Generally speaking, Yunhai himself is quite satisfied with this third volume. Haha, of course, in fact, he will feel satisfied with what he writes, just like no parent would say that his child is not good. Third It is up to everyone to decide whether the volume is good or not. I only hope that it will be as satisfying as I thought it would be and that most book lovers will be satisfied.
Of course, there are also many shortcomings in the third volume. For example, when the plot after Tang Xinyun was injured was originally written, some book friends reported that it was too protracted and lengthy. This was because Yunhai did not control the rhythm of the story well. Of course, everyone has their own preferences in reading books. It is impossible for a book or certain plots to satisfy all readers. What I can do is to try my best to satisfy most readers. If I can do this, I That's enough. As for those readers who may not like some of the plots, Yunhai is also here to say sorry. If you can continue reading, I hope that future stories will satisfy you.
The third volume is the transition and transit point for Yunfei to become stronger. It also introduces some more important characters and foreshadowing clues. I often see some book friends saying that the book has no main line or the main line is unclear. This is indeed a story from the beginning. There are problems, but in fact, from the beginning, Yunhai never thought of setting any fixed main line for Yunfei, such as dominating the world, attracting all the beauties, avenging bloodshed, finding his own life experience, etc., because Although the purpose is clear, on the other hand, it is a bit too tiring. I don't want Yunfei to bear too much, just like the last sentence in the introduction says, I want Yunfei to walk a path of 'freedom' .
Of course, there cannot be no main line. The Soul Refining Sect, Beast Taming Sect, etc., which have appeared many times now, are actually a main line behind several events, but they have not been clearly or emphatically described. These will be discussed in the future. The story will be revealed slowly.
By the way, I would like to talk about the issue about Tinkerbell Huangfu Rui. Some readers said that the writing is too unrealistic. How old does a 17-year-old girl look like? Haha, here can be a little bit revealed about Tinker Bell’s age, appearance, and temperament. These kind of things are actually a foreshadowing, and it is a big foreshadowing. There are some small hints in some inconspicuous places. I don’t know if you have noticed it. As for the specific situation... Haha, I will see you later.
During this long process of the third volume, Yunfei encountered many things, and Yunhai also experienced a lot. After graduating from college, he went out to work for four months, and finally quit because of unsatisfactory work. Looking back on everything during this period, there are It’s bitter but also gratifying. There are many paths in life. I gave up the one I took before and stayed at a fork in the road for the time being. I just hope that I won’t go wrong in the next step...
When I opened the bookshelf, I found that many of the authors I had written with at the time had stopped writing. I felt quite emotional. Only after I started writing, did I realize the hardships and hardships of being a novelist, including work, family, environment, relationships, grades, and income. ... and so on are all difficulties on the road of writing, and more than half of the authors are unable to persist until the end.
Yunhai is very glad that I have persevered until now and never thought of giving up, because I know that many readers are supporting me. It is you who gave me the courage to persevere until now and want to continue to persevere.
I still remember that during the writing process of the third volume, I once received a book review. One person said that the book I wrote was rubbish, that the author was an idiot, etc... The words were very ugly. I don’t know if this person is really my reader, but I was really sad at the time. I couldn’t express the feeling of being insulted and trampled upon by others as a result of my hard work. Later, I talked about it in the update that day, which was just a small complaint. As a result, the next day, I received dozens of book reviews of comfort and encouragement. Really, I was so touched and proud at the time... You have moved me countless times more than those disappointments, so what reason do I have not to persevere
During the three months of the third volume, I have met many new book friends. Some of the old readers may not pay attention to this book often for some reasons, and I rarely see them, but there are still many old readers who have read this book from time to time. From beginning to end, readers who always support Yunhai...
Whether you are a new reader or an old reader, Yunhai wants to say to you: Thank you for your support! !
Thanks to Mo Xiaoxi, Uncle Dantang, Zijin Martial Saint, Black as the Night and other book friends for their almost constant support, especially Brother Zijin, who used the Zongheng coins earned from participating in Zongheng activities and playing games to support her. Being a helmsman is really hard work for Brother Zijin. Everyone's support gave Yunhai a small income without any royalties, and more importantly, it gave Yunhai a huge motivation to write. There are also book friends Soul Piaoyi and Mei Kaiyanxiao who once built a sign-in building by themselves, and then continued to sign in dozens of floors almost every day. Yunhai was extremely touched by your support. There are also many book friends who receive red tickets and book reviews every day. Every click, every red ticket, every collection, and every supportive book review gives Yunhai the motivation and confidence to persevere.
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The above is just a small part, there are too many, and I can’t record them all. Please don’t mind the book friends who have not been thanked above. If I continue to name them, there will be too many...
Okay, this time the summary has become so long without realizing it. Let’s stop here. The end of the third volume is also the beginning of a new volume. I hope that the story that happens in the fourth volume will also satisfy everyone. , I hope that I can continue with your company and support in the long road ahead! !
Finally, I once again bow deeply to all the book friends who support Yunhai and say sincerely: Thank you! !
—The vast sea of clouds was written at 14:00 on December 15, 2011.