At the same time, Ma Yiqun is also paying attention to Cui Geng's new book.
Although Ma Yiqun is now the CEO at the end, it should be the editor and the editor-in-chief to pay attention to the new book, but now it is during the Chinese New Year, and he is also idle at home.
As for the author Cui Geng, Ma Yiqun has long heard of his "spotty and bad deeds".
However, no matter what Cui Geng said, he was also gifted.
A talented but industrious writer is no better than an untalented and industrious writer.
After all, web writing is a creative industry, and many times it's not about how fast you write it, but how well you write it.
The content is not good, no matter how fast you write it, it is just accelerating the production of garbage.
"Butterfly Game" has just opened not long ago, and the status of the comment area is obviously not much better.
A group of horses ignored these and started reading directly.
The rhythm at the beginning is very fast. After passing the identity of the protagonist, you will get the golden finger directly. After a brief introduction to the use of the golden finger, the official plot begins.
On New Year's Eve, Cui Geng directly posted five chapters, and these five chapters have already completed a small plot.
From the protagonist obtaining the permission of "Butterfly Game" to helping the first supporting independent game producer to fulfill his dream.
The content of the first small plot is very simple, which is equivalent to a preview of the core cool point.
An impoverished indie game producer who never gave up his dream, made a game with simple materials but interesting gameplay, but no one cared because he had no money to promote it.
The protagonist discovered him when he was observing the parallel world, so he found an up master in the game area through his own authority, and used his golden finger to let the up master "just" download the game and play it stand up.
So, under the propaganda of the up master, the game suddenly became popular, and it has been out of control since then, and this independent game producer was able to continue his dream.
After watching this small plot, followed by a single chapter by Cui Gengfa.
The content of the single chapter is very simple. On the one hand, I apologize to all readers for the old book. On the other hand, I emphasize that this new book has been carefully thought out by myself, and the content is absolutely wonderful. Please be patient. During the Chinese New Year, he decided to stay out of the house, and every day was a 40-character update.
After reading these contents, Ma Yiqun fell into contemplation.
He has been writing about the Internet for so long, and he has been paying attention to the trends of the Internet recently, so he can naturally see some ways.
Is this a problem? there must be.
However, there are advantages too!
At present, the hot-blooded routine of "Don't bully the poor young" is still the main method on the market. The way to mobilize readers' emotions is mainly through relatively simple and rude methods such as suppression, incitement to hatred and revenge.
The city also has a good development, but the whole has not jumped out of this big frame. Many soldier kings, school flowers, and rebirth themes, cool points are basically more traditional pretending to slap the face.
As for the "Butterfly Game", it can be seen from the underlying architecture that it is very different from the current popular ones.
First of all, it re-planned the previous routine on the premise of maintaining a fast pace.
The so-called "Golden Three Chapters" are still popular in most of the present, that is, the fixed cycle of "repression, obtaining golden fingers, and slapping the face".
This routine can't be said to be bad, it's just a trend of being used rotten, many readers instinctively feel a little nauseous after seeing it.
But "Butterfly Game" completely abandoned this routine. There is no depressing part at the beginning. The protagonist directly gets the golden finger, and there is no "face-slap" plot, and directly enters his own unique cool point.
Secondly, the "cool" of this one is completely different from the others.
The current network is "simple and rude", which is also commonly known as "pretending to be slapped in the face".
But the cool point of "Butterfly Game" is a sneaky cool. The protagonist uses the light ball in his hand to create a butterfly effect in a parallel world with some very small changes, so as to achieve some very interesting results.
The feeling of refreshment obtained by the protagonist is not as obvious as that of traditional pretending to slap the face, and it will be more subtle, but this feeling of refreshment can also bring spiritual pleasure to readers.
Moreover, aside from the sense of accomplishment obtained by the protagonist, if you substitute yourself into the character in the book, such as the unlucky game producer, you can also get a kind of happiness.
This kind of happiness is a bit like a fairy tale for adults. As we all know, most of the independent game makers have created a game that is almost dead because of a lack of publicity.
In reality, many independent game producers can only reluctantly give up their game dreams, but in China, his dreams are realized because of the "butterfly effect" created by the protagonist, which is also a refreshing feeling for readers.
If the popular method is braised pork, then this is like a simple sugar-mixed tomatoes.
Braised pork is delicious, but when there are all kinds of braised pork on the table, a dish of sugar mixed with tomatoes will be quickly sold out.
Not only that, Ma Yiqun seems to have seen some Tengda's shadow in this book.
