Covering her face and crying, she didn't know what to say
I couldn't sleep late at night, so I had a brief chat. I originally wanted to put it in the final remarks, but I couldn't hold it in any longer.
Ahhhh.
First of all, in terms of the plot, I can assure you that the Great Heresy is coming soon, there is really nothing else to do, after the Perfect City there will be Ullanor, and then the Warmaster Ceremony, and Nikaea will be gone.
(I prefer to start the Great Rebellion in October, because I have plenty of time during the holidays and can leave time for ideas. I am too tired on weekdays.)
This time the protagonist went to rescue Angron in order to make him skip Ullanor, because this battle was essentially the Emperor building momentum for Horus, and it would not be good for the protagonist to steal the limelight.
() I can’t really write the protagonist as the Warmaster, otherwise one of the Primarchs would really defect on the spot.
So again, Horus, I trust you will be a good Warmaster, right
Promise me, Horus, to become Warmaster for the Emperor. (Raises his fist.)
According to the Emperor's determination to harm his son, Horus would not be able to escape. At most, he would give him some anti-corrosion things in advance.
Then comes the Great Rebellion. This is what I think at the moment (according to the ridiculous outline I have compiled so far). I will tell you all about it so that you can be mentally prepared.
First of all, I don’t really want the original loyalists to fall. Although the angels and Guilliman are actually quite dangerous in this book, I feel that they should be able to survive.
Secondly, there may be a forced fall from grace that everyone likes to see (?), a characteristic of the original novel, but it may not be Horus. (I promise it’s not Mortarion and Angron, can you accept that?)
Then, I personally think that it is very likely that none of the things that happened in the original rebellion will reappear in this book.
Or it may appear as a strange sense of dislocation.
Because seriously, you've already spoiled everything. No matter what, you can't just sit there and watch the Legion go to Istvaan V, and you can't just throw the pony aside and not care about it. That would be too forced.
And the goal of Chaos here has actually changed, so it’s a little different.
I had to reconstruct the Great Rebellion myself, so to speak.
Ugh!
With this difficulty, I can jump off the building and remake it.
This is also why I was constantly going crazy before, and why I haven’t updated much recently (although it’s also because I have classes to attend.)
Let me put it this way, I will never be able to finish just the Horus Heresy series.
(Kneel down)
Maybe someone will scold you, you are a fucking fan fiction writer, why don't you just talk nonsense without reading the original work
(Mask of Pain)
I really can’t finish reading them all. There are too many of them, too many different kinds, and too chaotic.
Moreover, some of his works actually have a relatively low information density. That is, after you finish reading them, you will find that he only tells the story of the protagonist, and there is relatively little background on the entire Horus Heresy.
Just trying to figure out which legion did what during which period of the Great Rebellion was enough to keep me busy for several days.
Maybe it’s different from other fan works, Warhammer is famous for having a lot of information, which is diverse and cross-fertilized.
(Thinking of myself writing Warhammer fan fiction, my expression started to become grim again.)
(If I could do it again, I wouldn't touch the hammer.)
You said that other fanfictions are just you sticking to the original storyline, but Warhammer is really different—
Because you can't find a clear main line in the original Warhammer. A lot of things are happening in several places at the same time.
And to be honest, my book,
Except for the beginning when Barbarus saw Old Mo, and the later beating of his father which touched upon the original plot, as well as Galaspar and Ibsen, that was the original plot.
All other plots are my original creation (I start to put on a hideous mask of pain again). I just find a battle that is mentioned in the original book and start writing it.
Well, it didn't work very well, I know that. (Gets down from his seat and starts crying)
I am well aware that war is my weak point; I am good at writing brainless jokes and twisted, crazy interpersonal relationships.
But a great rebellion would be made up of one war after another.
I know I will have to face war sooner or later, and I can't escape it because this is Warhammer.
So I have been thinking about how to write about war. I have read and referenced a lot of books (I would like to thank the similar Hammer novels for giving me a lot of inspiration, especially In the Name of Ashes by Yue Lao, and many original works), and did some preliminary testing in the story of Old Mo's attack on the Eldar planet and the Angron chapter.
The response was pretty good.
I just hope I can keep it up! (Howling, wriggling with sobs, feeling hopeless at the thought of a bleak future)
For me, the Great Rebellion will be a real challenge.
What I can be sure of is that there will be a big battle, and it will be multi-threaded (I plan to finish one thread before starting another, so that the story won’t be too confusing)
But due to my limited personal ability, I will greatly simplify the Great Rebellion, and will certainly ignore countless details of the original work. (I can't finish it!)
At the same time, it has been completely revamped, truly completely revamped, and completely deviated from the original style.
To be honest, I am just a lousy coder, an online writer, a fan fiction writer, and a novice writer. If I could really write with the feeling and structure of the original work, I would not be like this now, you know? I would not be standing here typing, I would be awesome as hell.
I would fly up to the sky and be shoulder to shoulder with the sun, instead of crawling like a dog here in the darkness.
At present, I have thought of three plot lines for the Great Rebellion, two of which are long and one is relatively short. Of course, this refers to the main plot that I will write in detail. The other hidden plots and stories of other legions will be glossed over.
