"At the beginning, there were not many changes, mainly the plot changes of the female anchor Lulu."
"Talk about it."
"This character was originally designed to have more words. She is one of the important companions around the protagonist in the early stages. It describes how she learned to survive from a timid girl who had just entered the apocalypse and slowly grew into a strong person."
"But when I wrote that she was afraid on the balcony and didn't wake up Liu Qian and Pan Hua in time, the book review section flooded the screen with all kinds of curses, calling the girl a pig, and abandoning the book if she didn't die. I quickly changed it at that time After telling the plot, let the protagonist throw her and Pan Hua away, and then prepare a plot for them to receive lunch boxes."
"At this time, many readers asked in the book review area to save someone. They didn't want to see Lulu die, and they said they would abandon the book after Lulu died, so they had to change the plot, bring her back to life, and bring Pan Hua to life. Even if he dies, no one will care about Pan Hua’s life or death anyway.”
"Considering that Lulu was very unlikable at the beginning but had a certain number of fans, we arranged for the protagonist to teach her some survival skills and then abandon her. All the scenes originally designed for her were deleted."
"This kind of change makes her story incomprehensible and unflattering to both ends. It becomes the biggest flaw at the beginning of the book."
"Actually, what I want to say is that an ordinary girl in the real world, after the apocalypse, will definitely not be as omnipotent and calm as the protagonist Liu Gan at the beginning, but readers will not give these people a chance to grow up." The author shook his head.
Liu Qian was silent for a long time. He couldn't believe that Lulu's fate had such twists and turns, and he couldn't believe that the reason why he abandoned Lulu and Pan Hua in the first place was so absurd!
"Are there any similar changes in the future?" After a while, Liu Qian asked the author again.
"Yes, another character who has been greatly changed is Zhang Shengli. Originally, he received a box lunch after being stabbed by a wooden spear. However, a large number of readers in the book review area called the protagonist a lone star of evil spirits. Whoever meets him will die. If he writes like this again I gave up reading the book, so I had to bring him to life again." The author thought for a while and then answered Liu Qian.
Liu Gan shook his head, feeling worse and worse.
"Speaking of the biggest changes in this book, these are not the biggest changes." The author looked at Liu Qian cautiously.
"Oh? What is that?"
"The original outline layout of "Thrilling World" has 10 million words. The first stage is composed of Tranquility City, Tundra City, Kuangsha City, Green Plains City, Fire Rock City, Huangbi City plus the main city. The content of each part here About a million words.”
"Tranquility City is covered with clouds, Tundra City is covered with ice and snow, Kuangsha City is filled with flying sand and rocks, Luyuan City is like spring all year round, Huoyan City is a living molten city, Huangbi City has various Gobi caves, and the main city combines all their characteristics."
“In the original outline, the protagonist would travel to six island cities, experience different natural scenery and different types of zombies in each island city, collect six scepters and reach the main city, and enter the energy world from the space laboratory in the main city. The Energetic World is about two million words, and the last part about the Big Universe is about one million words, for a total of ten million words.”
"Why are there only contents about Tranquility City and Tundra City? What about other isolated island cities?" Liu Qian felt a little inexplicably irritated. He didn't believe that everything he experienced was designed by this wretched man in front of him, but after listening to After hearing what this man said, he had to doubt that the truth behind the scenes was indeed the case.
"It is difficult to write long zombie apocalyptic novels, because when the protagonist is weak, it will make people feel the pressure and tension of the apocalypse; but if the protagonist never grows and becomes stronger, readers will soon become bored and feel unhappy."
"When the protagonist of the novel is extremely powerful and kills zombies like playing a Wushuang game, the novel cannot be written anymore. If it continues to be written, it will be a repetitive Wushuang game, which will be scolded by readers for gossiping and irritating. So I designed the previous one. The outline allows the protagonist to be completely refreshed and start over every time he enters a new island city, so that the tense and oppressive feeling of a zombie apocalypse novel can be continued."
"However, the design of the washing point in Tundra City made many readers unhappy. They cursed in the book review section and subscriptions also dropped seriously. It is estimated that after visiting Tundra City according to the original outline, Kuangsha City, Luyuan City, Huoyan City, and Huangbi City If I finish writing all the cities and main urban areas, I will be scolded to death, so I skipped over the next few island cities and main urban areas, and entered the energy world directly from Tundra City."
