Chu Xiang learned from Zhuo Yu that the most important thing is the character of the character, and he established the character, and then let the character develop various things. As for what to write or not to write, it all depends on whether the plot is useful to promote the story. If it has little effect, then writing it is nonsense.
From this starting point, the plot line in Chu Xiang's mind became much clearer, and most of the plots that did not stick to the theme were removed.
Zhuo Yu also told her that both blood and exaggerated drama are needed, if everyone is to be rational, develop steadily, and do some so-called "common sense" things, they will definitely die, and few people will watch . Why is gossip news always so popular? Because most people like to watch stories with intense conflicts.
See what events are on the hot searches every day? How many are brain-dead and unreasonable behaviors? That's how it gets hot. The real incidents of those young people with extremely positive views and five good things don’t even have the chance to be on the hot search. Who will read it when it is written
Zhuo Yu originally only wanted to say a few words, but he didn't expect Chu Xiang, a newcomer, to have a particularly good understanding. She could immediately understand what he said, so he was ashamed to say it too simply.
The two ate a meal for two hours. Zhuo Yu explained a lot to Chu Xiang, from characters who should not be too high or too low to feel substituting, to the optimal distribution of protagonists and supporting roles in the full text, and what kind of The relationship between the characters is easier to be adapted into a film and television drama.
Chu Xiang listened more and more seriously, Zhuo Yu spoke dryly, drank his saliva and laughed, "Didn't you remember? I said too much all at once."
Chu Xiang said seriously: "No, I will remember everything."
"Huh? Remember everything?" Zhuo Yu laughed in surprise, "I hope it can be helpful to you. For things like writing, no matter how much experience you have, you have to figure it out on your own. Most of the time, other people's experience is not enough. If it suits you, you should write it smoothly and feel right. You just need to remember to write what you like. If you don’t like it yourself, no one will like to read what you write, because without the author’s feelings, it is impossible to be vivid. "
Chu Xiang nodded, "I see, let's go, it's late, so I won't delay your rest. I also have some ideas, and I want to write a manuscript. Tell me about the three golden chapters? I heard that the first three chapters are special. important."
"Okay." Zhuo Yu got up and walked out of the restaurant with Chu Xiang. On the way, he explained to her what elements should be written in the first three chapters of the article, how to highlight the character characteristics of the protagonist, and how to arrange conflicts.
For Chu Xiang, this knowledge is very new, something she has never heard of. However, she knows exactly what kind of relationship between characters can be adapted into a film and television drama. After all, I have been filming in the entertainment industry all my life, and I can't count the scripts I have studied. I still understand what kind of scripts are attractive.
She tried to combine the script with the script. Although the difference is huge, it is really easier for her to comprehend Zhuo Yu's words.
When she got home, she was not in a hurry to write the manuscript, but found Zhuo Yu's to read. While reading and comparing the knowledge points mentioned by Zhuo Yu, I gradually understood the purpose of some plots in the first three chapters of Zhuo Yu, understood how to convey the characteristics of the protagonist to the readers calmly, and understood each plot like a serial. Pass it on like a buckle, one point at a time, always making people want to know what will happen next.
Seeing that it was two o'clock in the morning, Chu Xiang turned on the computer and began to write the outline, and then wrote a new article and wrote 10,000 words in the manuscript.
She got up and stretched, feeling neck pain, waist pain, and back pain. Even with a full set of equipment, she couldn't handle it sitting there and writing all night. She made a cup of wolfberry tea and drank it, feeling weak and weak all over, and couldn't help but feel a little regretful. With her current body, it took a whole day of rest to recover from such a night, it was really careless.
Chu Xiang sent Zhuo Yu a WeChat message, [I won't go to the gym today, I've stayed up all night and I'm quite tired, I guess I'll have to sleep all day.]
[Zhuo Yu: You wrote it all night? Then you hurry up and rest, your body can't stay up late. Need to read the text for you? I'm a little afraid that I misled you by not explaining clearly.]
[Chu Xiang: The Great God is willing to help, and I can't ask for more.]
Chu Xiang sent the written 10,000 characters to Zhuo Yu, talked to him a few more words, and then took a shower and went to bed. The aura still nourished her body after she fell asleep, slowly dispelling her exhaustion, and relaxing the brows that she unconsciously frowned in her sleep.
Zhuo Yu looked at Chu Xiang's new manuscript seriously. Since he had just read "Shangxian", he saw the gap between Chu Xiang's new manuscript and "Shangxian". Although the writing style was equally immature, the story arrangement It's too much to raise. If it is really related to the writing skills he talked about, then Chu Xiang's understanding is too strong, right? !
There were not many 10,000 words, and he finished it quickly, and he still felt unfinished. He immediately realized that this would be an explosive article. As long as the quality of the follow-up is as good as this ten thousand words, this article will definitely surpass "Fairy and Demon".
Zhuo Yu thought of what Chu Xiang said to write a new article to defeat "Fairy and Demon", and understood that Chu Xiang was serious, so he read this article more carefully. After all, Chu Xiang was a novice, but Zhuo Yu still saw some problems, so he marked them in the document and made some suggestions.
