The Novelist Forced to Become Famous

Chapter 268: Ji Yunyun’s commission

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"A bold feast of reasoning, is it an adventure or a trick? A review of Demon Doctor 3"

"After reading this book, Uncle Bing's first feeling was surprise, and after being surprised, he was a little worried - Jian Jing chose this narrative method, taking a big risk. Although the reading experience has been greatly improved, as a mystery novel, whether it is a tricky point still needs to be considered...

"Fortunately, the plot of Doctor Evil 3 is very solid, and the two stories that echo each other are of a high standard, so people don't think that she has run out of ideas and relies on some tricks to attract attention...

"As usual, I won't spoil the mystery novels. I can only give you a general introduction. The first and second stories are rated around 7, and the third story is hard to rate. From the reading experience, I can give it an 8 for the sudden realization I had at the end, but in terms of the inference tricks, it lacks the amazing surprise that will make people applaud.

"This is the only shortcoming of this article. But then again, with the development of detective novels, there is no routine that has not been written before. Being able to write the case rigorously and smoothly is already a pass.

“…Jane Jing’s strengths lie in her high level of storytelling and reasoning, which complement each other and make the reading process very enjoyable. It can be said that it is a one-stop read without any boring moments.

"When writing this, I suddenly found an easter egg. Although the murderer's name was not revealed in the end, he actually told us a long time ago. Even if you don't like to use your brain when reading, you can get the answer directly. However, it's rare to have such a strong interactive mystery novel. It would be a pity not to deduce it myself...

"I have written 3,000 words without realizing it. To sum it up in one sentence: the overall score is 8.9. It is not as artistic as Hide and Seek and Rose Gold, but from the perspective of the story, it is definitely worth reading. It will definitely be shortlisted as the bestseller of the year."

Uncle Bing is a master of Chinese language and has a high literary literacy. He has worked in a newspaper office. His writing is straightforward and pragmatic, and he has both aesthetic and expressive abilities, which has earned him the trust and love of many fans.

His comments on Jian Jing have always been fair and objective. He admits that her stories are well-written, but also points out from an artistic perspective that the "Devil Doctor" series does not have the ideological content of "Hide and Seek" and "Rose Gold".

In short, it is a very typical bestseller.

The trick she played this year was not new, as people had already done something similar before. However, this kind of attempt required great confidence.

If the story itself is not good, it will be said to be tricky. Only when the story itself is solid enough can it enhance the reader's reading experience.

Facts have proved that Jian Jing's performance is still stable.

Readers responded well to her little creativity and thought it really enhanced the immersion and the feeling of the two lines moving forward in parallel echoed the core of the story.

Such a help post appeared on the Bookworm Forum.

"Please ask! Should I start watching Devil May Cry 3 from the black part or the white part?"

rt

1l: It is recommended to start from the middle

2l: There is nothing wrong with the eldest brother, the third story is the earliest

3l: Don’t listen to them, it’s better to watch it together!

4l: They are actually the same, there is no difference

5l: You can look at it from the front, from the back, or from the middle.

There is also this.

"I've finished watching Devil May Cry 3. Do you want to talk about Easter eggs?"

LZ: Spoiler alert, those who have finished watching the movie, please share. If you haven’t finished watching the movie, I strongly recommend you click x

... Please leave if you enter by mistake...

… It’s not too late now…

Okay, let me ask you, is the final Easter egg the pattern on the pages of the book

1l: Yes, black out the parts of the two cases before and after, and you can see the murderer

2l: This password design is really fun, but it will spoil the story if I cover it.

3l: There is another way. If you look at the pattern on the cover in the sun, you will also be surprised.

4l: This book is really exquisite. Teacher Jian is getting more and more famous! !

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The sales of "Devil's 3" are stable, and the word of mouth is stable, everything seems so natural.

Mr. Tao from Morning Star congratulated Kang Mucheng in a sour tone, while his colleagues sent their congratulations to Jian Jing.

She spent some time dealing with these tedious but necessary interpersonal relationships, and did not forget to send her signed books to her mentors, classmates, and friends.

Among them is Ji Yunyun.

Jian Jing sent her a WeChat message, asking her when it would be convenient for her to pick it up, or should she give it to Ji Feng and ask him to pass it on

As a result, Ji Yunyun immediately replied that tomorrow was Sunday and the school was closed, so could she go out for coffee

Jian Jing suddenly became suspicious.

Ji Yunyun was her loyal fan, but she was also a girl who knew her limits and had never made any embarrassing requests—after all, they were not too familiar with each other.

She and her brother are completely different people.

She thought about it and replied: [Okay, when?]

Ji Yunyun: [You can come whenever it’s convenient for you. My classmates and I are very free.]

Then he asked anxiously: "Can I bring my classmates with me? If it's not convenient, I will go alone and cause you trouble."

Jian Jing: [It doesn’t matter, then 1pm]

Ji Yunyun: [hug.jpg]

The next day, Jian Jing brought a few signed books to the appointment and found that Ji Yunyun and her classmates were already there.

The classmate looked familiar, it was Xiaoxiao who had escaped with him during the fire. The two kids sat in the corner and ordered a cup of coffee each, which seemed to have been left for a while.

The strange thing is that although they look sad, they still look lively and energetic.

"Good afternoon." Jian Jing greeted, "You are Xiaoxiao, right? Long time no see."

Xiaoxiao was a little nervous: "Hello, Teacher Jian, you still remember me."

