Hua Ran searched the Internet for a long time for review books, but those templates were written by students to teachers and employees to leaders, but I didn't see an article on how e-sports players should write a review.
Review your own reaction and hand speed is not fast enough? Attitude is not correct enough? How to write this! Hua Ran thought hard, still didn't know how to write, so she simply went to find Shu Chen next door.
Shu Chen heard someone knocking on the door just after taking a shower. He hurriedly wiped his hair with a towel, and walked to the door to take a look at the cat's eye - it really was Huaran.
This college student has an overly cheerful personality and is a familiar one. Even if Shu Chen doesn't like to talk, Hua Ran can talk to himself for a long time without being embarrassed at all.
Shu Chen took a deep breath, opened the door, and stammered, "You, what are you looking for from me?"
Hua Ran asked, "Brother Chen, will you write a review?"
Shu Chen was stunned for a moment: "Review?"
Hua Ran said with a sad face: "Yeah, Coach Jiang asked me to write a review, 1000 words! I don't say 1000, I can't write 100 words. I have never written such a thing since I was a child."
The young man bowed his head and looked depressed. Shu Chen glanced at him sympathetically, then pointed to the dormitory on the left: "You, you go to Ye Zi."
Hua Ran wondered: "Brother Ye?"
Shu Chen said, "Well, let him teach you."
Hua Ran nodded and turned away.
Shu Chen will not write a review. During the ace period, Shu Chen was the most obedient one. He would listen carefully to what Jiang Shaoyu said, and did his best to complete the task.
He usually trains hard and doesn't lose his chains on the field. Jiang Shaoyu has never scolded him. In Shu Chen's eyes, Brother Yu is a very gentle person, a brother who encourages him and takes care of him.
Of course, Jiang Shaoyu was only gentle to Shu Chen. The other Lao Lin, Ye Zi, Xiao Zhou, and Xiao Pei were all scolded in those years. Xiao Zhou received the least scolding, Ye Ye received the most scolding, and wrote the most reviews.
Let Huaran find the leaves, that's right.
At this time, in Room 301, Ye Qingming was sitting lazily on the sofa, consuming melon seeds while chasing a drama, and a dog-blooded love movie was playing on the TV.
When Hua Ran knocked on the door, the TV happened to be in the climax | tide part. In the rainstorm, the alpha thumped and knelt down in front of the omega, slapped himself hard, and shouted hoarsely: "Dear, I was wrong, can you forgive me?"
Hua Ran was stunned: "Ye... Brother Ye, your taste is quite unique, isn't it?"
E-sports players basically play games in their spare time. Ye Qingming is better, and he is chasing dog-blood idol dramas.
Ye Qingming paused the playback and said with a smile, "Did Chenchen ask you to come to me?"
"how do you know?"
"Coach Jiang must have punished you for writing a review. If you can't write, go to Shu Chen. Shu Chen doesn't know how to write, so he recommends you to come to me. Right?"
Hua Ran gave a thumbs up: "Brother Ye is really predictable."
Ye Qingming took out a piece of paper and handed it to Hua Ran: "Take it, I have already prepared it for you." Then he pointed to the snacks on the table, "Buy a few packs of this brand of beef tomorrow. Just give it to me as a thank you, I like spicy flavors."
Hua Ran respectfully took the paper and looked at it, only to see that it read "Strategy for the New Review of the National Team".
Paragraph 1: Write clearly the date of the error and the detailed process. For example: On the x-month-x day of x year, coach Jiang organized the national team players to conduct daily training. Not only did you not train seriously, but you were careless and did something stupid, which was discovered by the eye-catching coach Jiang.
The second paragraph is a sincere confession. For example xxxx.
In the third paragraph, look back and carefully analyze the reasons for making this mistake & remember 30340;
In the fourth paragraph, once again sincerely admit your mistakes, and promise that in the future, you will definitely change your mind, be a new person, and never do it again.
Not only the Raiders, but also detailed examples can be used as a reference.
After reading it, Hua Ran said excitedly: "Thank you, Brother Ye! This guide is really useful, I'll go back and write it!" He took two steps, then turned back in doubt: "By the way, your guide is printed in advance. Okay? You seem to be very experienced."
Ye Qingming said proudly: "Of course, the review I wrote in ace can fill a big box. When it comes to writing reviews, no one has more experience than me."
