Lu Juren looked at his newly revised poem. Compared with the previous work, the generosity of thinking of the king and serving the country was stronger. As for the feelings of missing relatives... I used a "sigh of sorrow" to find the right level, and it can also express the feeling of thinking about my father in my heart. The phrase "thinking with the flowing water" was changed to "thinking rides on the wings", which is more closely related to the previous sentence of Xiaoyan Si. The dream word "Dream to send a boat" also points out the deep affection of father and son. .
After the change, the artistic conception is more blurred, the poems are interesting and rich, and the father and son's family affection can be written to the righteousness of the monarch and minister, pointing out the meaning of the jun's kindness is deeper than the personal relationship, which can be regarded as the first Zhongping's work.
It's just that the rhythm changes when reading, and it's a little stiff. Lu Juren read it again and explained it to him in detail: "In your poem, you use too many up-songs and not enough in-sounds, so when you read it, it feels like one beat to the end and lacks a sense of change. In the flat four tones, The flat tones are long and short, and the flat tones are short and short. The flat tones are different in the up, out, and in. The out-sounds and the flat-sounds are the same as the raised sounds, and the exhalation is far away. Long and slow, too much croaking, shortness of breath and steepness.”
He pointed to the sentence "Dream Ships a Boat Tour" and said: "This sentence uses three quasi-sound characters in the front, and two Yangping characters in the back. After Yucangjiangliu', it is also used alternately with the upper tones. Although the upper tones are raised, it is different from the incoming tones: the upper tones turn upwards, and the incoming tones place a bet. After reading the whole text, there is only one wing character for the incoming tone. There are too many flat and outgoing tones, and if you raise them again and again, the tone becomes stiff. If you change the place where the outgoing tone is used in conjunction with the three tones of 'going in', the intonation will be improved. Richer and more lively.”
Cui Xie still felt that he was flat, sticky, and confrontational these past two days. It was only after asking Mr. Lu that he found out that he was still far behind.
Writing poetry not only depends on talent, but also has to memorize the rhyme table. It seems that Qianlong was not so easy.
Lu Juren looked at him with a look of awe and emotion, and a smile of approval appeared on his face: "It's good to know that what you have done is not enough. Now I ask you to be strict because we can't hear Ping Zhe in the Mandarin of the Central Plains. People from southern China can easily make up for their stubbornness when they make a poem. When we write poetry, we must first familiarize ourselves with the rhyme, and use a word which belongs to which rhyme and which rhyme. A well-received sentence."
Cui Xie bowed his hands in awe: "This disciple understands."
Mr. Lu added: "Although the rhythm is strict, it can't use rhyme to harm the words, so later generations have come up with many ways to save and save - some of them can be saved or not; some are to be used in this sentence. There are a few remedies; there are also sentences Guping and Guze, and those who need to be rectified in the opposite sentences, there is a saying that "one, three, five, two, four and six are clear". But you haven't even remembered the four sounds and eight illnesses. Exactly, if I teach you the method of succumbing, you will be more casual in using rhyme. You have to learn the strictest first, then relax slowly, and go far in the future without losing your integrity.”
Understand, this is just like when he learned to draw, he first learned sketches and 2B pen basics, and when he grew up, he could draw beautiful pictures.
Seeing that he really understood his deep meaning, Lu Juren nodded secretly in his heart, but his face was still so stern, and said in a deep voice: "Writing poetry is also practicing. You have mastered the rhythm of poetry, and you can touch it normally. If you don't touch it, just wait for the day when you have the inspiration to write again, you will never be able to wait for the rest of your life. I understand your hard work, and I don't force you to write a few articles a day, but whenever you see something strange or new, I have to write a song myself, and give it to me for review at the end of the month.”
What a strange new scene... He stays in the Imperial College every day, either listening or repeating lectures, and it will be dark when he returns home sooner or later. What inspiration can he get
That is to say, I can go out loose and loose on the fifteenth day of the first day, but I don't want to write this kind of thing in the diary and give it to the teacher.
Choi Xie was confused.