"Of course, we escaped together." She smiled and sat down, ordered a flat white, ice cream and some snacks, and handed them two new books, "Read after the exam."

Ji Yunyun thanked him sincerely, but hesitated to speak.

Jian Jing got straight to the point and asked, "Did anything happen?"

She nodded awkwardly, not knowing where to start.

"If you don't mind, you can tell me." Jian Jing said, "I will keep it a secret from your brother."

Ji Yunyun scratched her head, as if she had made up her mind: "I doubt that Miao Tong from our class did not commit suicide."

Jian Jing uttered "Ah" softly, and said, "Tell me in detail."

"Miao Tong is the vice-monitor of our class. She is a very nice person with good grades. I always said that she would be recommended for admission, but..." Ji Yunyun's voice suddenly fell, "She jumped off the building."

"Go on."

"At that time, our class was in physical education class - well, physical education class for senior high school students is self-study, but since April, teachers have encouraged us to go out for a walk, relax, and not stay in the classroom all the time - so some people were in the classroom and some were not."

Although Ji Yunyun has read so many detective novels, she is a little tongue-tied when it comes to telling a story. She tries to tell it in detail but ends up speaking in a confusing way.

"Miao Tong went to the laboratory building and then jumped from the top floor. I, I was playing badminton at the time, on the playground behind the laboratory building."

Ji Yunyun paused and said with difficulty: "I saw her fall down."

Xiaoxiao hugged her friend's arm and said, "We immediately went to call the teacher. We didn't know it was Miao Tong at the time. We only found out later that it was her..."

"Did the police come?" Jian Jing asked.

Ji Yunyun nodded: "I investigated and found a suicide note. Her recent academic performance was not very good. She might have been under too much pressure, so she said she committed suicide."

Jian Jing nodded slowly, then asked, "Why do you think she didn't commit suicide?"

"Because a few strange things happened recently." Xiaoxiao said, "There is a girl in our dormitory, she has become a little weird. I don't know how to put it - well, she is a little neurotic."

The girl bit her lip and described it in confusion: "In the middle of the night, she didn't sleep and stood on the balcony. She looked like she was going to jump down. Her roommate just got out of bed to go to the bathroom and almost fell off the balcony. But when we asked her, she said it was just the wind. Also, when she was walking on the road, she would always look back and say someone was calling her. We said no one, but she said yes, it was Miao Tong's voice."

"Do you suspect that she is guilty?" Jian Jing asked.

Xiao Xiao and Ji Yunyun looked at each other and nodded: "She didn't have a good relationship with Miao Tong before, so she might be a bit suspicious."

"I think the class monitor is also a suspect." Ji Yunyun gradually got into the situation, "He and Miao Tong are competitors. Both of them may be recommended for admission, but Miao Tong's grades have been unstable since the beginning of this school year. It seems that he is in a relationship."

Jian Jing finished her ice cream and asked, "With whom?"

"Squad leader." Ji Yunyun was filled with indignation, "This might be his conspiracy."

"You're talking about motives." Jian Jing wiped her hands and asked, "Where are the real doubts? Or do you have any evidence?"

Ji Yunyun took out a notebook from her schoolbag and spread it out: "Miao Tong jumped off the building on May 4, during the second class on Wednesday afternoon. I asked a few classmates who were close to Miao Tong, and they said that although Miao Tong was in a bad mood recently, she didn't seem to be depressed. She even talked to them about the university she wanted to go to."

Xiaoxiao added: "People in her dormitory said that Miao Tong likes a singer very much and she wants to go to his concert after the college entrance examination."

"Her classmate said that during lunch break, Miao Tong was still doing math homework. Who would do homework before committing suicide? And math homework!!"

"Before the physical education class, she told us that the new yogurt was very delicious and recommended us to try it."

"Besides, there's no need to jump off the building to go to the lab, right? It's very far away."

"The senior who jumped off the building two years ago was from the teaching building."

The two students talked about a lot of "doubts" at once, some of which made sense, while others were unsatisfactory.

Jian Jing thought about it and asked Ji Yunyun: "This may be convenient for your brother to investigate. Have you told him about it?"

"He told me to leave it alone!" Ji Yunyun shouted, her face full of resistance, "He told me to study hard and not to be distracted - how could I not be distracted? A person I have to see every day died inexplicably, who can really not take it seriously?"

After hearing this, Jian Jing immediately realized that she had to accept this "commission".

There is less than a month left before the college entrance examination. If they continue to let this feeling of doubt occupy their minds, they will not be able to perform well in the exam.

She asked, “What do you want me to do?”

Ji Yunyun asked eagerly, "Can you help us investigate this case?"

"Sure." Jian Jing told her clearly, "But it's not convenient for me to ask teachers and students for confessions."

Closed schools do not welcome outsiders, not to mention a suicide incident that is close to a scandal. The school probably won't agree to her investigation.

Ji Yunyun understood and her face fell: "Do you really have to say it?"

"Don't worry, I'll talk to him, just pretend you don't know anything." Jian Jing took her notebook away, "Leave this to me, you guys..."

There is less than a month left before the college entrance examination, so it is not good to be distracted. However, this cannot be said directly, as it will make adolescent children more rebellious.

She thought about it and pretended to be serious and reminded him: "Study hard and concentrate on the exam. Don't let anyone notice anything unusual. Only when he thinks that he has been treated as a suicide will he reveal his flaws."

Ji Yunyun was fooled, showing an excited yet restrained expression: "No problem."

Xiaoxiao also nodded.

"That's right, Watsons." Jane Jing smiled.