I originally planned to talk about the ending first, but I don't know where to start, so let's talk about what comes to mind.
Martial arts, how should I put it, before I achieved Waigang, I was always on the rise, and I also had a lot of fun writing, no matter the daily life, feelings, or fights, the characters, all broke through the past, there were laughing and cursing, simple food, all became articles The feeling, especially the expression of emotions, is a bit unsophisticated and natural.
Passionate, warm, sweet, funny, fanciful, the taste of first love, pure mood, a little bit stronger than the previous expectations, all met the expectations in my heart.
But after achieving Waigang, it started to become difficult. As mentioned in the leave note before, with so many things laid out, it is impossible and impossible to change the style of painting. If you don’t focus on writing about the group arena, writing this will start to be monotonous tedious.
Before opening the book, I actually anticipated this situation. The default solution was to switch to group portraits to increase the suspense of victory and defeat, and use tasks in war-torn areas to dilute the sense of repetition.
However, it is always beautiful when I think about it. When the real thing comes, I realize that I have underestimated the problem.
Group portraits can solve this difficulty, but the problem is that there is no way to turn it around. There are two million characters, and it is difficult for readers to get emotionally involved if a single character comes out, because there is no shared experience, no crying or laughing together.
Moreover, when I arrived in Waigang, I could no longer make such a successful and famous strong man full of blood and desire, like a young man. Therefore, although there is a title and the temptation of being number one in the world, the inner driving force of the character is linear. slide.
Without this, the suspense of victory and defeat will not be able to arouse the ups and downs of emotions, and the group arena will be quite boring.
If you want to write group portraits, you must have motivation, desire, and goals to bring everyone together. Without this, it will be a mess without readability.
If you really want to write group portraits, you should come from the University Martial Arts Club, from the very beginning, and it will be hard to return later.
So, later on I cut a lot of group arena matches and speeded up the progress, but even so, the sixth part couldn't be started. When I asked for leave last time, I decided to cut the mess quickly, otherwise the quality of the book would drop drastically.
Of course, the branches are gone and the main body has not changed. This ending itself is the predetermined ending, but there is a lot of foreshadowing missing, and many places are not round enough.
Well, as a person who has a full score (wrong) in Chinese comprehension, let me show you why it is said to be the predetermined ending.
Remember Lou Cheng's first group arena match? Little Wu Sheng!
From a young martial sage to a martial sage, that is, the beginning and end of martial arts.
From Yuanwang Hanfu Keke in the first chapter to the wedding Hanfu, it is the beginning and end of the emotional echo-this was actually added later, and the earliest reservation was like this: Lou Cheng won the title of Martial Saint, Keke returned to China, in the At the exit, she saw the person waiting in the distance, just like Lou Cheng was looking at her from afar, then she walked over and went home.
This kind of artistic conception is better than today's, but I had a brain twitch at the time, and set the final of Wuji Wars in mid-July, and the time can't be fastened! Can only adjust...
Fortunately, after a long period of deliberation, the feeling that the flower market was as bright as day on the night of last year's Yuan was not bad.
Well, in terms of characters, due to the relationship between the clean net and the deletion of the group arena, the expected goal was not well achieved.
After I set up the three views, I sketched Loucheng and Keke little by little. The initial youthfulness, ignorance, and careful contact are all very real and beautiful. After that, getting along with each other in a relationship will inevitably have that flavor , Ke Ke went from being shy and forbearing to bursting out and choosing to communicate. I think it was when she came to life that her image was established. The latter did not give up on herself. The two became more beautiful because of love and did not lose their souls Independence means deepening.
I originally planned to use the foreign love to show the two people's experiences and small details after the start of the professional arena, so that the characters will be fuller and more agile, such as Lou Cheng's sense of abstinence, and Keke's seemingly weak The contrast between appearance and firm heart.
It's a pity that the clean net has lost a lot of foreshadowing, and the large cuts in the group arena also make the daily routine have to be reduced accordingly, otherwise it will be top-heavy, and only part of what I want to express comes out, which is not satisfactory.
Well, this is a beautiful story, a warm one, I hope it can bring memories and smiles to everyone.
I have said before about the new book, although this year there are two more ideas that I want to write and I think they are good, but they are not as strong as it, let’s go step by step, I will write these two new ones later, Take your time and take your time.
The new book probably has such a style of painting, steampunk, Victorian sense, hidden mystery, self-struggle, suspense and mystery as a major feature, mixed with some Cthulhu-like elements.
Well, I will make the settings myself, but part of the horror and horror style is more Cthulhu-like, just part of it, so don't expect to see Mr. Ah.
In short, the style of painting is a bit like the old universe world in I. At that time, I already had the idea of this book, and I needed an original copy in I, so I realized it unconsciously. Of course, the details were greatly changed. .
It's a different theme, a different feeling, and a new challenge. On April 1st next year, the mystery will open!
Uh, this time the rest is relatively long, because there is a Chinese New Year in the middle, and in addition, I have to save the manuscript to pay off the debt, seven chapters, and there are many, many materials to read, I need to be fully prepared.
In the past four months, everyone is welcome to pay attention to me. I may write a little bit if I have inspiration, and then I will share more interesting things with you every now and then, such as the brain holes I once had but are no longer included in the writing plan.
Speaking of this, in fact, at the beginning, I prepared some extra stories about martial arts, such as the setting of taboos, the injury of the master, the request promised by the Dragon King, and the alliance of other countries facing China's strength. Because the style of painting is different from the main text, I plan to Treated as a sideshow.
But now, I have to take care of my body, and I have filled everything that needs to be filled, and the taste of revenge is almost gone, so let's take a good rest.
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