Not only Han Leng, but also Zhao Youyue also noticed the explosive book review section of "The Strongest King" at night. After all, evening is the peak time for many readers to read books. After everyone has finished reading, if they enjoyed it, someone will leave it in the book review section. Praise the author, or even reward the author directly, but if you are unhappy with it, or if you encounter a toxic point, of course you will complain about the author.
Zhao Youyue saw that in the latest chapter of "This Chapter", the description of the appearance of "Yu Shengfan" had more than a hundred comments, including "embarrassing", "poisonous", "vomiting blood" "," "eye-searing", "cannot bear to look" and other words appeared in endlessly, and in the book review area, some complaints with a lot of words also appeared -
"What the hell is this female character 'Yu Shengfan'? Is it possible that Rosemary wants to designate her as the heroine? If that's the case, I will definitely abandon the book, it's too poisonous!"
"It seems that I have seen the description of the vase lady in ancient online articles. Rosemary, I advise you to save it. I really don't write female characters anymore. It is so embarrassing that it makes me sick..."
"Yu Shengfan, get out of "The Strongest King", otherwise you will definitely abandon the book!"
"E-sports doesn't need a girlfriend, I beg Lin Feng to be lonely for the rest of his life!"
"As a long-time reader of Rosemary, this scene looks very familiar. You should just recognize it and stop writing female characters!"
"Seeing that everyone felt the same as me, I immediately felt relieved. Rosemary's skills in plot and game description are indeed very deep, but the portrayal of this female character is really eye-catching..."
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Zhao Youyue couldn't help stroking her forehead when she saw the explosive book review section. She just hoped that Rosemary could be more mentally resilient and wait until she went to bed tonight to enter "The Strongest King" and save "Yu Shengfan".
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At the same time, Ye Hai was complained about by his loving wife Li Mengyao, because Li Mengyao was also his reader and liked to read her husband's books.
Li Mengyao usually reads books on her tablet computer. She pointed to the description of "Yu Shengfan"'s appearance and scolded Ye Hai: "Why on earth did you write a female character again on a whim? You just wrote If you’re not a good female character, why don’t you admit this..."
Ye Hai looked embarrassed and said with an apologetic smile: "Actually, it's not my fault. It's just a supporting role for a rich reader. You see, she has already rewarded me with 2,000 yuan for this book. She is the number one fan of this book. !”
Li Mengyao looked at the fan list, and the number one among them was indeed an alliance leader nicknamed [Youyue]. Not only did the other party reward the book, but he also subscribed to it all, but she chuckled: "Do you think you succeeded in trying to please me?" Are you offending the wealthy readers? You must have offended them. If you write someone else’s sidekick like this, I’m afraid you won’t be able to get any reward in the future!”
As Li Mengyao said this, she couldn't help but think of the image of a heroine that Ye Hai used as a prototype. Although her appearance was not as flamboyant, Mary Sue, and embarrassing as "Yu Shengfan", the subsequent description was really It made her want to kick her husband to death. That was definitely high-level blackmail. He portrayed the heroine in such a silly, sweet, and Mary-like way. She knew that her husband wanted to focus on portraying the kindness and innocence of the heroine, but when he wrote it, the heroine was so stupid and innocent. The Lord gives people the impression that he is very artificial and annoying. Anyway, it is best to stay out of sight.
So when her husband said that he wanted to write more interactions between the male protagonist and the female protagonist to show the beauty of love, she decisively stopped her husband's behavior and almost threatened her with death!
Okay, that’s just an exaggeration…
What makes Li Mengyao very helpless is that Ye Hai doesn't seem to realize how bad he is at portraying female characters, and he also likes to express his merits to her - Wife, look at how I wrote this paragraph, did I portray you in a very unpleasant way? Readers like it
like? I like a ghost!
If you don’t hate it, it’s good. If you still like it, don’t dream about it!
Wake up, my great writer Ye!
Finally, under the strong intervention of Li Mengyao, the heroine based on her finally disappeared, and she could finally happily pursue books.
Li Mengyao has always been very satisfied with Ye Hai's new work "The Strongest King" because there are no female characters, and the plot is also very passionate, very powerful, and full of passion (sexuality). The "Eternal War" The setting is also quite novel. After adding online game elements, the work becomes more full and attractive. At the same time, she is looking forward to the main e-sports part in the later stage, waiting for the protagonist to lead his "All-China Class" , that Korean e-sports team led by the "Big Devil".
As a result, now, he actually created another obstacle for her by portraying a female character!
Li Mengyao saw the embarrassed look on Ye Hai's face and couldn't help laughing: "Haha, am I right?"
Ye Hai took out his mobile phone, opened the chat box between himself and Zhao Youyue, directly showed the chat record to his wife, and said: "I am a wealthy reader with a good temper, but it is much better than you were back then."
After reading the chat history, Li Mengyao couldn't help but sigh slightly: "This Miss Youyue is really rich. I rewarded you with another 100,000 starting coins after a disagreement, and then you ruined someone else's sidekick like this. I'm drunk too!" Have you ever treated an alliance leader so badly? Also, what does it mean to be much better than I was at that time? People don't know that you are portraying this 'Yu Shengfan' based on her. Besides, what is my relationship with you? Of course I can treat you You complain directly, and someone just made you a QQ friend and gives you a tactful opinion, so I guess he just can’t bear it anymore.”
Ye Hai smiled awkwardly, then looked at the book review section where he had exploded, and couldn't help but feel guilty: "Then should I just hide this female character? Do you have any suggestions?"
Although he said this, he had actually decided in his heart that it would be his last struggle to try the advice given to him by the leader of [Youyue]. If he still could not satisfy the readers, then he would completely accept his fate and never do it again. I will portray female characters.
"Give it a try! I will always support you anyway. I have no choice. As a wife, apart from playing games with you, doing housework, cooking and raising children, I don't know how to write books or anything like that. But I feel that the other party has given me The suggestion seems to be useful. If it can make up for your shortcomings in portraying female characters, maybe you can take a bigger step on the road of writing!" Li Mengyao smiled. In fact, she had already seen her husband's decision. Of course she supported it.
Sure enough, Ye Hai breathed a sigh of relief and just held his wife's hand, saying nothing.
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That night, while Zhao Youyue was sleeping, she skillfully opened the "dimension door" in her mind and entered it.
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