After the regular meeting of the editorial department, Yun Duo was told that only one of the two manuscripts she submitted was approved, and the one that was sent back was about Tang Yibai.
"Why?" Yun Duo was surprised.
"Because there is no news value." The other party replied.
A hasty explanation made Yun Duo even more puzzled. Why is Tang Yibai not newsworthy? Is it the wrong way of her writing
She is also embarrassed to pester others to ask questions, ask Cheng Mei, and Cheng Mei can't say why. Yun Duo had to wait for Teacher Sun's return with a very, very depressed mood.
When he was about to get off work in the afternoon, Mr. Sun returned to the office to get some things, and saw Yun Duo sitting at his workstation, his face turned into a bun. Teacher Sun asked curiously, "Yun Duo, have you been criticized by Director Liu again?"
"No. Mr. Sun, I want to ask you a question." Yun Duo briefly explained the matter to him, and also showed him the recommendation written by Cheng Mei, as evidence that his manuscript was not bad.
After listening to Teacher Sun, she comforted her indifferently, "Whoever is a reporter has not been shot, don't take it to heart."
Yun Duo was a little stubborn, "I just want to know why."
Teacher Sun pulled a chair and sat next to her, helping her analyze, "Yun Duo, first of all, the fundamental reason why this manuscript has not been passed is that you overestimated Tang Yibai's status. News is time-sensitive, and the effect of news is also Time-sensitive. Tang Yibai did attract a lot of attention when he just won the swimming championship, but it has been a month. National swimming competitions can be held four times a year, and the swimming championship is only one of them. No matter how brilliant you are in this level of competition, the result will be hot for a while. It is wrong to think that a chance encounter with Tang Yibai can make news. Second, you have misunderstood the point. Tang Yibai is an athlete and is becoming a Before a superstar, the most valuable thing about him can only be related to sports. For example, if you dig out the detailed reasons why he was suspended three years ago, then your news can be the focus. However, what kind of academic do you do? Inspirational, this pair of athletes can only be regarded as the icing on the cake. If Qi Ruifeng was a scholar, this news would be very exciting, but Tang Yibai has not yet achieved results, so this lace is really not enough. Understand? "
When he said something, Yun Duo was speechless. She scratched her head, "I see, it's because Tang Yibai is not famous enough."
Teacher Sun nodded and said, "One more thing, there is something wrong with the recommendation that Cheng Mei wrote to you. She wrote you a lot of compliments, but she can't grasp the point more than you, and you have gone astray. , her recommendation pushes you even further, it's strange that this manuscript can pass."
Yun Duo lowered her head and thought for a while, "Mr. Sun, I know how to change it."
"Hey, hey," Teacher Sun looked at her in surprise, "I'm not teaching you to revise the manuscript by telling you so much. Don't revise this manuscript. It's useless. Keep it in the hard drive as a souvenir."
Yun Duo shook his head firmly, "I want to try."
"You child, why are you so stubborn," Mr. Sun shook his head and sighed, he suddenly got closer, looked at her with gossip on his face, "I said, you don't really have a crush on Tang Yibai, right? ?"
Yun Duo is really afraid to hear the word "secret love", she shakes her head vigorously, "There is no way, Mr. Sun, don't guess."
Teacher Sun suddenly looked at her, "I understand."
Clouds hold their foreheads, what do you know!
That night, Yun Duo had high fighting spirit and revised the manuscript overnight. She repositioned the press release: the reporter met Tang Yibai who won three golds and one silver (the key point) in the just-concluded National Swimming Championships on the campus of the University of Physical Education. The tournament is confident and well prepared (emphasis added). When asked about his training status, Tang Yibai said that his training status is very good (an important point), and he can still find time to come to school for classes (an understatement). It is reported that Tang Yibai is a junior in this famous sports school. When he entered the school, his cultural class and professional grades were the first. He has achieved excellent results in the past three years (an understatement).
Well, Tang Yibai's reputation is not big enough, so she can only be rescued here.
The next day, Yun Duo showed the manuscript to Mr. Sun. After reading it, Mr. Sun sighed, "This girl is really savvy."
Teacher Sun thinks this is more educational, both for Yun Duo and Cheng Mei. So he took the manuscript to a senior editor in the editorial department. After the senior editor wrote the recommendation, he asked Cheng Mei to compare it before and after, and feel it for himself.