I don't know how many words I can write about The Great Rebellion. I can't estimate it. To be honest -
When I first started this book, I planned to have a 700,000-word opening for the rebellion and a 10,000-word finale.
Now there is a big rebellion, where are you
Where are you? ! ! ! The Great Rebellion that I miss so much? ? Don’t go! Don’t go!!! (Running and chasing in the rainy night with tears, come back my most proud Great Rebellion, I can’t live without you, Great Rebellion—)
Oh, by the way, I'm going to open the champagne! I wanted to open it before, but I planned to hold it off until the end of the volume. (Okay, I didn't hold it back)
In fact, some people suggested that I should start a large-scale rebellion and rescue the Primarchs one by one. Wouldn’t that be good
That's good, but I feel like I won't be able to finish it, and it will become a real everyday article instead of a Warhammer article.
Actually, all my madness now! Complete madness!!! Complete madness!!! Crazy tornado!!! Tornado destroying parking lot!!! All comes from the hope of giving this book a good ending and hoping that it won't collapse.
Although I sometimes have some very exciting ideas, in order to reach the finale smoothly rather than a short-term explosion, I will give up on them for the time being.
I already have an idea about 40k, I just need my keyboard to start moving!
Well, actually what I mean is that this is my first time writing an article, and I’m not sure about the word count and update date, so I’m not sure how many words The Great Rebellion will have.
In fact, you see, for several of my previous plots, if someone else were to write them, they would have expanded them to tens of thousands of words, but I just finished them within ten thousand words.
This is what it means to not know how to use water! ! (He pounded the ground in grief and anger, pounded the ground in agony, why is this happening!!!)
For example, the fight against Coze, or the Perfect City, it would be unforgivable if these pretentious people didn't have some water in them.
But I just can't do it, and I don't plan to learn it, so I'll just muddle through like this, don't look down on me. (Looks away, picks the booger on the right side, rolls it into a ball, and flicks it accurately into the eyes of the Nurgling, who starts to cry. He kicks the crying Nurgling aside to cool off, and continues to pick the booger on the left side.)
The outline of the Great Rebellion has been torn up and revised, torn up and revised again, and overturned more than a dozen times. I really don't have the energy to make major changes. Everyone just needs to read it for fun.
Having said that, there must be some logical flaws or setting flaws that I haven't taken into account, and I really can't make them up. There are too many bugs in the original work, and it's really hard to make them up.
And don't overemphasize symmetry.
I'll just say one thing, based on the description of the Emperor in the original novel, and what he did before his death, if he had talked to the Primarch a few more words, the rebellion would never have started.
So far, the reasons for Perturabo and Mortarion's rebellion have been extremely outrageous.
And I can’t help but wonder how good Makado’s parenting skills are. Look, the Alpha he raised didn’t grow up that well.
Look how superstitious he is, and you didn't see that the old man from the Mortal Parliament realized how stupid this decision was politically for the Legion.
Macador, you shameless old thief, take my punch, oops!
You really can't look into many things in detail. If you look into them for a long time, the logics will start to conflict with each other. In the original work, the logic within one book is harmonious and coordinated, but when you look at multiple books, the logics start to conflict with each other.
Well... that's about it! And then at the end of the chapter, I'll just be miserable.
I am still a student now, with a full schedule. In order to write, I write after class every day, and sometimes I don’t even eat dinner (because I will feel sleepy after dinner, so I want to sleep instead of writing, and it is usually very late after writing, and the cafeteria is closed, but if I eat instant noodles, I can’t sleep at night)
It is not easy for him to write. If I am writing something mindless (such as today's crazy article), I will write it very quickly, but if it involves a big plot, I cannot let my guard down.
And sometimes, coding and whether it is interesting or not are two different things.
I'm just a little fw. Up to now, I haven't learned how to lay the groundwork for exciting parts, create emotions, and so on. The chapter progression is also very abrupt. I just write based on a flash of inspiration and my mind.
But it also means that I just send it when I’m not inspired.
It's just... you know, inspiration has its own CD, I have to give it some time to cool down, and when I was almost dying from doing homework, I didn't have the brain to make gold coins.
The little calf horse that sells inspiration, the brain is mailed after its expiration date.
(Like! Opening champagne!)
Sometimes I really want to code and I have an outline, but I don’t think it’s exciting enough, so I keep revising it, and then my speed slows down.
Really, with my update frequency, if I were to write another novel, it would have exploded a long time ago. Fortunately, Warhammer is currently a blue ocean, so I am still alive. (choking up, wiping tears, my heart is warmed again by the Warhammer PUA)
So I don't ask for any votes, it would be great if you could subscribe. I am also very grateful to everyone who has been following me and the ones who have given me rewards. If I have the ability, I will definitely make up for what I owe.
Today's article will be a celebration of the one million words mark. When I first started writing, I really didn't expect that I would be able to write one million words and not be too lame.
Perhaps this is the blessing that Nurgle, the loving father, has for me.
Yay!
(End of this chapter)