Hua Ran's eyes widened: "A box of review? True or false!"
Ye Qingming said with a smile: "Of course it is true. However, my box of review papers has been left to my apprentice as a legacy. When he comes to the national team next year, he will definitely be able to use it."
Hua Ran: "… "
Master's Inheritance Review Book, is this all right
Ye Qingming paused and added: "By the way, the review needs to be written by hand. You can write an electronic version in the computer first, and then copy it. Otherwise, if you write it by hand, it will give people a very bad look and feel. ."
Hua Ran: "...I see."
When returning to the dormitory, Hua Ran was still confused about who I am, where am I, and why the national team is so scary.
He went back to the bedroom and suddenly it occurred to him - he didn't bring a pen and paper! I brought drawing paper and some color paints. I can't use paint to paint a review book, right
Helpless, Hua Ran had no choice but to ask for help in the "National Team Victims Squad" group: "Everyone, whoever has a pen and paper, lend me a hand."
Lao Lin: "I have."
Xiao Zhou: "I have."
Pei Feng: "I have."
Ye Qingming: "Why didn't you ask me for it just now? I thought you brought it."
Hua Ran saw the old ace players appearing neatly, and her mood was extremely complicated - it seems that everyone is ready! Are you ready to use your pen and paper when you are scolded for writing a review
Hua Ran said, "I'll go to Brother Ye to get it, thank you."
Qin Xueyao is a little transparent. I was embarrassed to ask in the group, and asked Xia Li in private: "Do you still need a pen and paper? I didn't bring it. What do I need to do with the pen and paper, and record the minutes of the meeting?"
She usually uses a computer for training, and a mobile phone for chatting and posting Weibo. She has not written anything with pen and paper for a long time.
Xia Li replied, "It's for writing a review!"
Qin Xueyao: "... review?"
Xia Li said: "Didn't Hua Hua be called to the office by Coach Jiang alone today? Maybe he made a mistake and was scolded by Coach Jiang, and then asked him to write a review. The review must be handwritten, using pen and paper."
Qin Xueyao's expression froze - why do you still want to write a review? Is Coach Jiang so strict
However, she trained very seriously and did not make any mistakes. Coach Jiang shouldn't scold her, right? Thinking like this, Qin Xueyao fell asleep peacefully. >
r /> At this time, Hua Ran was struggling to count the words.
His 800-word essay for the college entrance examination was just enough, and the 1,000-word review was too difficult.
Do you want to start with kindergarten? Because I have been spoiled since I was a child, I have never suffered any setbacks, and my attitude towards many things is not serious enough. The process of entering the national team from the Nova Cup is also very smooth, so I didn't cherish this rare opportunity. On the first day of the training camp, my mind didn't turn around. Are you slack
Hua Ran wrote and revised it, revised and deleted it, and stayed up until the early hours of the morning to finally finish writing the review.
At noon the next day, Hua Ran took the review book to the office after lunch and handed it to Coach Jiang.
Jiang Shaoyu took a closer look and said, "Looking for the strategy Ye Qingming wanted?"
He really had seen this template of Leaf too many times.
Hua Ran didn't dare to lie and deny it, so she had to bite the bullet and say, "Yes. I haven't written a review before, so I asked Brother Ye about the format and writing method of the review." He paused and hurriedly added: "But , I wrote all the content myself, I didn't copy his template!"
Jiang Shaoyu put down the review book and looked at Hua Ran with a very stern look: "You are the only 'non-professional player' in the national team, so you have to be more strict with yourself. Everyone else has experienced systematic professional training. You played very solidly. But you are different. You are equivalent to a half-way monk, and your foundation is a lot worse than them. I don’t mean to embarrass you, I just hope that you can keep up with the big army as soon as possible.”
"In the future, training will be regarded as a class, focus, focus, and don't be half-hearted and smiling. Daily training is very important. The instantaneous response of professional players at critical moments is cultivated in such long-term, boring daily training. I understand. ?"
Hua Ran nodded immediately, "Understood! Coach, don't worry, I will train hard in the future!"
Jiang Shaoyu said, "Go ahead. Name Ye Qing here."
Hua Ran felt a chill, and hurriedly turned around and ran to the training room: "Brother Ye, Coach Jiang called you! He recognized that the review I wrote was a strategy you gave, what should I do, I won't implicate you, right?"
