Seizing Dreams

Chapter 121: criticize

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"Lin Ze, look at this manuscript for yourself." The deputy editor-in-chief said, "This is not your previous newspaper office! Please remember it for me! I told you on the first day I came here! Don't bring the local media here. Come!"

The above are two manuscripts by Yu Hao, with a lot of sentences underlined. Before the National Day, Yu Hao handed it over to Lin Ze, and Lin Ze passed it on to Jin Weicheng. Jin Weicheng hadn't read it yet. Lin Ze thought he had finished it. Check it out. But the context of Yu Hao's sentence was "I think the manuscript I handed you is fine", not that it is fine to publish it directly.

"He is an intern and doesn't understand." The deputy editor added, "You don't understand either?!"

Lin Ze hurriedly said: "It's my responsibility, I will never have such a problem again."

When Yu Hao came in, he was slapped in the face, and his whole body was covered. The deputy editor pointed at him and said, "You, you go outside! Stand up in front of the entire editorial department! Read your manuscript once! Read it yourself! Do you have face reading?! Have you ever studied journalism?"

"He studied psychology," Lin Ze said.

The deputy editor-in-chief said, "Then why are you doing this? I don't think you're suitable to be the editor-in-chief. Go back and reconsider. You're not panicking here. You have a thicker skin than the Great Wall. Wouldn't it be better to be a psychologist?"

"This... editor-in-chief," said Lin Ze, who couldn't take it anymore, "I will urge him to improve."

"I think it's you, Lin Ze! You need to improve the most!" said the deputy editor, "Lin Ze! Who did you hire?"

Yu Hao was silent, Lin Ze put away the manuscript and said, "I'll go back and let him fix it."

"Your page is temporarily canceled." The deputy editor said, "When the manuscript can be reviewed by the second group, you will come to me for a new application, and that's it."

Lin Ze closed the door and took Yu Hao out.

The last sentence was deadly, Yu Hao almost didn't catch his breath, Lin Ze walked ahead without saying a word.

"Do you smoke?" Lin Ze took out a pack of cigarettes.

"I don't know how to smoke." Yu Hao said, but he still took Lin Ze's cigarette. Lin Ze lit a cigarette for him casually, looking irritated.

"What do you mean by canceling the page?" Yu Hao didn't give up and wanted to confirm again, "Did I cause you trouble?"

"For personnel reasons, factional struggle accounts for 80%." Lin Ze said, "The quality of manuscripts accounts for 20%, which is my own negligence."

Yu Hao said, "Is there a way to save it?"

Lin Ze didn't speak. After smoking for a while, Yu Hao also took a puff, coughed violently, looked at the cigarette in his hand, and frowned.

"Don't listen to what he said." Lin Ze said, "No one is born suitable for a certain line of work. They all learn it. If you have a little confidence in yourself, go back and revise the manuscript."

Yu Hao looked at the haze in Beijing in the distance, remembered the photo of Situ Ye, the beautiful sunrise, sighed, got up and went back to revise the draft.

"Not really." Situ Ye said after reading the manuscript, "Is he impotent, so angry? Is the manuscript very good?"

Lin Ze was also annoyed: "Don't talk about it, let's work. Don't make any mistakes in the official account, and now there is not much traffic coming in. At the beginning of October, there are indicators of the number of followers in the club, and if you can't do it, someone will wait to take over. ."

Situ Ye made a series of fluent Chongqing swear words, greeted the ancestors of the deputy editor, Yu Hao said: "I really don't know how to change it, I really think this manuscript..."

Lin Ze glanced at Yu Hao, Jin Weicheng went out for an interview, and Situ Ye said, "Mr. Jin's writing is beautiful and his ideas are very clear, but the previous version of the text has always been short, you don't spend a little time teaching Yu Hao, he I can't turn my mind around."

Lin Ze said: "The key point is that my text is also a short board, okay?"

Yu Hao said, "Then I'll ask the editor in charge of the head office."

"I'll come here first, you pay attention." Lin Ze took the paper manuscript, sat with Yu Hao, and said, "You have to change your thinking to the interview manuscript. You learned this manuscript from Xiaomei? Barely enough, there are indeed deficiencies in the publication of the newspaper. I used to be a local media, and what the deputy editor-in-chief said was true, and I didn’t expect the censorship here to be so strict.”

