Although Ye Hai's wife Li Mengyao supports her husband in trying a new way of portraying female characters, that is, portraying her husband the way he originally portrayed male characters, and then insisting that it is a female character. If the original male character is a handsome guy, then Although she is said to be a great beauty, there is not much difference between them in terms of personality.
But she was supportive, so she still asked her husband to show her what he had written before updating it, so as to avoid any more eye-catching descriptions of female characters.
"My recent writing state has been very good, especially when I was portraying the character 'Yu Shengfan' in "The Sound of Rain", I felt as if I was writing with energy, as if I saw her appear in front of me, playing with that one A game called "Eternal War"! I can no longer write about her as exaggerated or false, because she is real! She is a very interesting girl who fell in love with games because of loneliness, and even played games for the sake of games She is proficient in multiple languages, and she also likes to play games while talking non-stop..." Ye Hai said to his wife very excitedly when he handed the manuscript to his wife for review.
Li Mengyao saw Ye Hai's look as if he had not yet come out of the world he wrote, and she couldn't help but believe it, because Ye Hai had been in a state of "inspiration" many times in the past. Whenever he was in that state, he would code words. The speed and efficiency are very high!
Even the quality of the text has been improved. Ye Hai, who is good at depicting male characters and game graphics, has more lifelike characters, and the sense of graphics makes readers immersed in the scene!
If the words written by Rosemary in the normal state are at the level of a great god, then the words written by Rosemary in the "burst of inspiration" state are at the level of the supreme god. They can easily mobilize the readers' emotions and make them happy. Readers are immersed in the world he outlines!
Ye Hai also handed over the matter of publishing and depositing the manuscript to his wife Li Mengyao, and then plunged into writing. He wanted to write more while he was in good condition.
Li Mengyao also had a huge sense of anticipation, and ended up reading the manuscript in one sitting. Then she couldn't help but said to her husband who was typing: "Is there more, is there more? It's not enough! I really want to see Lin Fenghe The plot of Tang Yongkai discovering that "The Sound of Rain" is actually the stunning beauty that they couldn't take their eyes away from, I'm really looking forward to their reactions... "
In the end, the only thing that responded to her was Ye Hai's very rhythmic typing sound. When she saw her husband working so hard, a trace of tenderness appeared on her face. She began to read the manuscript again and prepared to change it for her husband. Typos.
But what surprised her was that there was not a single typo in the archived manuscript of more than 10,000 words!
That’s awesome!
Really done in one go!
But what makes her even more gratified is actually her husband's subsequent creation of the female character "Yu Shengfan". She originally thought that this almost exaggerated Mary Sue character was hopeless and could no longer be liked by readers, but After reading the archived manuscript, she found the role very interesting!
Originally, the character image of "Yu Shengfan" was extremely empty and pale. It seemed perfect, but in fact it was very fake. The behavior of driving a luxury car to an Internet cafe can be criticized by readers who are more particular about rationality. What follows? Forced explanations can only barely fool readers, but when Yu Shengfan's true character characteristics are revealed, this "Internet addicted girl" who loves games and is addicted to PK seems to become more approachable and vivid...
The cutest thing about her is undoubtedly her mouth that can't stop. Of course, it is reflected in the game, which is the word bubble that is almost always on her head and never disappears. If this kind of person appeared in reality and appeared in the game, When you appear as an opponent in a game, you will definitely hate this guy who likes to BB and taunt all the time. But when it appears in a book, it seems that this "talkative" and "venomous tongue" have become cute attributes, especially among readers. After we saw the subsequent plot, we discovered that this guy was likely to become the protagonist's teammate.
Readers who assume the role of the protagonist Lin Feng will naturally have a favorable impression of +20 for the characters in the protagonist's camp. In addition, the character "Yu Shengfan" does not look like a pig teammate. Her operating skills are so powerful that even She hasn't revealed her full strength yet. If she can join forces with Lin Feng, how powerful will the "Glory Team" be in the future
All in all, the subsequent portrayal of "Yu Shengfan" in the archived content has suddenly further enhanced the sense of anticipation for the entire work, because the subsequent portrayal is so exciting that everyone even subconsciously forgot about the beginning That eye-catching description will only remind her of her status as a rich lady and her proficiency in multiple languages. This will simply make it easier for her to vent to her heart's content when she competes with e-sports teams from other countries. Make fun of and make trouble!
This Yu Shengfan is a trouble-making girl who can steadily stir up hatred. In this way, it will obviously make the plot more exciting and exciting. Yu Shengfan can be responsible for stirring up hatred, and wash away all the glory and character. Lin Feng, who is steady and calm and likes to hide his edge, specializes in output and slaps in the face. Isn't it a pleasure to occasionally show off his edge and pretend to be a dick
One is the king with a strong mouth, and the other is the strongest king. When the two of them work together, the scene is so beautiful that I can’t bear to look at it!
In fact, setting "Yu Shengfan" as a lonely girl without any friends is to imply to the readers that once she becomes a friend she recognizes, she will definitely go out of her way for her friends. If "Yu Shengfan" is regarded as a As for a man, it is not inconsistent at all. For a man with this kind of "lone wolf" character, whoever can become his good friend can turn the "lone wolf" into a "loyal dog". This routine is very common in novels. And that’s what readers do.
Obviously, Ye Hai has used the method of portraying male characters on "Yu Shengfan". He no longer regards "Yu Shengfan" as a dispensable supporting role, but an important supporting role. He didn't even realize that the setting of this character was not actually made by him, but he believed that it was the product of his inspiration. Anyway, he was very satisfied with this character and extremely preferred the first one he wrote. He felt that he had finally created a female character with a soul!
Regardless of whether the reader is satisfied or not, he must continue writing like this!
No one can stop the creators who are already “on top”!
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