Ye Qingming said with a smile: "It's okay, I didn't write it for you."
He turned around and knocked on Jiang Shaoyu's office, flattering: "Coach Jiang is looking for me?"
Jiang Shaoyu looked at him coldly: "Would you like to open a shop at the entrance of the national team base, and name it 'Yeze Review Store'. In the future, whoever I ask to write the review will sell templates to make money?"
Ye Qingming's smile froze, and hurriedly explained: "These newcomers don't know how to write a review, I just provide them with some help within a reasonable range..."
Jiang Shaoyu: "Then, you are a good person? And I became a bad person?"
Cold sweat broke out on Ye Qingming's forehead: "...No no no, that's not what I meant!"
Jiang Shaoyu raised his eyebrows gently: "What is the significance of the review letter? It is to make everyone realize their mistakes, correct their attitude, and write a review. It is also a self-analysis and self-reflection."
"Every time I ask someone to write a review, you have to step in, provide them with detailed strategies, and teach them how to write. Last time, the review handed in by the Huluwa team was carved out of a template, and there were even people. Start introspection from kindergarten. You taught this method of making up the number of words, right?"
"Do you think you are very capable??"
Ye Qingming's face turned red and white. At this time, he realized that what he did was actually inappropriate. Brother Yu asked people to write a review because those people did make mistakes and need to reflect and correct them.
And he provides the detailed writing method of the review for everyone. Then, in the process of writing the review, everyone will not seriously analyze their own mistakes, but will apply the template and try to make up the number of words to "complete the task".
Writing a review while reflecting on your own is completely different from applying a template to deal with it.
No wonder Brother Yu is angry, he is really nosy!
Ye Qingming lowered his head and quickly confessed: "I'm sorry, I was wrong! I will never care about them in the future. They are scolded and cried by the coach, and that's what they deserve! Why should I interfere
Jiang Shaoyu said lightly, "I think you're just too busy. Do you think it's amazing that you pass the level the fastest? You remember that you've played for so many years, isn't it right to be the first to clear the level?"
Ye Qingming is indeed very talented, his hands are fast, and he moves like a shadow. Last night, he passed the eighth level of the "Desert Ruins" map, and he started to play the ninth level today.
In the level of the positioning project, he is the first pass every time, and his talent is evident.
But this guy is very easy to be complacent, and secretly provides people with review strategies. If he doesn't scold him for a while, his skin will itch.
Ye Qingming touched his nose and defended in a low voice: "I'm playing the ninth level, I will pass the tenth level as quickly as possible and set an example for everyone."
Jiang Shaoyu said: "Since you are so idle, starting today, add an hour of map practice every day, go to the double training room, and play hide-and-seek with Coach Chang. Kill Coach Chang within 10 minutes even if you pass the level. After passing the level, change the map to continue. If you can't kill it, then keep repeating. Engrave all the maps in my mind!"
Ye Qingming: "..."
Grass, just now I was thinking about who the second victim would be, but it turned out to be me? !
Why does he have to meddle with his business
Ye Qingming said with a sad face: "Don't be so ruthless? Shall I train alone for an hour?"
Jiang Shaoyu: "An hour and a half."
Ye Qingming hurriedly stood at attention: "Understood, one hour!"
Jiang Shaoyu looked at him coldly: "You will still bargain? Very well, two hours."
Ye Qingming: "..."
He is now like a dead leaf hanging on the treetops, lost his soul, crumbling, and miserable.
After Ye Qingming walked out of the office, he sent a message to his apprentice: "Remember to keep the inheritance I gave you, it is out of print, and no one will provide a guide for the review book in the future. Disciple, you must integrate it. Through it, I understand the true meaning of it, innovate it, and summarize my own experience.”
At this time, Xiao Ye, who was chasing dramas at home during the vacation period, saw the message sent by Master, and couldn't help but say, "Master, are you mentally ill?"
Ye Qingming: "Yes, you can come to the national team to collect the body of Master at any time."
Little Leaf: "… "
Collect corpses? Is the national team so terrible
Ye Qingming came to the double training room next door. Coach Chang was waiting for him and said with a smile: "Hide and seek for additional training, right? Come on, welcome Ye Ye to be the first to come to the little black room for the national team's additional training."
Ye Qingming: "..."
I can't wait to die here. Why on earth is he meddling
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