. An Yilun also continued to watch. What he didn't realize was that he had been completely immersed in this novel without even realizing it.

Although the male protagonist is weak, he still has his personality. The biggest advantage of this novel is that the characteristics of the character are particularly obvious.

One day the next day, Kuroyukihime, the student council vice-president whom everyone admired, broke into Haruyuki Arita's world and asked him to join the ranks of "burst linkers" who can increase the speed of thinking to a thousand times. It was precisely with this speed of thinking that Kuroyukihime helped Arita Haruyuki escape from this oppressed life.

But because of this program, he was also involved in the battle between the "overclocking connectors". In order to repay Kuroyukihime's favor, Haruyuki volunteered to serve the King of Black Kuroyukihime and rebuild the Black Legion... .

At this point, the story of more than 40,000 words comes to an end.

After reading all the plots so far, An Yilun was completely stunned. In terms of subject matter alone, the accelerating world is very new in today's light novels. It can be said that Haruyuki Arita's battle can completely affect reality. His heart is eager. I want to see what happens next, the progress of Haruyuki Arita's efforts to become a hyperlinker, and the development of Kuroyukihime's relationship.

As a well-known and popular blogger, he has read countless light novels. From the previous plot alone, you can see that "Accel World" is definitely a masterpiece, because a qualified masterpiece first has a novel subject matter, which means that More than half done.

"Mu Fan, I didn't expect that you, just a newcomer, could write such a good light novel. It really opened my eyes. What's the next plot?"

An Yilun also praised Mu Fan without any pretense. After reading it, I couldn't bear his temper and hurriedly sent a message back to Mu Fan.

Mu Fan, who was sitting in the food department typing words, saw An Yilunye's reply and smiled as expected.

Speaking of which, regardless of the settings of Accelerated World, this novel is, in his eyes, an inspirational story about a weak knight who continues to grow and improve in order to protect his beloved princess.

Moreover, it is a light novel that has carried the fire of the previous life. It is an accelerated world and is in line with the market of the current world, so it will naturally attract many readers who like it.

As for originality, wait until it attracts some popularity before starting.

Newbie light novel

Mu Fan raised his eyebrows. He had been writing novels for four or five years, but he was just not in this world.

"Wouldn't it be boring to spoil something before it's written? A qualified author wouldn't spoil it."

Mu Fan smiled and sent a message back to An Yilun.

"Oh, I took the liberty."

An Yilun was too anxious about the following plot just now. After being reminded by Mu Fan, he thought of the most annoying spoilers of one of his novels and anime. Then he thought of what Mu Fan started to say and asked: "Mu Fan, Are you planning to submit your article to Dengeki Bunko? I do know an editor there. If you want, we can go there together on Saturday and I can introduce him to you."

"Okay, actually I'm planning to participate in Dengeki Bunko's Newcomer Award. Since you have a familiar editor, let's go there on Saturday."

"Okay, then I have to write the follow-up plot quickly. I will die if I don't watch it!"

"Don't worry, I won't let you die."

... ...

Mu Fan closed his phone and continued typing. At this time, Asuna Yuki came over, took a look at the rapidly changing text on the phone and the chapter information on it, and asked in surprise: "Mu Fan, you... ..Is this writing a novel?”

"Yeah."

Mu Fan nodded, and suddenly remembered the op of "Love Metronome" sung by Asuna Yuuki, and couldn't help but ask: "Does Yuki-kun also like light novels?"

"My family keeps buying me some classics and business books, and I'm almost tired of reading them! So when I have a little bit of free time when I'm bored, I'll read light novels to relax, like "Metronome of Love" I only discovered this light novel recently.”

Yuki Asuna stuck out her tongue in displeasure, then walked over and sat on the chair opposite Mu Fan, holding her chin in one hand, and placed a pair of plump peaks on the edge of the table, letting the table bear it The gravity of the earth's center.

To be fair, Yuki Asuna is recognized as a beauty in the school. Not only is she good-looking, she also has a very well-developed figure. Mu Fan couldn't help but swallow his saliva.

"Mu Fan, what's the name of your light novel?" Yuuki Asuna asked curiously.

Hearing Yuuki Asuna's question, Mu Fan quickly looked away and said honestly: "It's called "Accelerated World"."

"Can you take a look at it first?"

"This book has too few words right now. Let's wait until I write more and show it to classmates Qi Cheng!"

In fact, it’s okay to show Asuna Yuki the world of Accelerator World now, but the word count is too few now, and “Accelerator World” is already relatively slow to gain popularity, so Mu Fan decided to show Asuna Yuuki more time.

After all, there was already A Yilun who reminded me of the update. Fortunately, An Yilun was also in Class B of the second year, so the chance of meeting him in school was relatively small. But Asuna Yuki was different. She was in the food department every day. I don’t want to be running the gourmet department and have this beautiful manager constantly reminding me when I’m cooking.

"Okay, then you must show it to me when Mu Fan goes on sale!" Seeing Mu Fan say this, Yuki Asuna could only nod.

"Yeah, okay." Mu Fan nodded.

At this moment, Mu Fan heard a commotion coming from the door of the food department behind him. Mu Fan and Yuuki Asuna turned their attention there.

There was a petite person at the door, wearing a brown top, a plaid skirt, short burgundy hair, a black bat-shaped hairpin in her hair, and a delicate little tiger tooth in the corner of her mouth. She looked very playful and cute. The girl walked in, sat down on the first table in a swaggering manner, looked up at Mu Fan and said with a proud smile:

"I am the great demon Satania, the one who unifies hell. Human beings, come and have a bowl of Yangchun noodles marked on the sign outside!"

"puff!"

Hearing these chuunibyou words, Mu Fan couldn't help but spit out the sip of water he just drank in his mouth. He turned around and found Yuuki Asuna staring at him.

When the two of them looked at each other, they both saw the look of helplessness and caring for the mentally retarded in each other's eyes...