"On the one hand, readers want the tension and oppression of zombie apocalyptic novels, and on the other hand, they also want the refreshing feeling of the protagonist getting stronger. It is really difficult to have both. At least I can't find a way to have both. No matter how I write, It doesn’t please either end.”
"In order to make the story more interesting, I painstakingly designed some plots such as screaming zombies, nightmare jellyfish, six brothers and sisters as the protagonist upgraded and became stronger. I designed it with great care and thought that these plots would be exciting. .”
"But the fact is that these plots are the chapters that have received the most scoldings in the book. The nightmare jellyfish was scolded halfway through and could not be written and had to be ended early. The plot of the six brothers and sisters was finished despite the scolding, and the subscriptions were cancelled. It was a complete mess, which made me feel like a failure and a disappointment.”
“When I write novels, I don’t like to write static things. I like to constantly seek innovation and change, and add various elements. Every story wants to open up the imagination and give people a fresh and strange feeling. But most readers They don't adapt to or accept this kind of writing. They only like to upgrade and defeat monsters in a single way, from weak to strong, and finally unify the universe."
"I remember that when the Tranquility City plot ended and the Frozen Earth City plot began, a large number of book reviews appeared in the book review area, saying that they could not understand what the author was writing, and then they cursed and abandoned the book. Every time after that, every time I asked for innovation and change, There are always people in the book review section who are criticizing and abandoning the book, and they are fully subscribed readers, which is really helpless.”
"Horror novels are my best genre. However, the current generation of readers who read novels are so timid that I can't even imagine. As long as they involve some horror content, their subscriptions will be canceled without negotiation. This makes me We had to control the horror of the plot and simply stopped involving it later, and a lot of modifications and adjustments were made in this regard.”
"I don't dare to wash it anymore. I can't write about horror. I burned my brain and lost my subscription. The Big Universe was my last attempt. As a result, I was scolded to death. I don't know what else I can write. And I know that no matter what else I write, it will be good." Some people scolded me." The author stopped here.
"Change it when readers scold you? The whole Thriller world has been changed over and over again to become what it is now?" Liu Qian didn't know what to say about this.
"I can't help it. I used to stick to the end when writing books. I just wrote whatever I wanted, so I was always too poor to wear pants. This book has learned to cater to readers. If readers are unhappy, they will correct it in time, and finally make some money. money."
"Then why don't you continue writing now?"
"I changed it over and over again, and it changed beyond recognition. It deviated greatly from the original outline. I couldn't write it anymore, and there was no point in writing it. I realized that I will never write these thankless things again. I specialize in writing pretense and slap-in-the-face novels. I don’t need to be imaginative or seek new ideas or changes. I just need to write the same slap-in-the-face routine over and over again. I don’t need to use my brain when I write it, and the readers will enjoy it. Make a lot of money." The author sighed.
"I really dare not believe that "The Thrilling World" was written by a disgusting fat man like you." After Liu Gan confirmed all this, he felt inexplicably angry.
"I'm sorry..." The author looked at Liu Qian in horror. After noticing that Liu Qian became angry, he knew that he was going to be unlucky again.
"What will happen if I kill you?" Liu Qian picked up a scalpel and played with it in his hand. If everything in the trembling world was really created by this disgusting and disgusting fat man in front of him, then if he kills him, the entire trembling world should collapse. .
If the world of trembling did not collapse, it means that this is not the final truth, and he just fell into a scam.
"Don't kill me! This is a legal society! Murder will be punished! From the first glance, you are a rich and high-ranking person. It is not cost-effective to kill a trash from the bottom of society like me. One life is worth one life." !” The author begged loudly.
Liu Qian slashed it with his knife, and the world suddenly became quiet.
The author looked at the column of blood spurting from his neck with some disbelief. After a moment, his eyes wandered away, his head tilted and his body went limp.
"My destiny is not decided by you, but by my own struggle and creation." Liu Gan stood up, threw his mobile phone on the ground, stepped on it, and the screen of the mobile phone made a 'squeak' sound, and above it was " The cover of "Thrilling World" quickly dimmed.
When we walked out of the warehouse, it suddenly started to rain.
Liu Gan reached out and took a drop of rainwater, and found that it was actually red, so bright and dazzling, just like blood.
(Complete book)
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In the warehouse.
The wretched fat man who was tied to the pillar by Liu Gan suddenly raised his head, his pale face without any blood, and after looking around with empty eyes, he let out a harsh roar outside the warehouse.
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