After putting away his messy thoughts, Li Zexuan began to read the news seriously.
Of course, it is undeniable that the title of Li Yu's news was very good. Compared with the following dynasties, the folk customs of the Tang Dynasty were more open, and the common people liked to hear these love stories of men and women, talented men and beautiful women. , Li Yu’s title alone can attract people to continue reading.
After a while, Li Zexuan finished reading the first news article. He nodded, and then shook his head. Li Yu originally looked at Li Zexuan and nodded, with a look of joy on his face. However, Li Zexuan shook his head again. Li Yu's face had not yet bloomed. His smile suddenly froze.
"Uh, boss, what do you think? Why do you nod sometimes and shake your head sometimes?"
Li Yu asked aloud.
Li Zexuan glanced at Li Yu and said, "I nodded because I think the title of your news is very good, and the content is pretty good!"
"Not bad? Then the boss just thinks that I can write better content?"
Li Yu immediately found the key to the problem from the two adjectives used by Li Zexuan.
"Hey, smart!"
Li Zexuan praised it, and then explained: "It is undeniable that the story you chose, Xiao Yu'er, is very attractive, and the story is quite clear, but in my opinion, this is not enough."
Hearing this, Li Yu cast a curious look at Li Zexuan. Li Zexuan smiled, led Li Yu to the pavilion, and said as he walked:
"Haha, Xiao Yu'er, don't be dissatisfied. There is a reason why I say this. First of all, the whole article of your news gives people the feeling of just passing by. Your description of the incident is very general, very broad and very boring. , which directly leads to the lack of a sense of substitution in your entire story. You have a good subject matter, but you fail to describe a complete story with full emotions of the characters, and the readers will only read it in vain."
Li Yu supported the stone table, lowered his head and muttered depressedly: "Is it so bad?"
Li Zexuan sat down and chuckled: "It's not that bad. The reason why I told you so much today is for your own good. Of course, more precisely, I want you to earn more money. Do you still want to listen?"
"I want to hear it! Boss, please tell me!"
Hearing the money, Li Yu suddenly became interested, and the depression that had just been hit by Li Zexuan was swept away.
"Haha, you girl!"
Li Zexuan laughed and said: "Let me write about your subject. I can write at least 30,000 to 40,000 words and publish it in a newspaper for five or six consecutive issues. You see, the encounter between the rich man Mo Wuque and the peasant girl Shu Yinglian , you can describe more about how Shu Yinglian was at home when she was bullied by the village bully, how desperate and helpless she felt, and how shocked Mo Wuque was when he saw Shu Yinglian's peerless appearance.
Of course, the most important thing is that the part where Mo Wuque stepped forward to save Shu Yinglian must be described in detail. How could you write such an important scene in just two sentences? The preparations you have made in front of you are all for Mo Wuque to show off and slap you in the face, ah, you are preparing for the hero to save the beauty!
Also, when Mo Wuque’s father, Mo Yunshan, objected to his son’s relationship with Shu Yinglian, why didn’t you write about Mo Wuque’s conflict, self-blame and helplessness? Shu Yinglian couldn't be with the one she loved, so she jumped into the river out of anger. Why don't you put yourself in Shu Yinglian's shoes and think about her despair, reluctance, and tragic feeling at that time? This place is the most capable of bringing readers to tears! You have to describe it well.
What’s more, after Mo Wuque learned that his beloved jumped into the river, he felt lonely, sad, angry, and finally filled with grief and despair. He went to the temple and became a monk. You should also pay attention to this place. Rendering, these are just word counts, and they are all money! As a reporter, if you don’t know how to count words, bah, if you can’t develop a story and write about it, then you won’t make much money..."
Li Zexuan was there talking endlessly to Li Yu about how to fill the news with water and how to write one news article as five news articles. This guy completely forgot that he was the boss of "Datang Daily". If Li Yu really did this, But it was his own money that was being cheated.
Li Yu was standing by and was dumbfounded. She really wanted to kneel down to Li Zexuan. How could any boss personally teach his employees how to find ways to defraud the boss of his money? Also, the "watering" that Li Zexuan gave her, ah, it was a way to unfold the plot. It really opened her eyes, as if the door to a new world (the Road of the Water God) was slowly opening towards her.
"Ahem!"
At this time, there was a slight cough from the side. It turned out to be Ma Zhou. He just came out to get some air. Unexpectedly, he happened to encounter Li Zexuan "teaching" Li Yu. The more he listened, the more he felt something was wrong, so he quickly interrupted.
"Um, Brother Ma, are you here?"
Looking at Ma Zhou's expression, Li Zexuan knew that he had heard what he just said, and he looked a little embarrassed for a moment.
"Hello, Uncle Ma~!"
Li Yu actually remembered what Li Zexuan had told her before, "If anything happens to you, your Uncle Ma can still take care of you." She stepped forward and called out sweetly.
"Holy shit~! When did I become an uncle? Yesterday, you were still calling me Ma Guanshi!"
Ma Zhou had just taken two steps, and when he heard Li Yu's words, he suddenly staggered. If Li Zexuan hadn't reacted quickly and raised his hand, he would have smashed him into a dog.
"What's wrong? Is the little girl screaming wrong? Brother Ma, why do you have such a big reaction?"
Li Zexuan teased with a smirk on his face.
Ma Zhou was speechless. What else could he say? He could only scold Li Zexuan in his heart for teaching bad children. He was sure that this must be what Li Zexuan taught Li Yu.
"Sir, is there anything important that comes here today?"
Ma Zhou calmed down and asked.
"Um, wait a minute, I'll wait until I finish reading the news about Xiao Yu'er. There's still one article I haven't read yet! Oh, Brother Ma, you're here just in time, why don't you come and see what Xiao Yu'er's news is like! "
Li Zexuan handed the article he had just read, "A Lobster from a Rich Family, Escapes to Buddhism for His Lover," to Ma Zhou, who picked up another news article and started reading it.
Ma Zhou had no choice but to be patient, sat down, and started to read the news.
"Holy shit, shit! This little girl is causing trouble!"
Li Zexuan almost screamed when he saw the second news headline. Otherwise, the headline was so exciting. It read: "A woman was in the wild, and after all her clothes were stolen by a man..." ..”
Li Zexuan touched his nose. It seemed that Li Yu was going to carry out the sloganeering to the end. Hey, I don't know if it was a blessing or a curse.
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Thank you for the reward of being so proud, half a heart, fate and luck, the world is so cold, I am the only one who loves you, and pretending to be you (my brother is back!)!
Thank you Destiny, Wang Zhijian,..., Fake You, Zhenzhen, there are always unscrupulous people who want to harm me for my monthly votes!
(End of chapter)