He Yunxiao knew what Fan Ziruo meant when he said "it's not good to make up your own mind": let him discuss it with her father, Fan Changshu. In fact, this is a tactful refusal.
Fan Ziruo is conservative in thinking and has a stable personality. In addition, she only has 76 favorability points. He Yunxiao understands that she doesn't directly agree to the proposal.
But now, what He Yunxiao didn't understand was why the first time he hit him by mistake and said that he was her husband-in-law, he could increase his favorability a little. It won't work the second time you hint.
Unable to figure it out for a while, He Yunxiao chose to let it go for now.
The good news is that now, like Chu Fan, I finally have 76 favorability points with sister Ziwei. Based on the 76 favorability alone, we can already start to try how to reduce sister Ziruo's favorability towards Chu Fan.
As long as sister Ziruo's affection for Chu Fan is lowered, she can be completely freed from Chu Xiaoxiao's clutches just like sister Du was back then!
But now is not the time to think about these things, what should be thought about now is how to get out the reasons for her knot when teaching Zi Ruo to write the plot.
He Yunxiao looked at Fan Zi's pretty, ruddy face, and felt that a dignified beauty had a special charm when she looked shy.
In order to test his mind when writing the plot outline, He Yunxiao had no choice but to destroy the beautiful picture of "the beauty is shy".
"Azusa weak."
The blush on Fan Ziruo's face hadn't subsided yet, when he heard He Yunxiao calling her, he quickly responded, "Yes."
"Should we discuss novels?"
Hearing about the novel, Fan Ziruo became serious.
"Yes, the young master said just now, summarizing his own story in one sentence."
After she finished speaking, she also thoughtfully handed the manuscript paper with the story written on it to He Yunxiao.
He Yunxiao looked at the manuscript paper and explained carefully: "Now, we have a relatively clear story line, but it is not enough. We also need an outline to expand this line."
"Does Ziwei know what an outline is?"
Fan Ziruo naturally knew, "The outline is the gist of the story."
He Yunxiao said again: "Yes! It's the main points. After these points are subdivided, they can be divided into setting outline, plot line outline, emotional line outline, and character outline."
He Yunxiao pointed to the first paragraph of the story on Fan Ziruo's paper, "Fan Zi loves her senior brother He Xiao".
Then he said: "The so-called outline is the outline of the various settings in the story. For example, here, Fan Zi is He Xiao's junior sister. Then what kind of martial arts are they? What martial arts do they learn? They What are the martial arts sects in this world?…”
Fan Ziruo nodded to express his understanding.
Then, He Yunxiao introduced the "Outline of Plot Line", "Outline of Emotional Line" and "Outline of Character".
And emphatically said: "The most important thing in a love story is not the setting, but the plot and feelings. The plot needs to be plain with ups and downs, and the feelings must be logical. If the former is not good, it will make people feel boring. The latter If not, it will make people feel blunt."
Fan Ziruo nodded again, expressing his understanding.
Although Fan Ziruo is indeed a genius, He Yunxiao doesn't believe that she, who has never written much novels, can master how to write novels after just listening to it once.
So He Yunxiao said: "Zi Ruo, please write out a plot outline for the section 'Fan Zi loves her senior brother He Xiao, and tried every means to "lose his body" to him, but unfortunately failed repeatedly", and show me. "
Fan Zi agreed "yes" weakly, then took out the pen and paper, and started to write.
Seeing her posture, He Yunxiao was in a bad mood. She couldn't really write it just by listening to it, could she
Genius really doesn't make sense at all
He Yunxiao paced behind her, looking at her handwriting on the manuscript paper.
After watching only two paragraphs, He Yunxiao called him a good guy.
The plot that Fan Ziruo needs to write has three main points to express, the first is "Fan Zi loves He Xiao", the second is "want to lose his body to him", and the third is "failed repeatedly".
The first plot that Fan Ziruo wrote on the manuscript paper was "Senior Brothers and Sisters on a Mission, He Xiao Hero Saves the Beauty". Although the plot is old-fashioned, as long as the emotional description is in place, it is more than enough to explain the reasons why "Fan Zi loves He Xiao".
