"I'll take a look at the ending first and give you time to think about it." Zhao Youyue replied again.
In fact, Zhao Youyue's temper comes and goes quickly. It is her style to always remain calm like a saint.
She didn't bother to ask Han Leng why he hid it in the first place. Didn't Su Li also pretend to be a male cartoonist at the beginning
According to Su Li, her works are male-oriented. In order to be able to mingle with male readers and listen to their unreserved opinions, she finds it useful to pretend to be a male creator.
As for youth romance novels, of course there are many female readers, so there seems to be nothing wrong with Han Leng pretending to be a female author. If his identity was exposed from the beginning, Zhao Youyue might not be so serious about giving opinions.
However, it’s hard to tell whether “Beautiful April” is masculine or feminine. It should be masculine in nature. Look at how happy the male protagonist is, with his perfect first love, and the goddess he longs for to pay for him...
Zhao Youyue is actually a very tolerant girl. Probably only the people she cares about the most can make her angry. For example, her tsundere Mama Wanghua, sometimes she is so angry that she wants to run away from home!
Han Leng obviously hasn't reached this level yet.
But she couldn't just let him go, there must be punishment for doing something wrong.
Zhao Youyue read the finale sent by Han Leng. Although she had already experienced it once in the work world, it was also very interesting to watch how she did it in the work world by reading the text.
There is one thing about Han Leng that Zhao Youyue has always admired very much, and that is his writing style. He is naturally very keen on words, and the sentences he writes can often become quotations by themselves.
Otherwise, why would "April is Beautiful" be called "April is Your Perfect Essay"
There are even loyal fans who have excerpted the wonderful sentences in it and created Lengzi's classic quotations -
"My world is silent and can't accommodate others." This was the psychology of the male protagonist described in the early stage, but Chu Luoxun's music once again made his world full of beautiful music.
"There is a city in everyone's heart. When you want to escape, you will hide in it. Some people hide for a long time, some people hide for a short time, but I have never walked out... This is what is in my heart A city in the world, a ruin in the eyes of others." This was obviously a male protagonist who had a psychological shadow at the beginning, but later he finally came out with the help of Chu Luoxun.
"Many people are sad just to show everyone that they are sad. In fact, no one in this world can understand another person's sadness."
"Compared to those who try to suppress the world with loud voices, those who make the whole world quiet and listen to you whisper are more terrifying." When Han Leng wrote this sentence, he was thinking of Miss Zhao.
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In fact, the more charming the writing style of youth novels, the better. It is not an online novel. Its selling points are "pretending to slap people in the face" and "killing monsters to upgrade". Even its plot is not a selling point. Looking at all youth novels, the real plot is There are very few wonderful ones. Its real selling point is actually a feeling and a resonance! So sometimes the more pretentious the writing style, the more readers will like it.
If a youth novel can make you sigh, make you miss it, or even make you suddenly sad, then it has succeeded!
And of course this requires sentences with quality, sentences that can be used in a full-score composition.
Because Zhao Youyue lacks such talent in writing, she naturally appreciates Han Leng's literary talent very much. When reading his articles, she can really read slowly word by word, because this is a kind of enjoyment.
Zhao Youyue almost read the finale in one sitting. The part about Chu Luoxun perfectly restored what she did in the world of the work. She had no objections. It was perfect and the quality of the writing reached its peak!
But the ending of the male and female protagonist made her frown.
Although Zhao Youyue is not very good at analyzing articles in depth, she can also see that although the male protagonist Gu Yuan still loves the heroine deeply and treats her with all kinds of tenderness and consideration, he treats her like a relative, while he treats Chu Luo Xun's deep nostalgia has been shown through the last few small details, making it seem that the one he loves most is Chu Luoxun.
This is definitely misleading!
Zhao Youyue has experienced everything in the work world. She knows best that Gu Yuan's true love is Lin Meiyue. But when Han Leng writes about it, the problem becomes complicated instantly, and what Han Leng writes is exactly what happened in the work world...
Is this what is so terrible about literati? The same thing is written in different words. Some places are written more, and some places are simply ignored. It turns out that it has two meanings!
This is the so-called Spring and Autumn brushwork.
In addition, the ending seems to imply that one day, the truth about Lin Meiyue accepting Chu Luoxun's gift and becoming a "genius composer" will be revealed!
This is even more incompatible with Zhao Youyue's expectations. As Chu Luoxun's real body, she is willing to become Lin Meiyue. She hopes that Lin Meiyue will get better and better, hopes to make up for Lin Meiyue's lack of musical talent, and hopes that she can also become a success in the eyes of others. genius, in this case, she and Gu Yuan should be a better match.
According to Zhao Youyue's idea, this matter should never be revealed in her lifetime. Even if Lin Meiyue "composes" no more famous songs in the future, she can still cover it up by passing her peak period.
But once this matter is exposed, Lin Meiyue will definitely be ruined, right
Moreover, Gu Yuan would definitely not be able to tolerate Lin Meiyue's behavior of possessing Chu Luoxun's works. The beautiful relationship between the two would even be broken because of this!
Even if Chu Luoxun dies, she seems to have become the main culprit for the breakup of the relationship between the male and female protagonists...
Thinking of this, Zhao Youyue, a veteran of Lin Meiyue's party, would of course be very unhappy, because from the beginning to the end, she simply hoped that the male and female protagonists would come together and love each other harmoniously and happily for the rest of their lives.
However, because Han Leng deliberately "learned for nothing" in some areas, Chu Luoxun was suspected of being a "mistress", and Lin Meiyue calmly possessed Chu Luoxun's original music for love, which seemed to be "Bichi".
Zhao Youyue really didn't think much about it before, but now she discovered Han Leng's sinister intentions!
The ending seems very happy, but in fact, if you think about it for a moment, you will understand that the future of the male and female protagonists is difficult to say!
She immediately sent a message to Han Leng, saying bluntly that this ending was inappropriate. If the other party was still Han Leng, she would definitely be more tactful...
But Han Lieng replied faster. He said that it was okay for the woman to admit her mistake, but there was no way to ask him to change the ending!
"I just don't understand why you always favor Gu Yuan and Lin Meiyue. You've been like this from the beginning! Does Chu Luoxun deserve to suffer?"
Han Leng angrily attacked Miss Zhao for the sake of his beloved Goddess Chu!
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