After eating, He Yunxiao reviewed the martial arts moves for a while, and estimated that it was almost done. So he set off again to study in Fan's study.
Fan Ziruo, the daughter of the Fan family, doesn't go out often.
Except every Qingming Festival, I will definitely go outside the city to worship at my mother's grave. At other times, and only occasionally, when it was raining, I would take a carriage and go to a Buddhist temple outside the city.
As for why he went out when it was raining, it was probably because Fan Ziruo didn't like to be noisy, and there were few people quiet when it rained. It is inconvenient when it rains heavily, so I only go out when it rains lightly.
When He Yunxiao came to the study of Fan Mansion this time, he was not alone in the study.
Fan Ziruo was still in the previous position, reading a book quietly, and beside her, there was another beautiful woman, sister Du, Du Yinyun, who He Yunxiao was thinking of.
In the eyes of outsiders, sister Du has always been indifferent, cold, and not fond of talking and laughing.
Her "not talkative" is "I don't like you, don't come close to me" not talkative.
And Fan Ziruo's "not talkative" is the "sorry, who are you" not talkative.
One is that strangers should not enter, and the other is quiet and comfortable.
Of course, the "stranger" in Du Yinyun's "Don't Enter Strangers" is specifically explained as "people other than He Yunxiao". It is no exaggeration to say that it also includes her good sister Fan Ziruo.
He Yunxiao reckoned that maybe even Fan Ziruo hadn't seen what kind of sister Du's real personality was.
In order to protect Fan Ziruo's hard-won 50 favorability points, He Yunxiao chose to stand at the door of the study room, knocked on the door politely, and greeted the two girls politely after entering the room.
Seeing He Yunxiao coming, Du Yinyun knew that they were going to start "studying", so she gave up the desk and got up to leave.
Fan Ziruo was reluctant to let his good sister go, but thinking of Du Yinyun's temperament, she must not like to stay with He Yunxiao, so he didn't make a sound to persuade him to stay.
He Yunxiao was also reluctant to leave Du Yinyun. She stayed, saying that she could play some fun things under the eyes of her current sister Fan like she was at Jiang Wuyou's place last time.
Although he was reluctant, he was a guest in Fan's residence, so making strange requests would be annoying. He Yunxiao wanted to protect Fan Ziruo's favorability, so he didn't say anything to keep Sister Du.
Now, there were only two people left in the study.
Fan Ziruo read a book quietly as usual. The difference from last time was that this time, instead of looking at the weapon illustrated book, she changed to a history book.
Seeing Fan Ziruo's posture, He Yunxiao knew that she was going to write a novel, but didn't know that she thought she was going to publish a paper.
He Yunxiao pretended to be reading the book, but in fact, he kept staring at Fan Ziruo beside him from the corner of his eyes.
Sure enough, Fan Ziruo put down the martial arts novel, picked up the history book, read it for a while, and suddenly fell asleep on the table.
With the experience from last time, He Yunxiao knew that Fan Ziruo would be very confused when he first woke up, so naturally he would not miss this opportunity.
He specially waited for Fan Ziruo to fall asleep, and He Yunxiao stretched out his hand to push her.
"Miss Ziruo? Sister Ziruo? Sister Ziruo wake up."
Fan Ziruo raised his head sleepily.
"Who are you?"
"I'm He Yunxiao, Gu Ziruo, show me the novel you wrote, okay?"
"OK."
Fan Ziruo got up from the desk, bounced to the edge of the bookshelf, opened a box, took out the manuscript paper from it, and... then froze in place.
Seeing her stunned, He Yunxiao thought to himself: It's broken, I woke up.
He got up immediately, and hurriedly said, "Miss Ziruo, why are you standing still?"
Fan Ziruo herself was also puzzled, she felt that her memory was fragmented. I was clearly still reading just now, why did I suddenly walk to the edge of the bookshelf and suddenly take out the martial arts novel I secretly wrote
She is planning to write a martial arts novel, and after finishing it, she also plans to publish it.
But semi-finished products and finished products are not the same thing.
To the author, a semi-finished product is like wearing no clothes. How can it be shown to others casually
She was about to put the novel back.
He Yunxiao didn't want to miss this once-in-a-lifetime opportunity!
I have to find a way to get her to send me the novel! In this way, we have a common secret!
Once two people have common hobbies and common secrets, the relationship between them will develop very quickly.
He Yunxiao said: "Miss Ziruo, are you afraid that I will spread it everywhere?"
Fan Ziruo asked suspiciously, "What are you afraid of preaching?"
He Yunxiao said: "Don't worry. If the girl is willing to read novels to me, I will naturally keep it secret for the girl."
Fan Ziruo asked back, "I am willing?"
He Yunxiao said as a matter of course: "Yes. Otherwise, who will the girl show the novel to?"
Fan Ziruo frowned and recalled, but couldn't remember, so he agreed to read the novel to He Yunxiao.
He Yunxiao pretended to be disappointed, and said regretfully: "Oh, I thought I could appreciate the girl's work, but it's a pity that the girl changed her mind at the last moment, it's because of He's blessing."
Fan Ziruo: "I..."
He Yunxiao immediately said: "It's also strange that He can only learn martial arts, but can't write articles, and can't give Miss Ziruo even a little advice."
Fan Ziruo only remembered that he had done nothing, but for some reason, he suddenly felt guilty towards He Yunxiao in his heart. She was awakened by He Yunxiao's next paragraph, and she understood that He Yunxiao knew martial arts, and she must be able to see the flaws in martial arts in her novels.
With these two items, she finally overcame the shame in her heart, and handed over the semi-finished novel "without clothes" to He Yunxiao.
He Yunxiao took several volumes of manuscript paper in his hand very seriously, and then picked up the martial arts novel written by Fan Ziruo very seriously and read it.
Fan Ziruo sat aside, looking at He Yunxiao eagerly.
[Fan Ziruo's favorability degree changed from 50 to 60]
[Fan Ziruo's favorability degree changed from 60 to 40]
[Fan Ziruo's favorability degree changed from 40 to 45]
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When He Yunxiao was reading the novel, he sneaked a few glances at Fan Ziruo. Although he couldn't tell from his complexion, he could tell from the drastic change in favorability that this girl was really embarrassed.
It took courage to show the semi-finished product to others.
He Yunxiao can understand this feeling. As an old bookworm, he also has the idea of writing a novel, thinking of becoming a god with a book. It's a pity that the reality told him that he was just an old man. Not even Lao Pujie, but an "old eunuch".
In the first few days when he first published the book, he went to the comment area every day to see the evaluations given to him by readers. Later, when I watched it too much, I became an old oily person. A dead pig is not afraid of boiling water, and a eunuch is an eunuch.
Fan Ziruo's novel, based on He Yunxiao's many years of reading experience as an old bookworm, as well as his experience in writing half-hearted online novels, can only be summed up in four words: too literary.
It is really too literary!
He Yunxiao couldn't understand many words in this novel. Although he couldn't understand it, it didn't prevent him from feeling in his heart that it was well written, gorgeous and beautiful.
Every paragraph is like this.
Every short article is a beautiful chapter.
But looking at it together, it's weird.
It has nothing to do with martial arts novels.
He Yunxiao didn't know how to evaluate it, in short: if Fan Ziruo relied on writing novels for food, even if she didn't eat much, she would starve to death.
Under Fan Ziruo's expectant eyes, He Yunxiao slowly turned to the last page and put down the novel slowly.
He said to Fan Ziruo solemnly: "Miss Ziruo, your novel is so well written! It's so beautiful!"
[Fan Ziruo's favorability degree changed from 45 to 65]
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