Mr. Lu rolled his manuscript paper into a tube and knocked on the table, and said: "You are someone who wants to enter the imperial examinations. Whether you are writing poems with your classmates in the future, or writing poems for banquets or the court, at most I will give you one. When you write a poem, try to urge yourself to write it faster. Generally speaking, if you write a poem quickly, even if the sentence is normal, people can also politely praise you for your talent. If you can write a poem If a sentence or a half is talented, then it can really be considered a poetic talent.”
It's still possible to do this!
Unexpectedly, Mr. Lu, a person who looks quite round and wide, understands image packaging quite well. If it wasn't for being a teacher in their family, he would have to maintain a dignified image of a teacher in front of his students. Maybe he would have formed a school club outside, taught small classes, and become a romantic talent.
Cui Xie looked at Lu Juren reverently, and cupped his hands respectfully and replied, "Students understand. Students must think more and write more, in the hope of enlightenment."
"Not only think more and write more, but also read more." Lu Juren threw him a few books that had been prepared for a long time, and hid the selected poems of Tang and Song Dynasties under the "Thousand Characters" and a pile of messy paper, and told him to go back and play with them, chew them and use them. Dictionaries of words, rhythm and rhythm.
Lu Juren also had to prepare for the exam in three years. Since he had to go back to study at night, he felt that it was almost the same after teaching here, so he asked him to go back to self-study and return to the guest house with his books and papers.
Cui Xie went in to say goodbye to Er Lao, sent his husband home, and turned back to the small courtyard where he lived.
In his room, Cui Qi was drawing the divisions of the new color book, and the progress of the painting had reached the end of the twelfth volume, "Ma Chao vs. Jiameng Pass, Liu Bei Leads Yizhou Shepherd". This time, there are also two large cross-page pictures, one is Zhang Fei fighting Ma Chao, and the other is Zhao Yun persuading Liu Bei. Because this time, Ma Chao first came down after the war, and the scenes were heavy. The single color book also included him and a Liu Bei who had changed into the state animal husbandry costume, but Cui Xie was selfish and replaced Ma Chao with Guan Yu—
Anyway, I painted a lot of Ma Chao in the last book. This time, Guan Yu wants to enter Sichuan and compete with Ma Chao. What about Guan Yu who is dressed as a prefect? It just matches Liu Bei, and it can also advertise the next volume of single-handedly going to the meeting.
He casually flipped through this collection of poems, printed it as a PDF in his head, and asked Cui Qi, "How are your father's sales in the past two days, is anyone making trouble? If anyone deliberately finds fault and tell me, I'll take the adult's. The post goes to Shuntian Prefecture to file a complaint."
Cui Qi put down his pen, looked at him and said, "Our shop is visited by many servants of noble families, and no one dares to make trouble. It's just that your big picture is so good, there are always people asking the clerk and the shopkeeper to buy it, and some of them are there. Officials and honorable people. My father has pushed a few, but I'm afraid there will be some that won't be pushed in the future... "
At the beginning, the four beauties asked Wang Gongzi to beg away. The Three Kingdoms are so popular, it is normal for someone to come out with a big picture.
But now we still have to rely on them for publicity, and it is too easy to sell and it is not worthwhile, so let's do another wave of publicity... He folded a piece of paper as a bookmark, inserted it in the poetry collection, turned his head, and asked back: "Nan How about the employees of the store who can travel abroad, are you ready to go south?"
Cui Qi's eyes lit up and asked: "Big brother finally plans to distribute goods to the south? I heard that there are all copies of our version, and they are also named Zhirong Bookstore. Our reputation has called them corrupt! Let's distribute some serious and well-carved books, and let them see who is the true originator of color printing!"
Alas, this is not corruption, it is whitewashing him! Someone took over the name of Cui Meiren'er, and he will be the innocent Cui Jiansheng in the future!
He waved his hand and said, "Let's talk about the volume of goods. We have few people, and the printed Beizhili can be digested. We will sell it in Beijing first and then talk about it. I think we have a lot of money in our hands now. I want you to go out to Beijing and go to the south to find some engraving and printing craftsmen who have no home and no tiredness, or apprentices, bring them back and cultivate them slowly, there are still many things to be printed in the future."