Yu Hao fiddled with the manuscript for an entire afternoon, turning it over and over, almost unable to recognize the words on it.

Lin Ze said, "This should be about the same?"

For the sake of insurance, Yu Hao went to the editor-in-chief of the head office. Situ Ye specially reminded him not to be greedy and to seek help from a little girl, so as not to provoke peach blossoms. Yu Hao understood it in his heart, and asked the uncle to do the editing. However, everyone has a love for beauty, and their friendship with handsome guys is common. Others are willing to teach him a little, as long as it's not too annoying.

As a result, Yu Hao found that Lin Ze's manuscript that had been passed once was still picked up by a lot of questions, and some opinions were completely opposite to Lin Ze's.

After six manuscripts, Yu Hao was exhausted. On the first day of the holiday, Yu Hao worked overtime until 4:30 in the morning. When he came out of get off work, he saw the sanitation worker sweeping leaves beside the road. At this moment, he felt a sense of helplessness in his heart. What should he change this manuscript for? The page has been abolished, and Lin Ze is going to take it back and apply for a new version

But the next day, his manuscript was posted on the official account, and there was a signature under it: "Editor intern: Yu Hao".

When Yu Hao saw that line of words, his whole body seemed to come alive.

"Oh, and a signature?" Yu Hao said, unable to hold back, his heart was full of flowers.

"Originally, your position was a reporter." Lin Ze thought that Yu Hao had a problem with the title of "intern editor", and said, "But now that I'm not in charge of the editor, you can make do with it first. It's recruiting."

"Shooting hair, recruiting." Situ Ye said, "In Beijing, there are 4,500 a month, and there is no establishment. Is anyone here? Aunt Cleaning has 6,800 a month!"

"Auntie Clean's house has six suites." Lin Ze said patiently, "How do you know that you can't recruit those good young people who have more than a dozen suites and have nothing to do, and ideal young people?"

Yu Hao became accustomed to this kind of ranting, so he picked it up naturally and replied, "Then you have to target those of us who are rich, and trick one into the other."

Situ Ye said: "That's right, rich children are best to be deceived."

The investigative reporter department agreed unanimously, and Yu Hao said, "When will you go out to investigate?"

"Treasure the time now." Lin Ze said, "The department is not really established yet, and you will know how it feels when you go out to do special topics."

Situ Ye said, "I feel pretty good sitting here without being bitten by a dog."

Yu Hao: "I think Teacher Jin is really suitable to be an investigative reporter."

Situ Ye said: "Mr. Jin used to be a member of the Saddle Newspaper basketball team and ran very fast. Now I find that investigative reporters must run fast. This is a basic life-saving skill."

Yu Hao was quite eager to try it out, and was looking forward to doing an interview sometime. After all, his motivation for coming to this club was for the interview. However, looking at Lin Ze and Situ Ye, they were a bit fed up. The recent interview tasks were all assigned to Jin Weicheng, and they didn't want to go out at all.

"Write the manuscript." Jin Weicheng threw the book to Yu Hao after he came back. It was full of small incidents, and he said to Lin Ze, "Editor-in-chief, the editor-in-chief's office is looking for you."

Lin Ze got up and left, preparing to participate in the palace fight. Situ Ye bought an electric rice cooker and cooked for them in the office. Yu Hao started sorting out Jin Weicheng's manuscript. It stands to reason that this manuscript should be written by the reporter himself and handed over to him. Yu Hao, after Yu Hao has reviewed and corrected it, he will send it to the head office for distribution. But now the page that Lin Ze applied for has been withdrawn, and everyone is very angry. Fortunately, there is still a public account.

"I can't write like this." Jin Weicheng sat next to him and watched Yu Hao sort out the manuscript. Yu Hao typed a line and deleted it, changing the style. The first draft is always messy, and when he thinks of where to write, Jin Weicheng keeps interrupting him, which makes Yu Hao very depressed. After the bumpy manuscript came out, he began to revise the manuscript. Yu Hao was most troubled with revising the manuscript. One manuscript was over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over again, and he wanted to break the computer.

