Although Mr. Lu went to play in the same year during the Mid-Autumn Festival, he never forgot his responsibility as a teacher. He left after leaving homework for the students.
The festival passed, and brother and I obediently handed in a bunch of big characters, and memorized a thousand-character essay of 100 words; although Cui Qi did not need to study, he still had to memorize a few ancient essays, so that he could keep his mind and spirit in mind. Both of them go to school during the day, Cui Qi will go to work in the afternoon, and Brother He can rest only after studying Shenchu. After dinner, it was Cui Xie's turn to bring homework and ask him to comment.
Although the title is the most common poem about watching the moon, everyone has written it since ancient times, not about the moon, but about the feelings when watching the moon. Some people look at the moon and think about returning home, some people look at the moon and think about people, and some people feel sad about current affairs. You can see the character of people by reading poetry.
Lu Juren took the paper, took out a small tube of pen, and dipped cinnabar on the paper while looking at it.
Although Cui Xie's poems have not been able to write any good sentences worthy of circle, they are also simple in meaning, clear in words, and emotionally restrained, which just meets the requirements of justice and peace in the style of Taige. Although it is a common way to write parting when he sees the bright moon, his writing is not very sad, and it can be seen that he has a broad heart, which deserves a little praise.
What he wrote: "The sky is full of light, and the high winds move the cicadas. Autumn will be heavy at night, and the moon will leave people round. The same photo of the present and the ancient, the mountains and rivers are all beautiful. There is nothing to worship in the building, but the memory of the fleeting years."
Looking at it, Mr. Lu shook his head and laughed: "I told you to strictly observe the rhythm and practice first, but you used the method of rescue yourself. Why, can't you find the words?"
Cui Xie smiled and said, "I didn't write well. I wanted to write 'Autumn is heavy tonight, and the moon is round in the distance', but I felt that the word 'jin' was heavy with the back, so I used the flat tone of Jiangjin instead. The words were changed to a flat tone, and the flat tone of the sentence should be changed to a flat tone.”
And this "Li Ren" was written by himself, not by Senator Cui and his youngest son. He is standing on the ground in Beijing now, only seven or eight kilometers away from the dormitory before he crossed over.
Staying in the same Beijing city, but separated by more than 500 years, is out of reach. If you travel backwards, you can still see the relics of your own time, but you can travel to the Chenghua Dynasty more than 500 years ago, but in addition to a chemistry book, a few online novels, and a small movie full of hard disks, Nothing to think about...
Separated from the daily busy work, study, and the feelings that almost occupied all his leisure time, what he couldn't get around in the bottom of his heart was actually the nostalgia for the world before he crossed over.
Cui Xie sighed secretly, and Mr. Lu, who judged the paper, also sighed.
Lu Juren himself had left his hometown because of the background and floated in Beijing for the imperial examination. He also has wives, children, young and old at home. From the month of the month to the Mid-Autumn Festival, the sadness of parting is heavy in his heart, but this most conventional thought of leaving people just arouses his own thoughts.
He finished the poem, drew a few points, pointed to the words to explain what was not neat, and what the meaning was inconsistent with Qiu Si's mood.
The sentence "Jianggu's same photo, Jiangshan's own beauty" is not correct enough: from the text, "Jiangu" is a little reluctant to "Jiangshan", and in terms of rhythm, the same photo and their respective Yans are not even the rhythm. , it is very untidy.
This sentence is also a neck couplet, and the other sentences between the first one can not be in conflict or are not stable, but this sentence must be neat and delicate. And in the opposite sentence, the opposite is superior, and the opposite is inferior, and the meaning must be different. If the words are opposite and the meaning is the same, it is also called "joining the palms", which is a joke.
Cui Xie nodded again and again, and explained, "I just want to think about the changes of the ancient and modern world. That's not correct."
When he wrote this sentence, he thought that he had seen two moons around 500 years ago. The moon is still the same moon that has remained unchanged for hundreds of millions of years. Life in the two eras is completely different. Modified text.
Mr. Lu smiled and said: "Writing poetry is not writing articles. To expound the meaning of the sages, you only need to write your own feelings. If you want to write about sorrow, you should start from the small. Autumn sounds and parting, etc., write about the changes of the present and the past without moving. You are so young, you have not even seen the ups and downs of a person's life... "
As he was talking, he suddenly remembered that although Cui Xie had never seen anything, he had gone through ups and downs in his life, and he had more experience than he, who had not been able to excel in several trials—at least he had never entered the palace wall in his life. .
