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"Sometimes, I also read light novels. Although it is definitely not as good as you or Dai, I still have a good eye."

"Oh... I'm so happy." Seiji nodded, walked over, and put the notebook on the table.

"Then please take a look at the store manager first, and comment after reading it... I'm going to change my clothes now and get ready for work."

"Okay, let's go."

After watching the boy leave, Lixiang read the book.

"It's all handwritten, and the handwriting is beautiful. It's a surprise that Haruta-kun still has this kind of skill."

"'If you don't become a handsome guy, you will die!'? Hehe~ Is this... a novel based on himself?"

When Lixiang saw the title, she found it interesting, so she read it with great interest.

"The text is quite good, it feels very comfortable to read, the description is very vivid, and the narration is also very interesting."

"It's a little hard to understand so many stalks, but it's still fun to complain, and it has a wonderful sense of refreshment."

"The girl is also drawn very cutely, huh~ I don't know if there is a realistic prototype..."

The beautiful store manager read it, and gradually sank into it.

This morning, the staff in the back kitchen felt a little strange.

The store manager, that is, the proprietress Tianhai Lixiang appeared too late, and seemed a little absent-minded, and left for a while from time to time.

Her somewhat dazed appearance was in stark contrast to her usual calm and majestic image.

what happened

When the staff in the back kitchen sneaked in, they discussed quietly.

"Could it be something happened at home?" This is normal.

"I guess an old lover from the past called." This is ambiguous.

"Could it be that day?" This is a physiological orientation.

"You are all so naive! Hmph, according to my eyesight, the store manager is actually wondering if I am pregnant!" This is nonsense.

"Who is pregnant?" A cold voice rang through the internal channel.

The male employee who spoke with a smug expression froze for a moment, and the others looked at him in unison, looked at the call microphone that he had forgotten to turn off, and then turned their heads away in unison, pretending that they didn't know anything Don't know what this idiot looks like.

"Kato, whether to deduct wages or kneel down to apologize, it's up to you to choose."

"I'm sorry!! The store manager, please forgive me—"

All the staff of the dessert shop who heard such teasing and wailing: "..."

"What the hell are you doing in the back kitchen?" Seiji adjusted the position of the earphones and sighed.

"Sir, God knows." Tian Zhong, who was passing by, also expressed his puzzlement.

After the busy time has passed, it is finally possible to rest.

Seiji came to the manager's room again, and saw Rika Amami still reading her notebook.

"Yuano-kun... here you come."

Sensing the boy entering the room, Lixiang raised her head and smiled.

"Your work is pretty good." She bluntly made a positive comment.

"As an ordinary reader, this is a light novel worth my money."

Seiji was naturally happy when he heard such a comment.

"Thank you for the praise of the store manager. I am very happy that the work can be recognized by the store manager."

Tianhai Lixiang smiled even more charmingly.

"I'm also very happy to be your first reader, Yuan Ye... Haruta-kun."

"After reading your novel, overall, the most impressive thing about this novel is the text."

"Your descriptions, your narration, are very well written, the best among the light novels I have read... No, that is not enough! After all, I have not read many light novels."

"The words in your works are so good... that when I read a book, I can naturally imagine scenes in my mind, and these pictures are all moving! It seems that they are displayed in front of me... as if I am not actually in the It’s like reading a book, but watching an animation!”

Lixiang admired it sincerely.

"It's so excellent that I can't help but read it over and over again. You must have polished it for a long time, right? You can feel the great enthusiasm contained in it~"

Seiji smiled silently.

I have enthusiasm, but it only took me one night to write this short story... Wouldn't it be better not to say it

Hey, it's too awesome to pretend.

"In addition to the text, your stories and characters are also good, but I don't have much experience, so I won't comment on this aspect."

"I'll help you contact the editor I know now. She is the female editor in charge of the novel version of Dai's work. She is a very nice person."

Tianhai Lixiang took out her mobile phone and dialed a number.

"Hello, Miss Yoshizawa."

"Sorry to bother you at this time, there is something going on here, specifically..."

Lixiang explained the request in concise and clear words.

"Dai mentioned him to you? Yes, it's this high school student."

"Are you coming over right away? Well, he's in the shop... I think he's fine." Lixiang glanced at Seiji.

"Okay, that's it."

The beautiful store manager hung up the phone.

"Did you hear that, Haruta-kun? The editor will be here soon to see your work...and you."

Seiji nodded.

"Ms. Juicy Peach mentioned me to her, right?"

"That's right, Dai told her about going on a date with you." Lixiang sighed.

"Of course, Dai didn't say your real name casually, but only said that she would go to the school festival with a boy named Harano Qingwu, a freshman in Yuanhua Middle School."

"That is, except for my real name, everything else has been said!"

"That's right... There's no way. She was Dai's classmate in high school and one of the very few friends Dai trusted. It was natural for Dai to tell her about it."

Seiji nodded again.

"You shouldn't mind?" Lixiang blinked.

"Of course, it's not an important secret."

"That's right, but because Dai told her about it, she seemed to care about you..."

There was a subtle silence.

"Let me just ask, this Miss Yoshizawa..." Seiji twitched the corners of his lips, "Could it be... from over there?"

"No." Lixiang obviously understood the boy's hint, and smiled wryly.

"She's not that kind of person. However, it should be said that she formed a deep relationship with Dai in high school, or is there some other reason... In short, she treats Dai a little bit special... right?"

What is this very uncertain tone

Seeing Seiji's eyes, Rika seemed to realize that the boy was complaining inwardly, and coughed in embarrassment.

"Anyway, she's coming here, and you'll see her soon."

"She's a good editor, and will judge your work properly no matter what...probably."

What you said makes people feel a little worried, big sister!

Seiji suddenly felt that it might not be a good idea to ask the proprietress to help introduce the editor

Forget it, don't think too much, let's see when we meet people.

After about an hour.

Seiji was called to the manager's room again, and when he arrived, he saw a strange beauty sitting on the sofa, flipping through his notebook.

This beautiful woman is wearing a short yellow dress with a well-proportioned figure, flesh-colored stockings on her long legs, her long bright orange hair is tied into a beautiful long braid, her eyebrows are slightly thicker, her chin is slightly pointed, and her rosy lips are slightly pursed. There was a sharp gleam in the yellow eyes.

It gives the impression that she is a cold and beautiful young professional woman, exuding a sharp aura faintly.

"Hello..." Seiji started to greet.

Suddenly the woman raised her head abruptly and looked at his face with sharp eyes.

"Are you Harano Kiyogo?"

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