Cui Qidao: "This is easy, Fang Fang is already familiar with the Jianyang side. They have a lot of editions, pear trees, and craftsmen. Fujian people are willing to endure hardships, and there should be people who are willing to come here. It's just that people there listen a little bit. don't know."
That's not a big problem. When you come, you can teach slowly, and then you can get a wife and have children locally, and you will take root.
Go back and sign a long-term contract for them for decades. Now that the market has just opened, they just need not to leak their secrets when Anzhai is on the rise. Daming printing industry will develop sooner or later, and now there are so many sets of color printing, and he does not expect to keep the printing technology secret for a lifetime.
Cui Xie said with a smile: "Then you should arrange for people to go there as soon as possible. When you go there, you not only need to recruit people, but also buy some high-quality fashion book editions, as well as storybooks and opera books. Let's come back and match the printed books. Help me buy something by the way..."
Now that he lives in the Cui family, it is also his responsibility to take care of the young and old of the Cui family.
The silk and satin shop is now rejuvenating with two popular pieces for a while, and then slowly paints modern and improved versions of robes, which may be able to sell another wave; but the rouge shop has never had any competitive products, and it can't sell it. To pay a high price, you have to see what's in the gold finger of the chemistry book.
Now that he has a wine retort, he can buy some flowers from the south to plant, try to make some expensive flower dew, and make soap or something.
He was thinking about it, and suddenly saw that Cui Qi was still looking at him with his mouth half open, he smiled and turned his chubby little face back: "I haven't thought about what to bring, I'll wait until I think about it. I'll tell you again."
Cui Qi nodded obediently,
Cui Xie picked up the poetry collection again, caressed the cover and said, "Next time, if someone wants to buy our beauty pictures, just tell them: This beauty picture is also like a real beauty, and it must be a famous person who is famous all over the world. , those who quietly locked themselves at home before they became famous are always petty and have low status. Then tell them that the store will invite famous artists to paint big pictures of Da Qiao, Zhen Shi and Diao Chan, and make a three-country five-beauty, which will be delayed until the beginning of July. Seventh, let's hold another poll like the one in Qian'an, if they really like it, they can come to the conference to support."
Cui Xie didn't go to the store very much when he was in Qian'an. He didn't know what it was like to choose the first beauty, but Cui Qi had experienced the situation at that time. When I think about it, the hairs on the back are standing up, nervous and nervous. He asked excitedly: "Then we still put stamped paper in the book this time, and asked them to vote with the printed paper?"
No... that wouldn't be enough to steal money.
The four beauties do not have a mass base, so it is enough to make do with a small one. Diao Chan, Er Qiao, and Zhen Mi are peerless beauties who have been famous for more than 500 years. How can they show their worth by voting with a few worthless pages
Cui Xie's eyes lit up with two radiance as bright as snowflakes and silver, and said with a smile, "Isn't the cover of our hardcover book already with pictures of the five beauties? Just one Sun Shangxiang, twelve volumes will be published as the cover. Just use Their cover picture is a vote, if there is no color picture, you can use the poem of Yongmeiren instead. When voting, I thought of asking a few classmates to be judges to rate the poems submitted. Whoever received the most votes and had the best poems , who is the first beauty in the Three Kingdoms."
By the way, I can also comment on the first talent of Three Kingdoms poetry.
… Who is the painting sold to? In case there are many rich and noble families fighting, they will offend people whoever they sell them to. Not to mention that Ju Anzhai is not under the name of Cui Xie now, without the protection, even if it is still under the name of Cui Mansion, a fourth-rank councilor can’t actually protect anything.
With the most simple ideas of ordinary people, Cui Qi was afraid of offending those high-ranking officials.
Cui Xie shook his head and said with a smile: "We don't have the ability to get both ways among our customers, selling one or not another, and asking people to be infatuated with infatuation without regrets. Isn't this already protracted for a long time, and there are more painters in the middle? Draw a few big pictures, stare at them and draw them the same. Or simply carve out the face and hands to print, outline the outline, and fill in the lines. It is much easier. Prepare dozens of sets of drawings first, Whoever wants to sell them a pair for 10 taels of silver, and no matter how much they want, they will slowly draw and offer them."