He quietly swallowed the rest of the teaching, coughed lightly, and turned to the law of salvation: "It's really easy to constrain your thinking if you pay attention to the metric, since you already know how to save the sentence, I'll just tell you it seriously. Bar."
You can't just talk about flat and flat rhythms when you're talking about poetry, or you'll be confused when you listen to it. Mr. Lu wanted to use the example he wrote, but felt that the poem had to be changed according to the students' original intention. After finishing the revision, it would eliminate the drawbacks and have a higher style. If you change the poem just to change the metric, and teach it one method at a time, the poem will be changed into pieces, and it will not look good, and it will not be good for students to write.
He is a good man, so he simply took the Mid-Autumn Festival poems he wrote before as an example, first wrote a sentence "Yulou is cold, the pearl foil is still empty", and said to Cui Xie: "I didn't teach the sentence pattern of these two lines before. You, you will remember it in the future, this kind of sentence is not an obscene sentence, and there is no need to save it."
What he taught before, and what he taught Cui Xie to practice, was the basic format of "flat, flat, flat". But let go a step, if there is a sentence like these two sentences, the first word should be in a flat tone and a flat tone, or if the first word should be in a flat tone and a flat tone, it is also a sentence that fits the paradigm, and there is no need to remedy it.
Among the four sentence patterns of the five-character poem, the first characters of three sentences are all flat and flat, and can be changed at will. Only the first character of the sentence "flat, flat, flat, flat" cannot be changed to a flat sound at will. Because of this change, apart from the rhyme, there is only one flat tone left in the verse. This situation is called Guping.
Lu Juren gave an example at random: "It's like changing the third character of this sentence to a flat tone, I don't have any remedy in my own sentence in this poem... Li Bai's sentence 'I am Aldebaran Panasonic, lonely Liao has no joy ', the third character of the previous sentence should be flat and flat, but the flat change of the third character can be saved or not; the first character of the latter sentence should also be flat and flat. Changed to a flat 'none'."
In addition to saving in this sentence, you can also save in the opposite sentence. If the sentence violates the loneliness and cannot save oneself in this sentence, the third character of the sentence will be changed to Pingsheng to help each other. If not only the first sentence is flat, but the first character of the opposite sentence should also be flat and flat, and the third character can be saved by changing the third character to a flat tone.
Or take his own poem as an example - "At this time, the winner is a guest, or in the Mingguang Palace."
This sentence is originally in the format of "flat, flat, flat, flat". The "this" in the sentence should be used flat and flat, which is a common and unnecessary variant. But in this sentence, it should not only use flat but flat tone, but the third character "Zhe" is also an entry-sound character, so the whole sentence becomes a solitary flat sentence, and the third character of the opposite sentence should be changed to the flat-sounded "Ming". come to the rescue.
While talking about the remedy, Lu Juren looked at the unpleasant pencil in Cui Xie's hand: "Why do you use this kind of pen to write again? You must not get used to this kind of gestures, and the writing technique will be broken. , in the future, when the exams are written, the fonts on the scrolls will be slightly different, and there will be a difference in the future!"
Cui Xie quickly finished taking notes and explained, "I just write this for speed, so as not to disturb Mr.'s thinking. I will re-copy it again with an ink pen. I don't know, Mr., this is actually very useful and cheap. Wrong words can be wiped off with steamed buns…”
As soon as he mentioned the steamed buns, Mr. Lu frowned: "Isn't this a waste of food?"
Cui Xie hurriedly explained: "This can be wiped or not. If it is written on a light-colored board or wall, it can be washed off with water, and it can be written repeatedly. Our chefs now use this to write dishes. It is also used by managers to write family affairs arrangements. If there is a trivial matter that is forgotten, just take a look at it or ask someone to remember it. After washing it with water at night, it can be used again the next day, which is convenient and convenient. It doesn't cost any money."
After all, Lu Juren is a scholar who worries about the world before the world, and enjoys it after the world. Hearing what he said, he thought of those poor students who couldn't afford a pen and ink, and said: "So, this is a good thing. There are poor officials who can't afford paper and ink, and with such a pen, they can also memorize things and copy articles?"