After finishing these, he also felt a little itchy, opened the coding software and wrote a 20,000-word update by himself. It caused readers to leave messages one after another, asking him excitedly what a good day it is today, and the number of people who changed 6,000 a day suddenly changed to 20,000, isn't it so cool? If only it could be done every day.
Zhuo Yu smiled when he saw the readers' messages, it is impossible to do this every day, and it will never be possible.
Code words are like this. You can write 30,000 to 40,000 words a day on a whim. When you don’t want to write, you really can’t write a hundred words. Mood is very important, and he has had times when he was affected by bad comments. So Chu Xiang was able to calm down and write a new article at this cusp, and he wrote it very well, which really surprised him.
But in this way, Chu Xiang's psychological quality is so good, then the netizens shouldn't be angry when he had a heart attack, but he misunderstood him.
Just as Zhuo Yu was about to turn off the computer, the doorbell rang. Liang Jun shouted outside the door: "Zhuo Yu open the door, I brought you a bunch of food, you can't carry it anymore, hurry up."
Zhuo Yu walked quickly to the door and opened it, and saw Liang Jun coming in with big and small bags, and put a lot of things on the ground, "Oh, I'm exhausted, give me some water. The parking space downstairs is full. Yes, I got out of the car all the way and walked all the way, I was exhausted."
Zhuo Yu leaned against the door with arms folded and looked at him, "What are you holding? Why are you still carrying a notebook? You can't be..."
"Haha, that's right, I'm here to join you. Zhuo Yu, big brother, you can take my little brother in for a few days. My house has been painted, and I'm afraid there will be some harmful gas, so I can only hide here." Liang Jun He smiled flatteringly, like a pug.
Zhuo Yu rolled his eyes at him, and went to get water for him from the refrigerator, "You use all environmentally friendly materials, what's the harm?"
Liang Jun snatched the water from him, filled half a bottle of water in one gulp, and said, "How can this thing be guaranteed? I don't understand, so be careful and stay in it later."
"According to what you said, you don't plan to stay for a few days, do you plan to stay for a long time?"
"Brother, why do you care about this? Look how many snacks I brought you? How beautiful are we to code words, play games, and eat snacks together?"
Zhuo Yu said speechlessly: "How beautiful are these two men? It's alright, you clean up the guest room yourself, I'll go change my clothes first, and go out for lunch."
"Success, you can go." Liang Jun sat on the sofa and put his computer down, and saw the open laptop on the coffee table. Zhuo Yu opened the document, and he saw the manuscript with many annotations at a glance, and it was actually written by the heroine Cultivating Immortals!
Liang Jun yelled like a ghost: "Zhuo Yu, what are you doing? Are you going to write an article on the female channel?"
Only then did Zhuo Yu think about the document, and he poked his head out from the bedroom and said, "Don't touch that, it's not my manuscript, I read it for others. You can turn off my computer."
"Oh." Liang Jun turned off the computer and still couldn't help gossiping, "Whose manuscript? Can you let Zhuo Dashen help you read it? And go to the female channel to write, do you know me? Okay, you, you have other people besides me. Friends? Say, when did you hook up?"
Zhuo Yu came out and slapped him on the back of the head, "What are you yelling about? If you hook up or not, you just met."
Liang Jun also had a quick brain, and immediately reacted, "The author I just met is still writing immortals in the female channel, isn't that Qingxiang Chuyun???" Seeing that Zhuo Yu did not refute, he widened his eyes and said, "Really? This is really Qingxiang Chuyun's manuscript? When did you two get so close? No, you two exchanged pseudonyms? Didn't you say to wait for the verdict to see if she copied it?"
Zhuo Yu sat at the door to change his shoes, and replied casually, "I've read the articles on both sides of them, and I didn't copy any of them. Tianxia Wushuang just dragged someone to hype them up. Qingxiang Chuyun is just unlucky."
Liang Jun was puzzled and said: "You are not a person who is curious about gossip, why did you suddenly read their articles?"
Zhuo Yu didn't hide it either, "Qingxiang Chuyun just moved to the opposite door. It's a coincidence. I thought I would see each other when I look up and down. I have to find out the truth to get along well, so I watched it."
"She moved you to the opposite door?" Liang Jun felt that the world was illusory, "Is there really such a coincidence in reality? What kind of fate must it be? I thought the door opposite you was empty, and you were yelling outside just now... By the way, how did you help her change the text? Do you think she has a good character? Or do you feel sorry for her being trampled by Wushuang?"
"It's time to talk about writing. I gave her some advice. When she wrote it, I will help her to read it. Don't mislead her." Zhuo Yu opened the door and looked back at him, "Can you go away?" ? How come there are so many problems with a little thing?"
"No, you Zhuo Dashen personally helped people write comments. This is unprecedented. You haven't helped me read it. Am I curious? By the way, ask her to eat with her and introduce me to her. From now on The three of us see each other when we look up and see each other when we look down, we are all good neighbors."
"She wrote all night, and catch up on sleep today. Let's talk about it another day." Zhuo Yu dragged Liang Jun from Chu Xiang's door into the elevator, and went downstairs for dinner.
Liang Jun looked at him and said, "I suspect that something happened to you two when I didn't know, but I have no proof."
Zhuo Yu rolled his eyes at him, "Stop your imagination, great writer."
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