It's okay for now, probably
The communication with the editor was very smooth. I elaborated on the significance of the nightclub plot and the overall future direction. I got a certain understanding and clarified the main line of the subsequent article.
After being severely warned, the result was that the book would not be sealed for the time being and the bad plot points would be revised as much as possible.
We can continue walking.
Throw flowers!
Then explain to everyone the significance of the nightclub plot.
I have always emphasized that this is a growth story, and the main line of the story is the growth of the dog.
I feel aggrieved to say that we have vulgar and incorrect views.
The entire plot is structured for three broad purposes.
First. Liuli is contrasted through Li Nuoyi's elegant sketch.
The foreshadowing has actually been laid for a long time, that sentence in the "Tao Te Ching" - the world knows that beauty is beautiful, and this is evil. Everyone knows that what is good is good, but this is not good.
It’s all about comparison.
How to write a positive book? Just speaking with your mouth is a bit too forceful and deliberate.
In a world where there is only nobility and no vulgarity, what is righteousness
Liuli is not a character who lives in a vacuum.
There are enough money-worshiping women in the real society. Only her quality is valuable and her personal image is full and vivid.
Gouzi didn't really realize it right away. He had to get to know enough girls before he could understand who was good and who was bad.
The second is to write about the growth of Gouzi.
An ordinary boy, after receiving a windfall from heaven, does not satisfy his own desires and immediately becomes obsessed with five things, four beauties and three loves. That's bullshit.
The general direction is positive, and then you will experience both the light and the dark, experience some women, experience some routines, and experience some reflection. Only when you grow up can you be convincing and the characters full.
I said, harem, stud, single heroine, any simple label is wrong.
I didn't label this book in advance when I wrote it, otherwise it would become narrow and limit my inspiration.
Gouzi experienced, was grateful, and grew up all the way, and finally had a happy ending. My original intention was that simple.
Some readers say that there is too much mental activity due to water. Well, I will try to reduce it as much as possible.
However, it is actually because when I set my mind, I wanted to be a great person in the life style.
So I pay great attention to details.
Every character is alive, with their own thoughts, mentality, and behavior patterns. If they are not explained clearly, their actions will lack a logical chain, and it will be confusing to read.
The three girls in the nightclub are the same at the core, but completely different in appearance.
I don’t want to show everyone the same thing.
The third purpose is to have fun.
It is very satisfying to release the depression in real life through the pretense of a powerful person.
Gouzi basically doesn't slap in the face, is not that aggressive, and mostly focuses on himself.
In the nightclub, Gouzi was very friendly in dealing with other people's showing off and provocation, but there were still people who reported him for having incorrect views. I was drunk too.
The nightclub plot may have a hasty ending, so please be mentally prepared.
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Then comes the point.
Thanks to the league leaders such as Black Tiger Striker, Sheng Zirong, Fei Yanren, Yan Bao, Tiantian, Xiaogu, Fu Yiqu, and Maria, as well as the 92 brothers and sisters in the core group, and everyone who silently subscribes, tips, and Vote and support Bread with practical actions, dear readers.
It was your strong support that made the editor see our potential and value, so we didn't give up directly and got an opportunity to communicate with the editor in person.
Really, if it hadn’t been for the high rewards and very good subscriptions on the first day it was released, we might have lost contact now.
Thank you very, very, very much.
Also, I ask everyone to continue to trust me and support Shenhao of the Life Department to continue on.
Each of your subscriptions is particularly valuable.
If you don't like it, just delete it.
But if you are still watching. Please try to read the genuine version. A few dollars a month is not expensive for anyone. With the accumulation of our strength, we can go forward together and go for a long time.
I just like to see those shameless villains jumping around like crazy, but they look like we are helpless.
We are strong enough and united enough. They are really just clowns. It is unnecessary to scold them. You can crucify them with just one click of subscription.
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Finally, let me explain the internal group thing.
Initially this was a management group, and some familiar book friends were found to help manage it.
Everyone was afraid that someone would sneak in, so they decided to set the fan value a little higher to avoid any trouble, and then slowly add people in.
If you can't wait to watch it, just add the review group 873682125, which requires 5,000 fan points.
Otherwise, just wait a little. After this period of time, a VIP group will definitely be opened, and you can enter by fully booking.
Once again, I sincerely thank you all for your support.
More than 50,000 words were updated in two days. Mengxin worked very hard.
In terms of adding updates to the monthly pass, 200 votes for one chapter is equal to 100 votes and 1,000 words. After several chapters, I have made up to 1,400 votes. This month, I will give priority to returning the additional updates to the monthly pass.
In terms of rewards from the alliance leader, I owe Black Tiger 11 updates and I owe New Alliance Maria 1 update.
I'm particularly angry right now, and my fingers are very inflamed. I'll try my best to write, so everyone can read it in time. Just sauce.
I have to rest for a while.
(End of chapter)