I Teach Kendo in Tokyo

Chapter 737: Epilogue (finale)

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28 years later.

In the tea room, an office worker in a suit and leather shoes sat on a cushion in the center of the tea room.

Although the air conditioner was on in the tea room, sweat still flowed down his cheeks.

Because he was facing one of the most powerful people in Tokyo at this time.

The man was sitting cross-legged behind the tea table, with a large tabby cat squatting on his lap.

The man was stroking the big cat's fur gently.

Commonly known as licking cats.

The office worker kept in mind the advice he heard before coming here, and he didn't even dare to breathe before this man spoke.

It is said that the nobles in ancient times spoke to the common people, unless the nobles spoke first, otherwise the common people had to shut up, and they would be beheaded if they talked casually.

Finally, the man spoke: "Why don't you speak? Did you believe some rumors that I must talk to you first when I'm here?"

"Eh? Uh, no no no no, no?"

"Of course not, I've been waiting for you to speak."

The office worker turned pale with fright, and hurriedly slammed one on the person in front of him. This is the so-called Dogeza in Japan.

"Mr. Kiryu, I'm really sorry!"

"Okay, okay," the man showed an impatient look, "talk about your business, what do you want to do?"

The office worker was about to speak, but was too nervous to speak.

The tea drinker tapped lightly on the table.

So the door opened, and the elegant-looking lady brought in a glass of wine and placed it on the tatami in front of the office workers.

The office worker didn't dare to raise his eyes to look at the lady, but just by looking at the hem of the kimono, he knew that the kimono must be of great value.

"Thank you, egg... Tamamo."

The office worker was startled when he heard the egg, and raised his head suddenly, and saw the astonishing face of the woman named Yuzao.

Then he remembered, isn't this the senior prosecutor general in Tokyo who is often on TV? Remember Jinguji Tamamo

Why would such a character be a maid here

Office workers are getting more nervous.

Tea drinker: "Have a drink and be bold. You are obviously scared by me. Sorry, today is my daughter's birthday, and there are more celebrities here."

There are many celebrities, so can the senior prosecutor of the Tokyo District Prosecutor be a maid? This one is said to be going into politics in the future, competing with Honami Nanjo for the position of Japan's first female prime minister.

The shocked office worker felt that he should have a drink, otherwise he couldn't talk.

So he picked up his glass and drank it down.

Unexpectedly, this is not something lukewarm like sake, but vodka.

The spirits made the office workers dizzy. He waited for a while before sitting up straight and tremblingly finished talking about his purpose for coming.

The tea drinker asked in a deep voice: "When you went to court, why didn't you go to barrister Shigeru Ikeda? In your case, he will help you with the lawsuit for free."

"Mr. Ikeda is too busy, running cases every day, not in his law firm at all, and his law firm has only one receptionist."

"That's not the receptionist, it's his wife, Chiyoko Ikeda." The man interrupted the office worker, "That poor law firm run by their husband and wife. That's right, it's not normal to find him. So you came to me? Why didn't you Come to me as soon as you don't arrive at Lawyer Ikeda?"

"I… "

"Forget it, it's not important, tell me what you want me to do."

For a moment, the office worker seemed to be a different person suddenly, with madness lingering around him.

He said every word: "I hope those bastards are treated the same as my daughter! Blood for blood, tooth for tooth."

The man nodded: "Well, a reasonable request. You will get what you want. We will send someone to evaluate the degree of your daughter's disfigurement, and then, because she is a woman, the disfigurement will be more fatal to her. After all, a man may be disfigured. It will be more attractive, so we will increase the disfigurement intensity by 40%, how?"

The office worker said gratefully: "Thank you very much! This is enough!"

"You're welcome, friends should help each other." The tea drinker took another sip of tea, and the cat on his lap ran away in disgust because of this action.

But the office worker was stunned in place: "Friend..."

"Didn't you call me Kiryu-sensei just now? Anyone who calls me that way is a friend. Well, don't worry about your business. It will be done in a few days. Now you go to the meeting place outside and eat something. Listen to the song.

"Because I am a little famous in the music industry, there are a lot of famous singers at the banquet today. It is a loss in life not to listen to their singing."

