After writing this paragraph in the first volume, I felt completely relaxed.
At the end of the first volume, the great pirate William was established, and the story ended dramatically. The protagonist was promoted to major in the headquarters. I felt that the ending was good. I met the major again in the headquarters of the navy, and the final freeze-frame of the scene also matched the scene in my mind, which coincided with the title of the volume.
The "Navy Major" in this volume refers to two characters, one is Major Kahn, and the other is the protagonist who has grown from a recruit.
Looking back on this volume, I made a lot of revisions due to my lack of writing skills and some other reasons, but now it is perfect and there are basically no problems.
After the protagonist joined the navy training, in order to avoid boring everyone, I tried my best to lighten some of the plots and speed up the pace.
The real take-off begins at the end of the rookie period, at the beginning of Chapter 26.
Later, I began to shape the protagonist's family, and then came into contact with the original characters in a reasonable and smooth manner. Although it was a bit slow, it was not abrupt.
After all, I am not an old author, and my writing skills are not that good. I cannot write battles and daily life very well. I can only say that I tried my best.
Here, I would like to thank the reader with the nickname "leolin6414" on Qidian. He kept helping me find typos while reading. Since I type on my mobile phone, I check and revise after writing, so sometimes I always miss a few. I apologize for that.
By the way, let me talk about the important prototypes of the characters used in the first volume, although there are not many of them.
Protagonist: Coles
The cheat code ability of "Summon Shadow" is borrowed from the Korean comic "I Level Up Alone", which I have already mentioned in the author's words in Chapter 2.
Sister: Vilcia
The prototype comes from "Violet Evergarden", Violet, the same golden-haired and blue-eyed child. In this book, she is not miserable, she is free and has all kinds of love from her family.
Judging from her appetite in the world of pirates, she is very talented, but I will not write a plot about a sister fighting or anything like that, and the difficulties and obstacles in the future will be solved by the protagonist alone.
Lanros:
Inspired by the prototype, Lancelot, the Knight of the Round Table, I also designed a sad story in the article, and at the same time arranged the demon sword reasonably.
William: The prototype is based on the protagonist of the book "Pirate Code", Sauna King...
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I have designed the development of the protagonist's fruit ability. Dong Hai only needs it to be simple and crude. I will show them one by one later.
Of course, everyone knows that I’m not very good at naming. I will go to the comment section and create a collection of fruit abilities and swordsmanship moves. If you have any ideas, please mention them.
I finished writing the first volume, and only yesterday did I finally get the first recommendation from Qidian.
Now recommendations are all based on follow-up reading, and I really have no other choice. Please help by following the reading these days, leaving more comments, and being more active.
This book already has 160,000 words, but the current data is still very bad. I really want to be promoted in the recommendation and go through a few more rounds of recommendations to avoid the tragic situation of being put on the shelves. Please!
The story of the next volume will unfold a more exciting and powerful story with the original characters.
At the same time, in response to what everyone wants to know, this book has a single female protagonist, who will appear in the second volume.
This book will be updated at least twice a day. I will also stay up late to write more chapters in the next few days. I hope everyone can help me read the latest chapter within 24 hours.
I'm sorry to bother you all here.
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Volume 2: First Look
The navy, pirates, and the revolutionary army, the threads of fate continue to intersect in him. Who knows which path Coles will eventually take
The only thing that can be seen clearly now is a rising naval star.
Charlotte Coles!