Every time he thinks "I'll do it this time", Jin Weicheng will give a bunch of opinions again. The most fearful thing is that the opinions are still very vague.

Yu Hao: "I think these are small news, not very good to play."

Jin Weicheng said: "Small events, big feelings, you have to find the moving points from inside, don't always think about making big news."

After Yu Hao finished editing the last draft, thinking that he had met Teacher Jin's request, the other party said, "If you leave it for one night and come back tomorrow, you will feel that it will not work."

Situ Ye cooked the sausages in the rice cooker, and said, "After eating, let's get off work. Why can't I click on this official account, it's so depressing."

Yu Hao's temper had picked up, and he had to finish the draft today, otherwise he wouldn't be able to sleep at night. After a few exchanges with Zhou Sheng, Zhou Sheng meant to pay him a gunman? Of course Yu Hao insisted on doing it by himself, so Zhou Sheng also went to the meeting. He had to listen to the financial report today, at ten o'clock in the evening.

[You have to go home from get off work before I leave the meeting.]Zhou Sheng left a message, [Otherwise this matter will not end.]

Yu Hao: [Okay, I got it.]I thought it was impossible, I didn't believe I couldn't finish it today.

Zhou Sheng: [If you don't go back, I won't go to work.]

Yu Hao: "..."

Zhou Sheng always threatened him with not going to work, Yu Hao had to answer: [Go back at eight o'clock, go to work well and be obedient.]

After coming to Beijing, Yu Hao seldom complained about his work with his friends. Moreover, almost all of Yu Hao's friends are boys. Between good brothers, as long as they hear each other's complaints, the signal they understand is often not comfort, but "this is a kind of help", so everyone will give solutions or do what they can. intervention.

Just like Yu Hao told Zhou Sheng that the requirements of the teacher who led him were too strict, and he often felt at a loss. If he has a girlfriend, the other person will listen and soothe his restless emotions. For boyfriends, it's a solution like "find you an outsourcer to help you write?" or "find someone to beat that teacher." Of course, all the questions in the end are "forget it, quit it, let me support you".

At seven o'clock, there was a knock on the door. Lin Ze came in and said, "You have a friend to see you, Yu Hao."

Yu Hao was plugging in his earphones, looked up impatiently, and saw Chen Yekai standing outside the door with a potted plant in his hand.

"Mr. Chen!" Yu Hao immediately pulled off his earphones and stood up.

Chen Yekai nodded to Lin Ze, and Lin Ze said to Yu Hao, "You go back from get off work first?"

"Let's have dinner together?" Chen Yekai said, "I came to the school to report today, just to see you."

When Yu Hao saw Chen Yekai, he suddenly felt that the whole world had calmed down without warning.

Chen Yekai's Porsche stopped on the road outside and said, "Get in the car, what do you want to eat?"

Yu Hao: "You bought a new car again? Where did this license plate come from?"

Chen Yekai: "The school lent me the license plate, and I bought the car myself."

Yu Hao didn't really want to see Chen Yekai anymore.

"What do you want to eat?" Chen Yekai asked Yu Hao again.

"Whatever." Yu Hao said weakly, "I won't be with you anymore, A can't afford it."

Chen Yekai said, "What is A, let's pay AA? Is it okay to cook in a private kitchen?"

Chen Yekai took Yu Hao to a private club. It was a very quiet courtyard with a table and two sets of tableware. There was a small pond outside where koi fish were swimming around. Chen Yekai wiped his hands with a towel, and said, "You must be too busy to eat anything delicious, right? I guess you hardly ever went out for a walk in the first month."

Yu Hao looked at Chen Yekai, this guy was always so handsome, and he had a calmness that never changed. Today, he ate a small bowl of Chinese sausage claypot rice made by Situ Ye, and most of the remaining pot was solved by Jin Weicheng, and now he just feels more hungry.

"Are you here on business?" Yu Hao asked.

"Post transfer." Chen Yekai said, "Our school has established an exchange relationship with the school here, and the young lecturers have exchanged for one year."

Yu Hao said, "The younger brothers and sisters in our school are probably heartbroken."

Chen Yekai forced a smile and said, "Then I can't help it. Have a drink?"

Yu Hao waved his hand hurriedly, "I have to go back and write the manuscript later."