There is a kind of magic power in the words spoken by the tea drinker, which makes the office workers who are about to leave directly decide to enjoy the concert.

He stood up tremblingly, and staggered out of the room.

As soon as he left, before the door was closed, the big-breasted beauty rushed in with thumping steps: "Hey! He Ma! I've seen it, and she was the last person who came to you for business just now!"

Saying that, the big-breasted beauty poured directly into the arms of the tea drinkers Kiryu and Ma, taking the place of the cat just now.

The big tabby cat nestled in the corner let out a cry of dissatisfaction, but was ignored by the tea drinkers and the big-breasted beauty.

He Ma: "You are twenty years younger today!"

"Get lost! Is the next sentence 'almost the same as that monster'? Well, get out, all your friends are here, even that old man from Jinshan is here with a cane."

He drank tea slowly with Ma: "The music outside just now was a piece I wrote for Qingliu?"

"Yeah, you, worry about Qingliu's marriage! She's a leftover woman!"

"Ah? Didn't she teach with Xi Chuan Takashi..."

"I asked, it's nothing! How about we divorce, you marry Qingliu, and we continue to live together!"

"Don't make trouble." The tea drinker waved his hand.

The big-breasted beauty sighed: "Hey, if I knew that I would come here first and make all the sisters become leftover women, I would not marry this way, and I am also a leftover woman. You said that the plan I proposed is not good, get married one by one Divorce again, and live together in the end, how wonderful! Each of you will have five more, just like me, please help!"

He Ma immediately cried out: "Please forgive me! I am already physically and mentally exhausted by you alone. According to your method, do you want me to die?"

At this time the phone rang.

The door of the tea room opened again, and it was the noble lady who just delivered the wine. Unlike the big-breasted beauty, she looked younger, as if she was only in her early 30s.

"Call, it's from the palace." Jinguji Yuzao said.

"Ah, you should find me." The big-breasted beauty Mikako Kiryu took the phone, and after a round, she put down the phone and said to Kazuma, "Ah, it's like this, my good sister is also coming to the banquet venue, so that ... Don't make such an expression, she will not be a queen soon, but a queen mother, oh, don't be nervous... "

Today, the renovated Kiryu Dojo is as noisy and peaceful as ever.

Closing speech (scattering flowers)

The last time I wrote a closing speech, it seems to be the last time.

Well, let’s stop playing memes, let me tell the truth, it seems that I’m still in "My WWII Can’t Be This Cute". Cute World War II should be the only one that writes flowers among the historical themes of Nianghua. And now the way of kendo should be the only story that has the pure taste of swords and halberds among the stories about swordsmen written by the starting point. Especially in those fight scenes, I deeply felt how good I am at writing battles, from the battlefield of hot weapons, to Jackie Chan-style action movies, and orthodox sword and halberd movies.

In fact, when I was typing, I was already thinking about how to write the final testimonial. Once I stopped typing, I immediately fantasized about how to write the testimonial, which almost delayed the business and hindered the conclusion.

However, in the end I decided not to use those that I have written so many times in my fantasies.

I'm going to tell you about how I originally planned to finish this book.

This book has an outline. When I was making the outline, I decided to give Kazuma a "second rider" who is both an enemy and a friend, that is, the male second in Kamen Rider.

In addition to being responsible for being deflated, the second male lead also had to break out fierce conflicts with the protagonist at critical moments.

My thought at the time was that the last book should be sublimated in the fierce conflict between the male first, He Ma and the male second.

That is to say, before I made the outline, I was sure that the book should end with the male number two who is both a teacher and a friend.

So I also solemnly portrayed a male number two, that is, Kinma Kenichi who appeared in the third volume.

But I am a writer of inspiration flow, which means that I play with great randomness, so the story in the third volume is actually quite broken, which caused Jin Ma Jianyi to fail to stand up.

The third volume was able to be saved in the end, entirely because of the burst of inspiration in the last ten chapters, and the god-like performance forcibly saved it.

What kind of old man, going to the ends of the earth along the railroad tracks, there was none in the first place. It was all a sudden flash of inspiration in my head, and I wrote it.

Then he was rescued.