Then the second plot is "He Xiao is welcomed by teachers and sisters in the sect". The plot is ingenious. It directly deepened Fan Zi's sense of crisis, who liked He Xiao, and paved the way for her behavioral motivation for "wanting to lose herself".
After watching these two plots, He Yunxiao no longer wants to watch them.
He knew that Fan Ziruo would be fine in terms of plot design.
A genius is a genius.
No matter what it is, just teach her once, and she can draw inferences from one instance and use it proficiently.
Is there still a king's law? Is there still a law
He Yunxiao just wanted to scold the injustice of God, but when he thought that sister Ziwei was his wife, and when she was smart, the baby she gave birth to herself would also be smart. He Yunxiao silently gave God a thumbs up.
As if he had thought about it long ago, Fan Ziruo wrote very quickly, and finished the first paragraph of the plot in a short while.
He Yunxiao looked at the manuscript paper Fan Ziruo handed him, speechless.
From the plot point of view, Fan Ziruo's plot is not particularly bright, but every plot is very reasonable. That's enough.
The so-called love essays do not look at the plot, but the characters and the development of the relationship between the characters.
Fan Ziruo's plot is completely up to the mark.
With her writing skills, she doesn't have to worry about describing bad characters at all, so for her, almost as long as she completes the outline of the emotional line, she can start writing novels.
He Yunxiao really wanted to say: Ziwei, you write very well. But no, He Yunxiao has other purposes, he has to pretend to discuss the outline with Fan Ziruo, to test out her knots.
Taking advantage of the time spent reading the outline, He Yunxiao thought about the previous case where sister Ziruo's favorability increased a little.
At that time, I accidentally assumed the role of her husband-in-law, and then increased her favorability a little. Later, when I substituted for her husband-in-law again and tried to test her, the favorability level did not increase.
Why did it go up the previous time and not the next time
Could it be that the reason for the increase in favorability is actually my attitude of treating her as a husband-in-law, not because I said love words to her
Her husband's attitude can only appear once, but love words can be said many times, so when she knows my attitude, I can't reproduce this thing again, so the favorability can only increase once. The next time I tried it, it didn't work.
But why does she increase her favorability because of my "want to marry her" attitude towards her
Did she acquiesce before that I would not marry her
Why does she think so
He Yunxiao didn't want to understand, so he could only focus on Fan Ziruo's plot outline again.
In the plot outline, there is a plot that reads "He Xiao rejected Fan Zi, who threw himself into his arms, because he thought she was more than just a junior sister."
He Yunxiao couldn't figure it out, so he asked Fan Ziruo, "Ziruo, why did He Xiao reject Fan Zi?"
Fan Ziruo looked at the manuscript paper and explained: "Because Fan Zi is a junior sister, but Fan Zi's father and He Xiao are friends of Wangnian."
He Yunxiao understood that the reason why He Xiao rejected Fan Zi was because of ethics. To put it simply, Fan Zi is the daughter of Brother He Xiao, so how can she do this
The more He Yunxiao thought about it, the more something went wrong.
Since He Xiao does not accept Fan Zi because of ethics, then Fan Ziruo, as the author, has this kind of thinking, is it possible that she does not accept me because of ethics
It's entirely possible!
No wonder she will increase her favorability after knowing my attitude of "wanting to marry her", which would not increase no matter how much I tried before. It turned out that she had never encountered the line of "teacher and student" before, and she had never dared to think about it!
Fan Ziruo values these things the most. She is both my teacher and my student. Under such a complicated relationship, it is normal for her to have concerns.
He Yunxiao thought back when he first met Fan Ziruo, he had to destroy the teacher-student relationship with Fan Ziruo and become her teacher, because he was afraid of this situation.
Unexpectedly, it still appeared.
However, now that you know the cause of the knot, it will be much easier to untie it.
Brothers, the long-lost Gagen is here. It may be a beautiful thing to add more!
That's it, it's not too much for a river crab to ask for a monthly pass, right
Isn't it too much to ask for a monthly ticket
Isn't it too much to ask for a monthly ticket
Isn't it too much to ask for a monthly ticket
(end of this chapter)