Of course it can! Artifacts such as pencils can be used on spaceships, and are more suitable than brushes.
He showed Mr. Lu how to use it, and said: "Students think the same way. Think of those poor children who have no money to buy paper and ink, and some can only practice writing with sand and water, and wipe them off if they can't write a few words. This one can be sharpened very sharply, write teeny small characters, and write clearly, save paper, and write much faster."
Mr. Lu took the written test himself, but his writing was not very smooth. The words were crooked and the tip of the pen slipped a little on the paper.
Cui Xie turned the notebook over and showed him his Qigong hard pen calligraphy: "This is easier to practice than a brush, and everyone in the family can use it. After practicing for a few days, you will know how to exert your strength. This kind of pen is not It is used for imitation books and scientific examinations, but for Confucian boys or ordinary people who miss books but can’t afford good paper and pens.”
Lu Juren took it and tried it again. With more strength, the tip of the pen slashed the paper and made another cut. He was so angry that he removed the paper and slowly wrote a few words on the pad.
The words are still not good. He didn't care, he took a handkerchief dipped in water and wiped it, and wiped a board clean with ease. I wrote a few words harder, wiped it off, and looked at the board, and it was still as smooth and clean, leaving no ink marks.
He fully understood the benefits of pencils, and exclaimed, "If the gentlemen in rural social studies had such a pen and a board, wouldn't they be able to copy articles for Meng Tong to read, and how much money would be saved for buying books? How many poor villagers can read and know how to read?"
In the countryside, broken wooden boards and slates are worthless, but paper that can be used for writing costs at least six cents a piece, and the worst writing brush costs three cents a piece—
He hurriedly asked, "How much is this one?"
Cui Xie did the math: "There is less burning now, and the cost of opening a kiln once is extremely high. It will take an equal amount to gradually reduce it. The cost of thrush, clay, and burning kiln for the refill will always cost three dollars. A pound of silver; the wood wrapped on the outside has to be soaked in lime to soften it, and it has to be grooved, which is more expensive. If you don’t pay attention to writing comfortably, you can buy a refill yourself and wrap it with straw paper and hemp rope. can write."
What Lu Juren heard wouldn't count. The cheapest writing brush costs three cents, and paper is six cents a knife. This lead is only three cents a pound
With such a long pen, Cui Xie was not too short when he wrote it, maybe it was enough to copy a book, right
Although people often use eyebrow pencils and charcoal to write, but such things cannot be used as serious pens. They can only write large characters and are not easy to erase. This thin ink pen is different. This is really something that Mengtong and scholars can use and use!
He grabbed the pen and asked, "Have you thought about giving these pens to the poor?"
As soon as I said it, I thought that his family was not doing well, or else I would not have to save money from using pens, so I changed my mind and said, "I don't need this year's bridle repair, how about you replace it with a pen like this? In my hometown and other parts of Northern Zhili, there are many poor people who can’t even afford sociology, and I want to donate this donation to sociology in those poor villages, which is always the heart of our scholars.”
Mr. Lu really has a book business spirit, but this kind of book business spirit is also quite cute. Isn't that the case with all the good-hearted people who donate to impoverished mountainous areas in modern times
Cui Xie smiled: "This one has just been tested, and it has not been officially burned yet. Now it is for our own use, and it is still placed outside the bookstore of Xiao Qige's house for poor students to copy books. In the future, the family will build it. The kiln, I can burn hundreds of kilograms by myself, and then ask the gentleman to send it to various social schools, so that more children can read it."
"Good! Good! Good!" Lu Juren seemed to see how many poor children were writing on the table with pencils, and gradually began to read, and he was so excited that he didn't ask him to change his poems: "You can change the rhythm slowly from time to time. Let it go, and I will write a poem about the five rhythms of this hard ink pen when I am interested. It is not limited to rhyme, rhythm, and stickiness. When I finish it, I will start from this rhythm and teach you how to style the ancients. poetry."
The author has something to say: Fan Wen
"Mid-Autumn Moon-watching Cambodian Dong Xuanzai Taishi"
Ming District Minister
The moon is full of layers on the city, in the imperial garden of the autumnal equinox. Yulou is cold, and the pearl foil photos are still empty. Looking forward to the United States tonight, the sentiments are the same in several places. At this time, you will be a guest, or in the Mingguang Palace.