So the third volume has more than one hundred chapters, and you feel that you are not reading the same volume in the last dozen or so. Among the first five volumes of the book, I feel the most dissatisfied is the third volume, and the most satisfied is the fifth volume. The completion of the fifth volume is very high, and Qingliu's redemption is my most proud passage in this book.

Although the third volume was rescued, I have doubts about the possibility of Jin Ma Jianyi acting as the male second.

At this moment, Amao appeared.

Amao was the product of a flash of inspiration, and there was no such person in the first place.

But the inspiration threw him to me. After shaping him, I knew that I had the candidate for the last battle with Ma.

My thought at the time was that after killing Fengguo, Ah Mao rushed over with the evidence he found and showed the evidence: "Look, I could have punished him through normal methods!"

Then the two sides had a fierce conflict of ideas because of their different ideas, and then they drew their knives and slashed to their heart's content.

In order to make this conflict have enough dramatic tension, I should continue to shape Amao. After all, the essence of swords and halberds is actually in literary dramas. Only when there is enough foreshadowing on both sides of the literary dramas and the conflict is severe enough, will swords and halberds look exciting. So it is necessary to shape Amao.

In fact, this is what I originally intended to do with the book's 3 million-plus words.

Yes, this book was originally planned to be 6 million words. I should also write about how Ah Mao suffered setbacks, how he persevered, how he got his favorite knife, and how he strengthened his faith.

But I got tired of writing, and the inspiration left me. It caused me to fall into a serious state of depression. Don’t think that this is just pretending. I really didn’t have any fun doing anything at the time. I know this is depression. I am a national second-level social worker, and I understand.

Therefore, the story originally planned to be 6 million words ended with only 3 million words.

In this way, there is a problem, the shaping of Amao is insufficient.

From the previous chapters, it can be seen that everyone hates Amao, and some even think that what He Ma did was right.

However this is not true. I didn't write this book to tell you that. What I want to say is that if justice can be done according to the method of procedural justice, then this world is a beautiful world.

I want to say that if you commit a crime, you must obey the law.

But what is shown in this chapter, the readers' suggestions, are completely opposite, and the readers have been led astray.

Because of the lack of shaping of A Mao, readers only see how difficult it is to implement justice in accordance with the method of procedural justice.

If they could write six million words, in the end, both sides should stand on the force field of supporters and criticize each other, and there would be no such one-sided scolding of Ah Mao.

Too bad I can't write six million words, and I'll never write anything over two million words again.

But this is the ending I set out in my outline.

Until the last time I gave a speech—the one that required a fee—I still said that I would fight a hidden boss.

In fact, until I started writing chapter 225 tonight, I still planned to let them draw their swords and cut each other.

I even sent the knife.

Just as I was typing, the once lost inspiration came back, and he came.

I had a brainstorm and found this solution now.

And according to my plan, the theme was sublimated.

I always thought that inspiration would never come to this book again.

All in all, the current ending is much better than the ending according to the outline. After cutting half the length, it still expresses the same thing. The BOSS is also over, and finally you all watched a bunch of fighting scenes that I am good at, and the last two BOSS characters are all standing up. From the perspective of fighting BOSS, there is no regret left. Although the sword and halberd of He A Mao are missing, it can't be forced, it's not bad to be able to do this.

It was great to finally end like this.

Master Inspiration, you are a life saver.

The final testimonial is supposed to recommend the new book and attract new books.

I thought of many ways to drain, but in the end I decided that none of them should be used.

Let me tell you that chapters 037 to 055 of the new book are the first part where I found inspiration in the new book.

You start from 037 and read all nineteen chapters.

In fact, there is no need to read the previous ones, and it has no effect, because I am trying my best to accumulate materials in order to find inspiration, so the writing is very slow, the rhythm is still slow, and I am tired of watching without talking about anything.

Just start reading from 037. It is also from this chapter that the new book has an official cheat. When you see 055, you can hold back and don’t continue reading. I lose. You collect the new book and wait for the next book in June. Announcement is fine.

PS: Mikako’s victory, in fact, was foreshadowed in his character design at the end, so you can understand it at a glance if you are familiar with the history of the Warring States Period.

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