"Hey, this sentence is well-deciphered!" Liu Zan tapped on the case with his fingertips, and chanted: "Just look at it without forgetting the diligent people, you can set the law for the world..."
He and Zhang Tongzhi are both two-ranked scholars, and they are all familiar with the four books. Only Xie Qianhu is a warrior. Thinking that he is not familiar with the scriptures, he leans his body and leans his elbows on the small table to explain to Xie Qianhu:
"In ancient times, the Son of Heaven patrolled the kingdoms of the feudal lords during the two seasons of spring ploughing and autumn harvesting. When hunting and hunting, he did not forget to observe the shortcomings of the people, and then he made allowances. Because the Son of Heaven's patrolling was to observe the shortcomings of the people, to benefit the people and the feudal lords. In the fiefs, he also followed the example of the emperor, always observing the suffering of the people with the heart of defending the soil, and did not dare to disturb the living people for no reason. The law of the feudal lords to act. If it is put into the world, it is enough to be the law for all the officials in the world to govern.”
Zhang Tongzhi couldn't help but echoed: "The original title was 'Cultivation in spring to make up for deficiencies', but in the first half of his sentence, he not only broke the words of 'plow in spring' and 'make up for deficiencies', but instead used 'one view' The two characters contain the responsibility of the emperor to look after the spring ploughing and autumn harvest in the province. Then he uses the word 'diligence' to break and 'make up for the shortage' - in today's world, the emperor's rule does not stop at subsidizing the people's lack of spring planting and autumn harvesting! The word diligent in the people is enough to write the emperor's attitude of devoting himself to civil affairs, and it is enough to testify to the world."
Liu Yushi's preaching interest made him hold it up, and further analyzed a sentence: "The word "diligence and people" not only deducted 'make up for the deficiency', but also implied the whole chapter 'worrying about the people's worries, and enjoying the people's joy'. The meaning of it. First have the heart to love the people, and then have the diligence, and then he can set the law for the world."
Xie Ying asked these two people to be sandwiched between them, and they talked for a long time, shaking their heads and shaking their heads, as if a student was listening to the lectures of the two gentlemen.
He didn't find it annoying. He listened to them carefully, nodded and asked Liu Zan, "Do you think this article is well done, sir?"
Just as Liu Yushi was about to say "yes", he remembered that he was here to pick on faults, how could he just say yes after hearing one sentence
At least listen to the full article!
The phrase "not bad" flicked on the tip of his tongue, and then changed to: "I did a good job in solving the problem, but I have to listen to the bottom line." Then he looked at Cui Xie again: "I compliment you. Don't be arrogant in a word, and then read your essay, if it is not good enough, no matter how good it is, this article will have no merit."
Cui Xie responded with a "Yes", looked at the PDF intently, and then read, "Fu Chun is helpful, autumn is helpful, all the previous kings came out for the people. You have prepared Hou Feng, don't you read the ancient Xia proverb?"
One of the two jinshi nodded and the other stroked his beard, as if he was quite satisfied with the question.
Xie Ying glanced at Liu Zan, and consciously, he shook his head and said, "This sentence is a rebuke method - breaking the problem is to break the emperor's diligence and people, and it can be the paradigm of the princes; Talking about how the feudal lords should govern their fiefs according to the law of the former kings, he then questioned why King Xuan of Qi, as one of the feudal lords, did not follow the ancient proverb of the Xia Dynasty and imitated the ancient emperor’s act of subsidizing the people.”
Zhang Tong knew: "These two sentences are reconsidered by Xu, and they criticize the King of Qi and introduce the meaning of the whole chapter.
Liu Yushi nodded: "That's right. Breaking the question, accepting the question, one positive and one negative, the ups and downs echoing, the round and the smooth, the words and sentences are also elegant and lively, and there is deep emotion in the discussion, which is an excellent beginning."
Xie Ying asked earnestly, "There's nowhere to guess the questions in this prefectural examination article. If Cui Xie can write an article that is appreciated by the two jinshis, then he can be certain that he did the county examination for a few articles, right? "
At this time, Liu Zan's heart to pick on faults had almost disappeared, and he simply praised him seriously: "Sir Xie is right. After reading the first three sentences of the scientific research field, you can almost decide to stay. With his four sentences , and the stable body of the pavilion, as long as there is no taboo text below, and the scroll surface is not stained or smeared, a student is stable. If you want to go a step further, you need to see if the text can be connected after Fafan. If I can hold such a discussion, can I raise the article to a higher level, or is my pen power exhausted.
He glanced down, and Cui Xie recited obediently without waiting for him to open his mouth: "...he prayed for the grain to borrow from the emperor, and enjoyed it in return for the soil. Benefiting from the tour of the division to rescue, the subsidy is also at the same time. However, the province of farming and the province is still recovering from Yin and Yin…”
While listening, the two jinshi continued to explain to Jin Yiwei, who had graduated from martial arts and had not taken the exam, how he matched his opponents neatly and how his words were well-written.
As he was talking, Liu Yushi suddenly woke up, pointed at Cui Xie and said, "The article on your county exam didn't use so many allusions? Why does it seem like you are tying it with a rope, sticking to the biography every word and sentence, paying attention to the rhythm, and not writing it like that one, with a sense of reason?"
I just don't dare to let it go. Isn't it necessary to cater to the examiner's preferences during the exam
Cui Xie glanced at him hesitantly, and after thinking about it, he felt that it was normal to figure out what the examiner likes, so he simply said bluntly: "Students have long known that the magistrate likes ancient prose, so when they write, they try to be concise and to control their temperament. Wen. I heard that Mr. Wang likes the well-prepared time and writing, so when composing on the field, more emphasis is placed on refining the words and sentences, and using the scriptures to enter the text.”