He felt that this story seemed to be based on President Pei. After all, when President Pei made "Lonely Desert Highway", it suddenly became popular because of a video of Qiao Laoshi.
With the income of this game, President Pei had the money to make "Ghost General" and earned the first pot of gold for the establishment of Tenda Group.
Therefore, in the eyes of the horse group, this story is particularly cordial.
Considering these aspects, Ma Yiqun has a hunch that if this book can be written well, it will definitely be a big hit at the end!
But is the book perfectly written
A group of horses feel that it is not necessarily true.
There are still a few places where small changes could be made, and once that's done, the book will be even better!
Exactly, taking advantage of the fact that Cui Geng has not written much now, Chuan Xiao can turn around, and hurry up and revise it!
Thinking of this, Ma Yiqun directly called Cui Geng.
"Mr. Ma, I'm correct! Don't worry, I will definitely write this book well, and it will never be unfinished again! I have written at least two million words!"
Before the horse group spoke, Cui Geng had already begun to express his determination.
"Hehe, guess how many times you said this?"
The words of the horse group made Cui Geng speechless.
"Okay, I'm not calling you about this." Ma Yiqun smiled and entered the topic, "I really want to tell you about the new book, but in addition to telling you to write this book well and not to end it unfinished. Besides, there are other things."
Cui Geng was stunned: "Mr. Ma, please speak."
Ma Yiqun said: "I personally have some small opinions. I will tell you briefly. You can change it if you think it is suitable. Even if it is not suitable, it can be regarded as a collective effort to write this book well."
"I am very optimistic about your book, so I want to help you polish the content of this book better."
Cui Geng was a little flattered: "You said."
A group of horses sorted out their thoughts a little and explained their thoughts in detail.
"I can see that the theme of the first small plot seems to be based on President Pei. Tengda does have many interesting stories, and it's not a bad idea to use it, but I think your artistic processing is still not enough."
"My opinion is mainly on two points:"
"First of all, I feel that the protagonist, as a pure bystander, is a little less involved in the plot."
"It's not a big problem to treat the protagonist as a pure tool. There are some books that do this, but if it can be related to the plot, it will be more interesting."
"I imagined it this way: The light ball that the protagonist gets is not a parallel world, but the real world he is in."
"And every action the protagonist makes is actually changing the world and making the world he lives in a better place."
"At the same time, the protagonist can also benefit from his own actions. For example, he helped an entrepreneur build a business empire of hundreds of billions of dollars, and the protagonist can buy the company with his own money before the empire is formed. stock, so he made huge gains himself and changed his life.”
"Moreover, the protagonist participates in these interactions as a person in the dark, and can meet those supporting characters in reality, which will also produce a lot of interesting plots."
"Secondly, I think the tone of the book could be changed."
"The current writing method is mainly a positive narrative, and the cool point is more direct."
"The so-called direct cool point is: what I want to do, I do it, and I succeed."
"While this is a safe way to write, it may not be very attractive to readers."
"I think it's possible to use an anti-routine narrative method to further strengthen the sense of misunderstanding in the 'butterfly game', make the cool point more twists and turns, and the storyline more humorous."
"Simply put: I didn't want to do anything, an accident happened, I backfired, but I succeeded."
"As far as the first plot you wrote, the current cool point is: the indie game author wants to succeed, the protagonist helps him through the 'butterfly game', and the indie game author succeeds."
"And after the modification, the cool outline can become like this: the independent game author does not want to succeed, he just wants to make a game of revenge on the society, the protagonist thinks this game is very interesting, use the 'butterfly game' to help him, and then the independent game author It worked."
"In the process of writing, pay attention to use more witty and humorous writing methods. This kind of plot should stand out from the current traditional plot."
"Understand?"
On the other end of the phone, Cui Geng was silent, as if trying to digest what Ma Yiqun said just now.
After a long time, he gave a meaningful "um": "Mr. Ma is very reasonable!"
"Indeed, when I wrote this opening, it always felt like something was missing."
"It's like a dish, the ingredients are all ready, and the heat is about the same, but it always lacks that little flavor!"
"If you can make up these two points, then this book will definitely be even more brilliant!"
"But... President Ma, I have a doubt."
A group of horses: "Huh? What doubts?"
Cui Geng hesitated for a moment, and then said: "To be honest, the story of the game producer is indeed based on President Pei."
"However, now this way of writing, will it be a smear of President Pei's image?"
"President Pei shouldn't hold grudges, right?"