This issue of the newspaper has been finalized, and Yun Duo's manuscript can only catch up with the discussion meeting in the next issue.
It's also Yun Duo's luck. In the next issue, the comprehensive version has a looser layout and a small amount of manuscripts, so her manuscript is over.
Oh heh heh... Yun Duo grinned while holding the newspaper with the scent of ink.
She knocked Tang Yibai on WeChat.
Cloud: Are you there
Yun Duo: The report about you has already been published. I want to send you a newspaper as a souvenir~
Her message was hanging there, and Tang Yibai never returned. Tang Yibai had no news until noon.
Tang Yibai is having lunch at the moment. Sitting at the same table are their four good friends: Qi Ruifeng, Tang Yibai, Tomorrow, and Zheng Lingye. When I saw Tang Yibai looking down at his phone tomorrow, he asked, "Brother Yibai, have you been confessed by a beautiful woman again?"
When the other two heard this, they stretched their necks and glanced at Tang Yibai's cell phone unscrupulously.
"Eat yours." Tang Yibai lowered his head and replied, tilting his phone slightly, not allowing them to look at it.
He glanced at Yun Duo's information time and replied: Sorry, I was training just now.
Cloud: Mmmm ^_^
Tang Yibai typed a line in the input box: "Actually, I can buy your newspaper here." When he was about to click send, he hesitated again. After thinking about it, he deleted all the lines and changed it to "Where is your work place? I'll go out to class tomorrow and I can find you."
Yun Duo: No, no, you are so busy, I will find you.
Tang Yibai: Is it convenient
Yun Duo: It's convenient. The reporters just run around and commit crimes. It's convenient to go anywhere.
Tang Yibai: Then trouble you.
Yun Duo: You are too polite, haven't you eaten yet? go eat!
Tang Yibai: Good. ^_^
The next day, Yun Duo entered from the south gate of the Sports University, Tang Yibai came out of the teaching building, and the two met in the gymnasium.
In the open space outside the gym there were small groups holding events and people kicking shuttlecocks. Yun Duo and Tang Yibai sat side by side on the steps in front of the gym. There were many layers on the steps, and they sat high. Tang Yibai was wearing navy blue casual trousers, his legs stretched down the steps at will, his right leg was folded over his left, and his legs looked long and straight. Yun Duo stretched her legs like him, and then tragically found that she was almost a corgi in his contrast...
Hey, my sister is also a person with a height of 167, okay
"Your legs are really long." She admired sincerely.
"Alas." Tang Yibai sighed.
Yun Duo felt that his tone was really flat.
She dug out the folded newspapers from her bag, found the news about him, showed it to him, and smiled apologetically, "Unfortunately, the space is limited, so your pictures of Yushu Linfeng are not used."
"Really?" Tang Yibai responded, carefully reading the content of the report.
Yun Duo sat aside and looked at him.
The weather is so nice today, the sky is blue and the sun is shining brightly. Against such a splendid background, he appeared even more heroic and radiant. His expression was very focused, his eyes drooped slightly, and with the flat glasses on the bridge of his nose, he looked serious and serious, like a gentle and handsome scholar.
Tang Yibai finished reading and put away the newspaper, "It's well written, thank you."
"I won the prize." Yun Duo looked at him with a smile, "Tang Yibai, can you take a photo with me again?"
People are obsessed with beautiful things, not necessarily for themselves, at least to retain the beauty of the moment in front of them.
Tang Yibai naturally would not refuse. The two sat next to each other, Tang Yibai sat up straight, his legs were bent, his hands were crossed on his knees, his head was slightly tilted towards the clouds. Yun Duo held her mobile phone in one hand to take a selfie. After taking pictures several times, she always felt bad. She rubbed her arm, a little helpless, "Maybe my arm is too short."
"I'll come." Tang Yibai said and took her mobile phone.
He was holding the phone in his right hand, and his left hand felt superfluous and had nowhere to put it, so he was propping up the steps behind him, and he felt his posture was a little distorted. So he simply wrapped his left arm behind her and placed it gently on her shoulder.
On the screen of the mobile phone, the clouds were embraced by Tang Yibai, looking like a special little bird.
cough…
Her face was slightly hot.