Liu Zan secretly sighed that the academic field was unbearable, and now even such a primary school student can figure out what the examiner likes. However, he and Zhang Tongzhi also figured it out, so don't say such words that hurt others and yourself.
He remained silent, and Cui Xie continued to memorize the four-fan and eight-leg figure figure with one positive and one negative, one bright and one dark, and finally he said, "Everyone who comes out of the age is like this for the people. This is the so-called Jun Lemin. And the people also rejoice in their ruler."
Although Jiayi has carved out words and phrases and used dictionaries everywhere, but because there are many real meanings in the text, the article does not appear flashy and gaudy. It's just that this attitude of abandoning one's own style in order to cater to the examiner is not advisable, and it must be brought back before he grows crooked!
Liu Zan commented: "You are more vivid when you write ancient prose, and the time prose is a little more restrained. This is not a problem for the government exam. In the future, the examiners for the rural exam and the general exam will be appointed before the exam, and those few days are not enough for you to read. After finishing the examiner's essay, how can I revise the grammar according to their preferences? Simply write according to your habits from now on. Your essay has all the laws, and the spirit is well-connected. Although the sentences are simple, it can be regarded as simple and clean, and you can read the essay. People naturally know how to appreciate.”
Cui Xie straightened his back, bowed his head to be taught, and recited the article "King Mu Muwen, Tong Gong Yuxi", which was broken down as "a saint is only the most good, so he can perform rites and music to conquer."
This article is also well-written, sticking to the ropes and ink, but the idea is lofty, clean and elegant, and it is also a good article. Liu Yushi also persuaded what he should have persuaded before, so he stopped picking on his faults here, only commented on a few good points, and picked up some allusions to tell Xie Qianhu.
The discussion in the second session is only a small one, and I don't pay much attention to this topic when selecting scholars. As long as the writing is fluent, has one's own mind, and uses the classics correctly, it is enough. Liu Yushi did not waste time on this, but urged Cui Xie to recite his last question.
This policy question is about disaster relief.
At the beginning of the first month of the first month, there was a major earthquake in Beijing, and the counties in Yongping Prefecture were more or less affected by disasters. Wang Wen, the prefect of the prefectural government, knew that many schoolchildren in the prefectural examination were affected by the earthquake, and the conditions for reviewing before the examination were not good. Therefore, this question was put aside. Candidates only need to pay attention to the situation in the county. Something to write about.
Cui Xie personally participated in disaster relief in Qian'an County. He not only wrote about what he saw from later generations, but also acted according to Qi County magistrate. How to organize the people in Lijia to treat the wounded and tear down dilapidated houses; raise money from big households to distribute millet porridge and cotton-padded clothes; give medicines and medicines to prevent epidemics; let the homeless temporarily live in nursing homes and Guanyu, etc. land…
There is also the reconstruction work after the disaster: food for work, rebuilding collapsed houses and roads; the county lends grain and agricultural tools to the common people, so as not to delay the spring ploughing; the local patriarch petitions the imperial court to waive the New Year's forced labor and Summer taxes and autumn grains, horses, grasses, horses and other tributes, and rest with the people.
This article is written in more detail than the previous article on water control, and the sentences have been repeatedly sculpted and completed in one go.
Liu Yushi listened to the whole article in silence this time, and his voice became a little heavy when he commented: "Beijing, Yongping and Xuanda have been affected by the earthquake. You must have prepared this article in advance."
Cui Xie stood upright and calmly replied: "Yes, there is such a big earthquake this year, the students thought they would definitely pass the exam, so they prepared a few questions beforehand."
Liu Zan nodded: "This article is better than that one on the water conservancy policy. It is a countermeasure that the court can use. I originally suspected that Qian'an County had figured out the problem in advance and asked you to find someone. I did. Now that I read your article on the test, I don't have to doubt it.
He stood up, walked in front of Cui Xie, pressed his shoulder and said, "This question and your scriptures are in common style of writing. If you ask someone to do it on your behalf, it would be inappropriate. If you ask the question, it won't be as detailed as this one. It's me who misunderstood you."
Cui Xie wanted to stand up, but Liu Yushi's hand was really hard, so he had to stop him.
He tried a few times and couldn't get up, so he simply sat calmly and replied, "This is also human nature. When the students first arrived in Qian'an, they couldn't even write an essay. This is something Master Xie also knows. Just got into the government exam, and the students themselves doubted that the results were not real enough."
Only then did Liu Zan put a smile on his face, patted him on the shoulder heavily and said, "If there is anything unreal, you should get this grade! Let's talk about the government test, when Brother Dai came here to preside over the hospital test, If I don't take you as a student, I'm going back to the capital to ask him for an explanation!"
Cui Xie's heart was firmly put back in his heart, and a smile could not help showing his face. He lowered his head and replied, "Thank you for your praise, the students will study with peace of mind when they go back, and strive to repay the court as soon as possible."
Prodigy! child prodigy!
Qi County magistrate said it right, his talent is really rare. It's a pity that he delayed his studies in the early years, otherwise, just one year of study would be enough to gain the talents of middle school students. If he could study at home, wouldn't he be a world-famous prodigy like Li Dongyang
The author has something to say: In fact, I don't know what is so good about that article, but he must be good, that is, because its author is Liu Zizhuang, the champion of the Chongzhen period