To be honest, I never expected that this book would achieve what it has today. All of this is thanks to everyone’s support, well, and the support of my editor.
Generally speaking, I am quite satisfied with the story in the first volume, although there were many problems in the writing. For example, when I was writing about the battle where Zhang Zhenshan chased Bai Yunfei, some book friends complained that the fighting was too written. It’s long-winded. For example, when I wrote the chapters of Liu Meng, some book friends complained that it was too bitchy and too nymphomaniacal. It was Yunhai’s first time writing a book, so he may not have grasped it properly in many aspects. Here, I would like to thank those who are kind. Book friends who offer their opinions.
At the end of the first volume, I feel a sense of relief. This volume is the first step. They say that a novel of 300,000 words is the first hurdle. In the second volume, I think I can reach it in one breath. Overcome this hurdle and start a new journey. Because there are so many people supporting me, no matter how tired I am, it is still worth it.
The content of the first volume seems a bit heavy, from the initial revenge, to being hunted, and then being deceived. Some book friends may think this seems a bit depressing. For example, when I wrote Liu Meng, there was a book Friends said it was too nymphomaniacal and too stupid to read. Haha, I wonder if book friends who have read it also feel that Liu Meng’s writing is a bit of a failure
In fact, the original plan was to let Yunfei leave Qingyun directly, without even being chased by Zhang Zhenshan, and naturally without Liu Meng's deception. But later I felt that if Yunfei was directly allowed to leave Qingyun and face the world outside, The world seems to be a little too hasty. If I write about how he has a smooth journey after he goes out, how he breaks every move and kills the enemy when he encounters it, it seems a little inappropriate (I think so). Therefore, we arranged for the appearance of Liu Meng. As the original Hanzhang book friend said, this "Zhu Jiuzhen" character allowed Yunfei to grow emotionally.
Yunfei has a firm mind and is resolute and decisive in situations. This is the result of eighteen years of perseverance (of course, there is also a trace of the influence of the time traveler), but as I said at the beginning, 'IQ and EQ should be separated', for Yunfei, who has lived hard for eighteen years and has almost never had contact with the opposite sex, is completely blank in terms of emotions. That's why he lost his judgment like that when Liu Meng appeared. In fact, my original intention was Write more of their stories so that Yunfei and Liu Meng can get along with each other for a longer time. Then the subsequent development, such as when Liu Meng wants to deceive the secret of the strengthening technique, will be more reasonable and not abrupt. But the reaction of the book lovers was quite big, so they sped up the plot and jumped directly to the breaking point.
I don’t know if you think about it now, are you satisfied with the story in Green Willow City
I have always said that what I want to write is enjoyable stories, but the first volume doesn't seem to be very exciting. Haha, there is no way. The plot is limited, and Yunfei, who has always been in a weak position, cannot kill everyone from the beginning. Starting from the second volume, I will write relaxed and refreshing stories, which will make everyone happy and smile. Then my efforts will be recognized and will not be in vain.
These days of writing a book, I really understand the hardships of the author. It takes you a few minutes to read a chapter, and the author may have to write it for several hours. Sometimes, he thinks hard for a sentence or an action for dozens of minutes, and finally writes it. Delete and delete, delete and write again, delete and write again...
Therefore, I would also like to say here to all my reading friends, even if you read a novel and you don’t like the plot in it, or even think it’s bad, please don’t abuse the author, if it really doesn’t suit your taste. , the quiet departure means that you will never look at that book again, and you will not be upset. Because it is very likely that your malicious words will affect the author for hours or even days.
I remember that when I saw the first bad review in the book review section, I was depressed for an afternoon and an evening. Although I knew that there was no need to care about this. The book I wrote could not be recognized by all readers, but it was control. I couldn’t help but feel sad in my heart, because the stories he sprayed were stories that I spent hours, even days, imagining while eating and sleeping, and then typed them out...
When I first published the book, there were 70,000 manuscripts saved. At that time, I didn’t understand the importance of saving manuscripts at all. I was preparing for the last exam in the driving school in those days, and then I finished publishing the manuscripts. It was a waste, and it was 5,000 words a day. All the updates are now coded. Except for eating and going to the toilet, my butt basically never leaves the stool. Whenever I see someone in the author group saying that they code several thousand words an hour, I feel so painful that I want to throw the computer, because I write several hundred words an hour...
Later, I had to prepare for graduation a while ago, so I could only update once a day, and the updates were not good enough. Yunhai didn't have the nerve to ask for red tickets or anything like that. For book friends who have worked hard to read and are not enjoying themselves every day, Yunhai is here Say sorry, haha. In the next period of time, at least before going to the company, Yunhai will work hard to code every day and try to write as many words as possible.
Yunfei walked out of Qingyun and began the real path of life. Yunhai also received his college diploma yesterday and is about to start his own career of struggle. Haha, I didn’t study hard at first and could only study in a vocational college for three years. Now I am about to truly enter the society and face the various social conditions. To be honest, I am not as free and easy as Yunfei. I am very confused. …
Next month at the latest, I will go to work in a company in Hebei. I don’t even understand the company at all. What I want to do will only be known after I go there...
Uh... I wanted to write a summary of the first volume, but writing it seems to have become my own complaint, haha, so be it.
Finally, I would like to thank my good brother Zheng Kai (well, he is the one who played the soy sauce a long time ago. He is the first supporting role... Oh, Zheng Kai said he is not a supporting role, he will be the second male lead...), he is still here when I am still here. Before the manuscript was submitted, he had always supported Yunhai. To put it bluntly, without his daily encouragement at that time, I might not have been able to write the initial 70,000-word manuscript, and I would not have submitted it. This book no longer exists. There are also good brothers such as Brother Bin and Kunpeng, as well as many classmates who came to support me (I remember a few days before I published the book, no one cared about it at all, it was all these friends who helped support it).
Of course, in the end, all the book friends who support Yun Hai are absolutely indispensable, such as Xiao Binzi (not the same as the previous Bin brother). He was the one who provided me with the book club group at the beginning, and he was also one of the first batch of readers to support Yun Hai. He is still there today. I am especially grateful to Xiao Binzi for his support.
There is also the 'selethky' book friend, he was the first book friend to cheer me up. I remember when I saw a name suddenly appeared in the empty cheering area, Yunhai was excited for a long time, haha...
There is also Brother Hongyin, '1354354354', Tianming, Xianshou, Hanzhang, Qiwanyue, L, Xiaowei, Mo Tong, Black as Night, Awakening from Dreams, Elegant Soul, Yan Xu, etc. (here A few random names, and there are many book friends in the group and those who often speak in support of Yun Hai in the book review area. Yun Hai will not name them here. Your support is seen by Yun Hai and will be remembered in my heart. I am grateful. There are many), of course, there are many book friends who don’t like to speak, but also silently support Yunhai and cast their precious red votes...
There are also many author friends. At the beginning of publishing the book, it was also thanks to the support and encouragement of the author friends in the group. Xiaotian, Yuehua, Youhen, Mengwei, Xiluo, Bayi, Jianxue, Butcher, Brother Mingyue, etc., there are many more, so I won’t list them all here...
(Well, I should add here: All the above are ranked in no particular order, haha.)
Huh? Why did it become a thank you meeting again? Sweat... Then should I add another sentence to thank the motherland, the party, and the CC*? Oh, no? Then forget it…
Haha, let’s stop writing here, Yunhai continues to organize the story of the second volume.
Finally, let me shout again - thank you all for your support to Yunhai! ! !