066 Proceeding 2
After Mr. Lu announced the start of the first round, one of the servants put an incense burner with a stick of incense on Cui Tong’s table. The incense was not long and thin. It is estimated that there will be no more than a quarter of an hour. Up. The young talents around Li You immediately began to think about it, they were all very serious, either shaking their heads or shaking their heads, or closing their eyes and concentrating, or even starting to write.
Among these people, Li You should be the easiest person. He doesn’t need to prove anything. He can write and write at will. Although the poems he remembers are limited in his previous life, after all, he lived in the Tang Dynasty and was educated since childhood. It is not impossible to make poetry, but the level will not be too high.
But Su Yang was a little nervous. Although he has worked very hard in the past few years, it is incomparable to these young talents after all. You can only do your best.
"Why Brother You haven't started writing yet?" Xu Ying, who was next to the pavilion, saw Li You just sitting like this, without any intention of doing anything, and asked the dog.
"Yingying, the young master is unwilling to show the limelight. If you really want the young master to write poems, hehe, you don't have to be a master at the time."
As soon as he said this, Master Yan who was not far away heard it really. Don’t think he was an old master, and his ears were not back. Now it’s not too noisy here, and the dog’s voice is not suppressed. It’s no wonder people can Hear.
But Yingying asked: "Brother Dog, how do you know?"
"Haha, Gao Huailiang took out the Young Master’s collection of poems and displayed them. This is more than 20 poems. With one of them, I was drunk and watched the sword at the lamp, dreaming of blowing the horns, and I heard it as if I was in a military camp. The young master hasn't written it yet, I'm afraid he doesn't want to reveal it."
Master Yan really heard it. He looked at the people present and found that a fourteen or five-year-old boy was sitting and staring at the paper without writing. But after a while, Li You picked up the pen and started to write, and a poem came out on the paper, which he made himself.
Xiao Bi watched as everyone else was writing poems, but Li You sat idly by, sluggishly writing. He also frowned, secretly saying that this kid can't write poems? But when I think about Cui Tong's words, I think he shouldn't even be able to write a poem. Fortunately, seeing Li You finally wrote the poem, I just don’t know what the poem is like, so I have to take a good look at Li You’s literary talent later.
In this way, all eyes were placed on Li You invisibly. After the incense was burned, the servants also received all the poems and handed them to the pavilion, where they were judged by Mr. Lu and Master Yan.
After a discussion between the two great scholars, Master Yan picked up a poem and said, "Who is Lu Hanzhong?"
A seemingly thin young man stood up, bowed and said, "The student is Lu Hanzhong."
Yan Fuzi nodded and said: "Your poem: There are many rows of garden flowers and mountains, and Hongyeshan Village is really shallow. After the rivers and lakes are planted on the bridge, Qixiashan Cui will temporarily visit Wu. Isn't it?" New 81 Chinese website updated the fastest mobile phone End: https:/
"It was made by students."
"This poem is not bad in artistic conception, but the words need to be refined. Since you admire the beauty of Qixia Mountain, you should refine this sentence, and why you come to admire the matter of traveling alone. Even so, this poem is still available. Six points."
"Students thank Master Yan for his teachings."
Then, Mr. Lu took out another poem and read: "But seeing flowers falling under the window, diving in the mountains and raining endlessly. The dew is endless and the fishermen in Shanguo haven't tasted the rest. Su Yang, this is you. Done?"
After Su Yang got up and gave a salute, he replied, "It was the students."
"This poem is good, and both the artistic conception and poetry can express what we saw at the time. It is not easy. This poem can get eight points."
When I arrived at Li You, Master Yan asked: "Li You, what you do is just to see that the spring and rainy days are connected, and the rice grows through the dry paddy fields. The mountains are high with green autumn grass, and the snow is shining in the sun. A poem. Although I wrote about spring, summer, autumn and winter, why didn't I express my emotions? Couldn't you think of the next four sentences?"
Li You saluted again: "Master Yan, students really can only write these."
Master Yan could clearly see that this was a rhyme poem, but it was only half of it. He didn't believe that Li You only came up with four sentences. But Li You didn't recognize it, so he had to give points accordingly, giving Li You seven points, which is not bad for Li You.
The topic of the second round is the season. It seems simple, but it is a bit more difficult than the first round. Whether it is Su Yang or Li You, it is a bit difficult to write. Now only two or three people write poems, which define the category of poems. It's not so easy to think of.
After thinking about it, Li You thought of a poem. This is Du Mu's poem. He looked at Su Yang on the side and saw that he frowned. Then he wrote the poem, but he rubbed it again and gave him a glance. Look, when no one noticed, he threw it to Su Yang.
No one saw it here, because everyone was thinking that Li You's movements were very secretive, but one person still saw it, and that was Xiao Qixue, but she didn't speak.
After one stick of incense burned, the poems were taken away, and after the rest were scored, three of the best poems were rated and commented on. But this time, it was not Li You, but Su Yang's poems were very good.
Mr. Lu took a poem and said: "It rains heavily during the Qingming Festival, and pedestrians on the road want to die. If you ask where the restaurant is, the shepherd boy points to Xinghua Village." The fastest computer terminal of the new 81 Chinese website: https://
Caressing his gray beard, Mr. Lu nodded with great satisfaction: "A little poem, easy to understand, extremely free, without any traces of manipulation, it is rare! The rhythm is harmonious and complete, and the scene is clear and vivid. Without losing the realm, a good poem is actually a good work. This poem has a full score, ten."
Xiao Bi said to Cui Tong: "I never thought that this masterpiece can be seen today, is it really true."
Cui Tong also nodded and said: "This poem has a concise narrative, clear at a glance, unremarkable, but still intriguing, intriguing, not bad, not bad."
Then, Master Yan said calmly: "The second round is over. Let's start the third round. The topic of this round is night. You can start now."
After thinking for a while, Su Yang looked at Li You and saw that he had already started writing. Time passed quickly, and a stick of incense quickly burned out. The servant took away everyone’s poems again. The two great scholars continued to judge. This is the last round. Su Yang is currently ranked first. He scored 18 points and second place with 17 points. As long as Su Yang can score eight points, he should be able to get the first place.
However, Li You only scored 15 points in two games. He still feels quite good about it. After all, this is really a poem made by himself. Although he didn't make it to the top three, he was tied for fifth, which is pretty good. .
The two great scholars had finished scoring, and Yan Fuzi stood up and said, "The one with the highest score in this game, Su Yang, got nine points." Then he read the poem: "A toast night invites Yueming to come, Nanfeng drinks A cup of drunk, Guang Ting sighed a lot of worry.
Drinking alone under the moon, accompanied by the wind, the heroic spirit emerges spontaneously. The word 酹 is used here wonderfully. If there is no such word, the artistic conception will fade a lot. On the contrary, because of the word, it will increase the color , It seems that your knowledge is not bad. "(End of this chapter)