My Senior Brother is Too Steady

Chapter 709: Talk about the recent creative dilemma in a single chapter

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Damn, there are too many problems in this Fengshenyanyi.

The more I analyze and analyze, the more I feel that this is not just a matter of fatalism, but something that is distorted from today's mainstream thinking.

Many readers may also feel that under the shadow of Fengshen Yanyi, the text that should have been relaxed has become a little breathless.

I have put a lot of effort into the current Conferred God script. For example, I have worked hard to avoid Nezha’s tragedy, but the effect of the writing is not satisfactory, because Nezha, which was born out of the Conferred God script, is not as popular as the magic boy script. happiness.

I thought it was because my writing was not enough, but looking back, it wasn't just because of my ability, but the core issue of why Fengshen Yanyi couldn't compare with the four great classics.

He has the distortion of human nature by feudal Neo-Confucianism, but has lost the extension of the arc of human nature and the resistance to feudal thought.

I actually don't want to write the original story nodes of Fengshen, but if several nodes are not connected in series, it is something else entirely, which is what I hesitate the most.

That is—whether to retain respect for the original work of the Romance of the Gods while changing the magic to the Gods.

For example, if Taiyi kills Shiji, the image created by real Taiyi will be destroyed, but if Shiji is not killed, Taoist ancestors cannot let Taiyi go. From the perspective of rationality and story logic, this is the dark side that Taiyi must reveal , is seriously inconsistent with the relaxed style of writing we pursue, forming a strong sense of separation, and I have no way to dig deep into the character design on this basis.

Really, this incident made me sleep bad for several nights, and my hair fell out in handfuls.

I looked back at the subsequent plot, and if I followed the script that I worked so hard to set for several months, the sense of distortion of this character would be stronger.

This kind of creation feels very painful, but I chose this path, and I can only continue to struggle and try new things.

What is the core of the Conferred God system

The presupposed justice is the so-called destiny.

This is the beginning of the trend of thought in the Spring and Autumn Period and the Warring States period, and Zhou was promoted and Zhou was demoted, and things were continuously distorted layer by layer.

It was only yesterday that I gritted my teeth and decided to break the original barrier.

— It was the souls of the dozen or so who should have died in the Ten Thousand Immortal Formation, but now appeared in the Conferred God Stage.

In the previous chapter, Li Changshou closed the door of his heart, which represented another direction.

From now on, Fengshen will no longer have the slightest shadow of the original work. It's not that I don't respect the original work of Fengshen Romance, but because this original work has too many flaws, and there are not many positive things that can be praised by today's society.

The author Jun really tried his best, and was almost driven crazy by Fengshen Yanyi.

I originally planned to start the final chapter after the end of Fengshen, but now, I may have to write a longer chapter for the original over 100,000-word final chapter, focusing on the process of turning a tiger into a Buddha to make up for the thickness of the plot, but it will not procrastinate the plot .

In the follow-up Conferred Gods and Great Tribulation, three climax plots will be used as a series to dig deep into some popular characters and avoid introducing more unimportant characters.

Little Nezha's script lacks tragedy, and it is not very touching. This is the most troublesome thing, but I must respect the style of writing and not write tragedy.

A reader's master said in the chapter that he read the author correctly, which really made me almost cry.

In fact, I have been stuck in a strange circle of thinking all the time, wanting to reprogram Fengshen, but the recompilation does not break away from the framework of Fengshen, so that I am now in a great dilemma in creation.

Now I want to understand that there is no need to re-edit the word. What I wrote is Senior Brother, not Fengshen Yanyi.

Learn from experience and lessons, this is also a sharpening on the road of writing

Brother, this book is actually not only the improvement of writing skills, but also the improvement of my grasp of the core of the story. I will summarize it repeatedly and continue to work hard.

However, the plot of the Conferred Gods has little effect on the overall situation, and Li Changshou has now entered a situation of confrontation with the sky (it can only be said that fortunately, I added the main line to the script of Conferred Gods).

The game behind Changshou will be broken in a way that everyone can't think of, if someone guesses it.

Then I will eat the keyboard on the spot! (Just kidding, just kidding, there are a dozen possibilities in total)

Continue to code, the next chapter should be late in the morning, because no one robbed me of the building. (no)