Regarding Chu Xiaoxiao's martial arts, He Yunxiao euphemistically explained to Fan Ziruo: "Chu Xiaoxiao actually knows a little martial arts, which is pretty good. Most people can't beat her."
Regarding Chu Xiaoxiao's ever-changing personality, He Yunxiao vividly explained: "She only likes Chu Fan, and won't give others a good look, so when she leaves Chu Fan, it's like a different person, you understand ?"
"Anyway, that's how things are. I'm helping a little girl who knows martial arts to chase her brother."
He Yunxiao's summary is quite accurate, although many dispensable details have been deleted, such as the difference between "knowledge of a little martial arts" and "knowledge of a billion martial arts", as well as the existence of the two personalities "Xiaoxiao" and "Chuchu". In addition, "solve the bad woman for her" is subtly summarized in "help her chase her brother".
Fan Ziruo, who didn't like Chu Xiaoxiao very much at first, looked at her with new eyes after hearing that she actually liked Chu Fan and not He Yunxiao.
"Miss Xiaoxiao, dare to love and hate, she is a good girl."
He Yunxiao responded: "That's right. That's right. When you see her, Ziwei, you must treat her as usual. Don't reveal your secrets."
Fan Ziruo said: "She dares to like her elder brother and risk the disapproval of the world. I should respect such courage."
He Yunxiao wiped the cold sweat from his forehead.
Guigui, your respect for her is equivalent to telling her "I know your secret", does this mean that you dislike your life for not being long enough
"Don't, don't, don't. She is a controversial relationship. The more you respect her, the more pressure you are putting on her. Let's pretend we didn't see it, and help each other secretly, so that this relationship will come to fruition. If Chu Xiaoxiao's feelings are strong, but Chu Fan doesn't like her, so your respect, Ziwei, is the last stone you can throw at Chu Xiaoxiao."
Hearing what He Yunxiao said, Fan Ziruo understood his mistake, so he stood up and thanked He Yunxiao: "Thank you for reminding me, my lord. Ziruo didn't think carefully, and almost did something bad with good intentions."
Seeing that Fan Ziruo agreed to treat Chu Xiaoxiao as usual, He Yunxiao finally breathed a sigh of relief. The matter of Chu Xiaoxiao's abnormal personality has been explained anyway.
After turning the page at this time, the topic quickly returned to the right track: how to write a good martial arts novel.
He Yunxiao dug out the novels and manuscript papers that he put away in the morning to avoid Chu Xiaoxiao, and handed them all to Fan Ziruo.
"Zi Ruo, here are some martial arts novels I found at home, you can read them first."
Fan Ziruo took the novel from He Fu's study, opened it for a look, then switched to another one, and opened it again. Then repeat the above operation twice again.
She smiled and said, "My lord, I have read all these books."
He Yunxiao's face darkened.
Seen? Have you seen it and can write it like that
Seeing He Yunxiao's expressionless face, Fan Ziruo said with a guilty conscience: "My lord, is Ziruo not very smart?"
He Yunxiao was thinking about how to teach Fan Ziruo to write a book, and subconsciously said: "No, you may just have a different brain from others."
Fan Ziruo: "Huh?"
He Yunxiao realized that he had made a slip of the tongue, and then he remembered that this was what he often said when he was typing on the keyboard in his previous life.
So he quickly explained: "I mean, there is a big difference between the story you think about, the story you finally express in words, and the story understood by readers after reading."
Fan Ziruo said: "Then what should I do?"
He Yunxiao didn't know what to do. He has not systematically studied screenwriting, and he does not understand many theories. I understand, but only a little bit, so I am a writer with "mud legs".
In fact, the vast majority of writers who write online articles are like him, and no one has systematically studied this aspect of knowledge. They are all growing up through constant trial and error and continuous rushing to the street.
He Yunxiao confirmed to Fan Ziruo again: "Ziruo, do you really want to write the kind of novel that everyone loves to read?"
Fan Ziruo looked at He Yunxiao and nodded solemnly. For her, it is very important for her to be happy when she writes, but getting the approval of the people she cares about is a thousand times happier than entertaining herself.
Zi Ruo wants to write a novel that Mr. He also likes to read!
Seeing that she was so determined, He Yunxiao no longer doubted her determination.
He can't write or teach world famous novels, but he can only write a popular novel that ordinary people love to read, but He Yunxiao has full confidence.
Although I was just a little bit of a street in my previous life, but now I am in the country of Qi where all kinds of entertainment products are quite scarce!
If I can't write something famous, how can I be worthy of the tens of millions of online readers in my previous life, and how can I be worthy of countless fellow writers who have been swept to death in my previous life!
Although he is invincible in the key, he dares to swing Kyushu with a brush!
Fan Ziruo watched He Yunxiao complete the transformation of temperament, just like a dandy who does not do good things, took off his brocade robe overnight, put on armor, and rode alone, holding a spear, across ten thousand Before the army formation.
[Fan Ziruo's favorability changed from 75 to 75]
"Zi Ruo, in fact, I want to write a novel that everyone loves to read. Do you know what is the most important point?"
"have no idea."
He Yunxiao looked at her and said with a smile: "The most important thing is to let go of your pride."
Fan Ziruo frowned, as if he had realized it, but also seemed not to have it.
He Yunxiao didn't force her to understand. Just by saying that, it is normal not to understand.
He pulled out the manuscript paper and divided it into two halves. Handed half of it to Fan Ziruo, and said, "Ziruo, the novels I brought you have been read by both of us. One of them is about 'Joining the Su Family', remember?"
Fan Ziruo nodded and said, "I remember. It's called "Taihu Swordsman Records."
He Yunxiao said: "That's right. Let's rename this novel now, and then go to Sister Du and the other little maids in the house to see whose novel they are more interested in."
Fan Ziruo didn't know what He Yunxiao's intention was, but he didn't ask any further questions, and just followed his orders.
Thinking in her heart that she should not be underestimated by the young master, she recalled the content of the novel with her heart, and then continued to refine the gist of the novel.
Finally, after thinking for a quarter of an hour, Fan Ziruo wrote down her new name—"Qingping".
On the other hand, He Yunxiao had written it early, and kept his chin in his hands to secretly look at Fan Ziruo's pretty face frowning and thinking.
He Yunxiao sighed in his heart: The heroine is the heroine. Whether it's Chu Xiaoxiao, Du Yinyun, or Fan Ziruo who is right in front of him. They are not just a matter of beauty, but they are stunning at first glance, and the more beautiful they become after the second, third and fourth glance. Most importantly, they are the kind of beauty that each has its own merits, rather than a cookie-cutter beauty.
It really makes people feel how this face grows.
It is simply perfect because of He Yunxiao's aesthetics.
After Fan Ziruo thought about the name, he said to He Yunxiao, "Have you thought about it, my lord?"
He Yunxiao smiled and said, "Of course. Zi Ruo wants to see it?"
"Um."
He Yunxiao was also unambiguous, and pushed the manuscript paper with his name in front of Fan Ziruo on the spot.
I saw that on the manuscript paper, it was written impressively:
"The Son-in-Law: Defeating the Martial Arts Leader with One Move".
The boss of "No more than seven characters" has already rewarded three leaders for this book. The author doesn't know what to say, the only way to repay everyone is to write better!
Thank you, the leader, and readers for your support and expectations!
Crabs will work hard!
Thanks!
(end of this chapter)