Chen Yekai looked unhappy: "Why did you lose so much weight?"

When the appetizer came, Yu Hao finished eating three or two mouthfuls, and the two continued chatting. Chen Yekai asked if he could do his job, but Yu Hao didn't answer truthfully, everything was fine. Chen Yekai also saw that he was trying to be brave, so he didn't say anything. The waiters served the dishes one by one. Yu Hao hadn't eaten normal food for a long time. Although the food was far different from Zhou Sheng's, it was still better than the cafeteria's. Yu Hao was also very hungry. Kai poured him water and told him to drink slowly.

"Are you in a bad mood?" Yu Hao observed Chen Yekai's expression, he hardly spoke much today. But when Mingming came to the office with a potted plant, he still chatted happily with Lin Ze.

"No." Chen Yekai replied, "Thinking of something, I haven't had a class recently, and I'm not familiar with the place in Beijing, so I'm coming to see you for dinner tomorrow?"

Yu Hao said, "I have to go out for an interview with the teacher tomorrow."

Chen Yekai thought for a while and said, "Then, when you don't work overtime, I'll come to you."

Chen Yekai drove Yu Hao home again, and when he got downstairs, Chen Yekai said, "Aren't you going to invite me up for a cup of coffee?"

"Next time." Yu Hao said, "The room was not cleaned up, it was too messy."

Chen Yekai seemed to want to say something but didn't say it, Yu Hao hurriedly went back with his computer and continued to revise the script. In the middle of the night, Zhou Sheng seemed to be drunk, and he sent a video to Yu Hao, Yu Hao said, "You blushed like a monkey, how much did you drink?"

"I miss you, wife." Zhou Sheng fell on the bed, his tie was torn a little, his shirt was messy, and his shoes were not taken off.

At that moment, Yu Hao was so distressed that he couldn't bear it, and he almost cried.

"I..." Yu Hao glanced at the manuscript on the computer, then at Zhou Sheng.

"You're busy with yourself, don't mind me." Zhou Sheng said to himself, "I'll just look at you... That's good, it's good, um, it's good."

Yu Hao remained silent, and looked at Zhou Sheng quietly.

"Did Kaikai see you today?" Zhou Sheng played the Golden Crow Wheel between his fingers, going around like a coin, and he was very flexible.

"You know he's here?"

"I asked him to go." Zhou Sheng said, "I'm afraid you won't be able to work overtime again. Did he take you to eat something delicious?"

Yu Hao looked at Zhou Sheng with a depressed expression.

"When did you come over?" Yu Hao asked again, "I miss you."

"Next week—hey." Zhou Sheng rolled over, faced the ceiling, closed his eyes, pressed his eyebrows, pressed a few times, cheered up, and then smiled encouragingly at Yu Hao, " Husband went to take a shower, it's twelve o'clock, take care of yourself, go to bed early, darling."

Saying that Zhou Sheng had closed the video, Yu Hao let out a long breath. After the holiday, the weather in Beijing was getting cooler.

Yu Hao didn't take a shower, he didn't pack his things, and he forgot to put on his earplugs, so he fell asleep like that.

A few more days passed, and Yu Hao was in the office editing a new manuscript on the computer.

Situ Ye watered his potted plants and Lin Ze's head. Lin Ze shouted that he wanted to grab it, Situ Ye hurriedly dodged, and Lin Ze also said very annoyed: "The number of people reading this official account is always If you can’t go up, is there any way to promote it?”

Yu Hao was thinking about another thing. This thought had been in his mind for several days.

"Aze." Yu Hao said suddenly.

Lin Ze: "?"

Yu Hao saw the relationship between Situ Ye and Lin Ze, but when the words came to his lips, he couldn't get out of his mouth. He said, "I'll ask my friend to find a way?"

"Is it alright?" Lin Ze was also unsure, looking at Situ Ye.

Situ Ye said, "The one who drives the Porsche?"

"You know?" Yu Hao thought that Lin Ze had probably told him, and the two bosses must have discussed it privately.

Situ Ye said sternly: "I also know that he is too tired to feel sorry for you."

"No such thing." Yu Hao said.

Situ Ye said again: "Otherwise, why did you enter the door well, but your face turned black when you saw it?"