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Chapter 57: If you don't become a handsome guy, you will die!

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It dawned overnight.

"Hey... why is it daylight?"

Seiji recovered from his fantasy, and suddenly found that the morning sun had already shone through the window.

He quickly checked the time.

Mb, actually wrote all night!

Confused, he looked at the notebook in front of him again. There were only about three or four pages left in the original thick notebook.

I'm so fascinated...

Although the impulse to write caused by clicking the "write novel" action was also a reason, it was basically because Seiji was addicted to the thrill of creation and couldn't stop writing at all.

"Let's stop here." He put down his pen and stretched himself.

Then, he picked up his notebook and began to quickly read the results of his overnight creation.

"... not good."

Seiji watched, and gradually raised his eyebrows.

"It's really... very bad."

The speed at which he turned the pages was getting faster and faster.

"It's very... not good."

The eyes kept turning and looking.

Finally, browsing to the end.

With a snap, Seiji closed the notebook.

"These... are really all written by me?"

He tried his best to suppress the excitement in his heart.

If he didn't try hard to suppress it, he would probably, shouting with excitement.

Because, this novel is written... it's so beautiful——

Seiji put down his notebook, stood up with a sudden jump, did a backflip, and did a dragon-o victory pose!

yeah! !

In his heart, he shouted hard.

Seiji's original light novel...short story, titled "If you don't become a handsome guy, you will die!".

It tells the story of a boy who once had blood, but after being brutally beaten and degenerated into an abandoned house, he was possessed by a strange ghost one day and was forced to become a handsome guy, otherwise he would die.

Just looking at this sentence, you will feel that this work is supernatural and inspirational, but in fact it is the kingly battle of the war between good and evil.

In the beginning, the protagonist was threatened by a mysterious ghost and had to do things against his will, go out of the house, work hard to lose weight, study, etc., and move towards the goal of becoming a handsome guy.

The highlight of this part is mainly the contrast between the hero’s heart and his superficial actions. His decadent and negative heart is full of curses and complaints, but in actual actions, he has to be threatened by ghosts and behaves very positively and sunnyly. Even justice, unknowingly won the favor of several beautiful girls.

Then, when the male protagonist was touched by the rewards and care from the beautiful girls, and finally began to face himself seriously, the plot took a sharp turn.

A strange villain appeared, hurting his childhood sweetheart who had always cared about him in front of him. Fortunately, the ghost on his body temporarily endowed him with a powerful mysterious power to repel the villain.

Then the ghost tells the hero about his identity and the meaning of existence, why he wants to fight the villain and so on.

It needs the help of the protagonist, who needs the protagonist to become a real handsome guy who is handsome in appearance and full of positive energy in his heart, in order to repel the coming evil forces and protect a side of the land.

Under the great pressure and the risk of death, the protagonist chooses to escape. He hides in his room and refuses to go out. The disappointed ghost has to abandon him and use his fragile spirit body to meet the enemy.

At the last moment, the gift from his childhood sweetheart triggered memories for the hero, and he remembered the passionate self who believed in justice in the past.

"Even if you really die... so what!?"

"It's better to live as a waste, to die as a real handsome guy—"

With such awareness, the hero rushed to the battlefield.

After rendezvous with the ghosts, after a bloody battle of explosive transformation, he finally defeated the villain and saved the life of his childhood sweetheart.

When the childhood sweetheart woke up, he had already returned to his original form, and he was crying unbearably bruised, with tears and snot running down his nose, and he kept apologizing.

Although she lost consciousness, the girl who somehow sensed what happened gently stroked the male lead's face.

"Now you are really ugly... You are even uglier than when you were shrinking at home."

"However, I just feel that the you now, the you like this, is the most handsome boy I have ever seen..."

The novel stops at this sentence.

Under Seiji's sharp writing skills, this somewhat clichéd short story, full of complaints and sarcasm, completely highlights the charming elements of kingship.

In the beginning, the decadence and unwillingness of the protagonist, the arrogance and cuteness of the ghost, the fun caused by the contrast between the protagonist's heart and behavior, and all kinds of beautiful girls are all described vividly, full of humor and cuteness.

In the later part, the villain's evil and strange, cruel and terrible behavior, the negativity and decadence caused by the protagonist's fear and inferiority complex, the good memories of the past with his childhood sweetheart, the blood of fighting, the big scene of desperate fighting, and the scene after victory Peace of mind, remorse, emotion... are all vividly and vividly described with extremely appropriate brushstrokes!

This is an excellent work.

At least, in Seiji's own opinion, this is an excellent light novel that he can read in one sitting, laugh, get nervous, and be a little moved at the end, without any negative emotions after reading it!

Except the number of words is too small... so it's a short story.

In short, this novel is so good that he can't believe it, it's something he wrote by himself.

And it only took one night!

Feeling the excitement in his heart, Seiji gradually calmed himself down.

Would love to submit right away...but first computerized, documented, then printed.

Or, after entering it, send it to the website

Well, just how to submit a manuscript needs to be considered.

Seiji checked the time, it was time to get ready to go to work.

By the way, part-time job... He thought of the proprietress Tianhai Lixiang, and the peach teacher Tianhaidai.

Although Miss Juicy Peach is a cartoonist, light novels and comics are closely related, so they are considered adjacent industries. I wonder if she can give some advice

Maybe the teacher is very busy, so ask the proprietress first, the latter may also know something about it.

Seiji thought about it, and decided to take the book to the dessert shop... Of course, he had to tear off the diary first.

It would be great if Teacher Juice Tao could see it. Although she has male phobia, the novel should be fine, right

A popular manga artist might be very busy, so Seiji didn't expect much.

Dessert Sweets Shop.

After Seiji arrived at the store, he went straight to the manager's room and found the proprietress.

"Good morning, Chuntian... Yuanye-kun, what can you do here?" Tianhai Lixiang looked at the boy and blinked.

"Good morning, store manager." Seiji greeted with a smile.

"It's actually like this. I wrote a short light novel and I'm about to submit it..."

He explained the matter and showed the book in his hand to the other party.

light novel

Tianhai Lixiang felt curious.

She knew that Seiji was an otaku, but consumption and creation were two completely different things, and it didn't mean that spending a lot would give him the ability to create.

Of course, after watching a lot of anime, it is natural to want to create your own stories. In fact, this is the first step for many authors.

However, preferences and impulses are not completely equal to talents, they are only a small part of talents. It is a kind of naivety to want to step into the cruel industry based on these alone.

Amami Rika doesn't think Haruta Seiji is a naive boy.

The work that the other party really wanted to submit should not be a rough work on a whim, otherwise he would not be able to pass the test.

If it is a real work... then it will make people curious.

"Although I'm not from that industry, I've been with Dai for a long time, and I know a little bit about it."

"If you want, I can introduce you to a good editor, but before that, can I have a look at your work?"

Tianhai Lixiang said with a smile.

Thank you for the 1,000 starting point coins rewarded by the new fan Lengtouqing! ! !

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This is the first update of the day, there may or may not be another update tonight... (cover your face and walk away)

(end of this chapter)