Fan Ziruo's favorability score suddenly rose from 45 to 65 with her sudden excitement, and then fell back to 52 as her mood calmed down.
"Master He, do you have any suggestions for my novel after reading it?"
Fan Ziruo still sat and talked like before, but this time, He Yunxiao was able to hear a hint of anticipation in her tone.
Any suggestions? I advise you not to write fiction.
He Yunxiao thought over and over again how to use words, thinking about how to point out the problems in Fan Ziruo's novels without hurting Fan Ziruo's enthusiasm for writing.
"I think the biggest problem with your novel... um... is you... you actually..."
You can't actually tell a story.
He Yunxiao wanted to say this, but looking at Fan Ziruo's crystal clear eyes, he really couldn't say such heartless words.
Forget it, it's all here to gain favorability anyway, so I'll help her with "writing novels".
He Yunxiao finally said: "The biggest problem with your novel is that you actually lack experience."
Fan Ziruo asked suspiciously, "Lack of experience?"
"Yeah." This time he really talked about his professional field, He Yunxiao talked eloquently, "In martial arts novels, the protagonist often sleeps in the wild, and the girl has never caught a chicken or killed a rabbit. How can the protagonist be described as hunting for food? What about the scene?"
"It's the same. The girl doesn't know any martial arts at all. Although she can read martial arts charts and imagine fighting scenes, things written in this way often lack fatal details, making the whole scene seem unreal."
"Like here."
He Yunxiao spread out the manuscript for Fan Ziruo to read.
"Did you see anything wrong in this fight?"
Fan Ziruo re-read the plot he had written before. After thinking about it carefully, he really didn't find anything wrong.
"I don't see anything wrong."
He Yunxiao said softly: "Zi weak."
[Fan Ziruo's favorability degree changed from 52 to 51]
Fan Ziruo didn't like being called so intimate by outsiders, she frowned slightly, and shifted her gaze from the novel on the table to He Yunxiao.
However, what she saw was a fist roaring towards him!
This fist is extremely fierce and fast!
Almost instantly, it changed from a small ball to a behemoth that filled the entire field of vision.
Fan Ziruo was stunned, and the fist also stopped an inch in front of her.
The fist wind generated by the whistling of the fist, after the fist stopped, still moved forward, blowing on Fan Ziruo's face, and gently blowing up the hair on her back.
"How? Did you find something wrong with what you wrote?"
He Yunxiao withdrew his fist and asked with a smile.
Fan Ziruo was speechless for a moment, pondered thoughtfully for a while, and suddenly realized.
"When masters fight, they don't care about the flowers and plants!"
He Yunxiao pretended to be an old man with a long beard, and while stroking the non-existent beard, he imitated the old man's voice and said: "Exactly, exactly."
[Fan Ziruo's favorability degree changed from 51 to 55]
"Hmm."
Miss Fan was amused by He Yunxiao's actions, she bent her head down a little, she had to put one hand on the table, her big eyes bent into crescent moons, and the other hand covered the corner of her upturned mouth.
Seeing that Fan Ziruo was happy, He Yunxiao was also happy in his heart, then suddenly realized, and said: "I know why the girl doesn't like to laugh."
Fan Ziruo asked suspiciously, "Why?"
"Because the girl is a good person."
"Why don't I smile often because I am a good person?"
"If a girl smiles a lot and is seen by others, letting them know that she is no match for a girl, it will only increase jealousy and resentment in this world."
[Fan Ziruo's favorability degree changed from 55 to 56]
Fuck, it's different when the favorability is high. I praised her when the favorability was low before, but it was all a drop in favorability. Now it's finally on the right track and it's starting to rise!
Fan Ziwei smiled, not caring too much about He Yunxiao's compliments on her.
She doesn't value external things, on the contrary, she values inner satisfaction more.
"Master He, please continue to teach me martial arts."
He Yunxiao was naturally happy. He said with some emotion: "There are many reasons for a person to practice martial arts, such as strengthening his body, joining the army, and establishing a sect. However, this is the first time I have heard of practicing martial arts for writing novels. "
Fan Ziruo said earnestly: "Young master said it. 'Without investigation, there is no right to speak'."
Although He Yunxiao said this himself, he was a little embarrassed at the moment, "You can't do everything yourself, can you?"
Fan Ziruo stretched his hands behind his back to pull back his shawl hair, ready to learn martial arts.
"Why can't you do everything yourself?"
He Yunxiao didn't know how to explain to her.
Could it be that when you write that the heroine will get pregnant, how does it feel to give birth to one yourself
hiss…
It seems to be too, isn't it
Fan Ziruo quickly tied up his hair and let it be neatly coiled on his head.
She stood in the middle of the study, posing for the pose that He Yunxiao taught her yesterday.
He Yunxiao stood aside and said, "Try what I taught you yesterday, and try it first."
Fan Ziruo gave a "hmm", and then seriously repeated the posture that He Yunxiao taught her yesterday.
Regardless of Fan Ziruo's soft appearance, He Yunxiao was surprised to find that she had restored the professor's pose yesterday quite well.
[Speciality: Learning]
What a girl who is good at learning!
No wonder sleeping while reading a book, can sleep out a "first talented woman".
He Yunxiao didn't teach much yesterday, Fan Ziruo repeated the poses one by one, and finished it quickly.
"Master He, how are you doing?"
He Yunxiao knew that Fan Ziruo's personality tended to be serious and stable, and he didn't like people who were full of jokes.
He gave up the teasing words that just came to his lips, and said seriously: "Miss Ziruo has done a good job. But I have to clarify something with the girl first."
"you say."
"In martial arts, in addition to hard work, talent is also very important. If Miss Ziruo wants to practice it herself, I'm afraid it will take many years to practice the wonderful fights in the novel."
These words directly extinguished most of Fan Ziruo's interest in learning martial arts.
Do you want to concentrate on learning martial arts, and then write novels after learning something
When will we have to wait
Seeing her worried look, He Yunxiao comforted her and said, "Actually, you don't need to be a real master, you just need to become a fake master."
Fan Ziruo Bingxue was smart and immediately understood what He Yunxiao meant.
"Master He is saying that it is enough for me to learn the superficial?"
He Yunxiao said: "In terms of writing novels alone, just scratching the surface is really enough."
He Yunxiao took out a copy of Enlightenment Palm Technique from home and handed it to Fan Ziruo.
"If the girl doesn't believe it, let's do an experiment. You look at this palm technique once, then practice it again, and then we will try it out against each other."
Fan Ziruo had never been familiar with martial arts, so when he saw what He Yunxiao said, he had no choice but to do as he said.
She is not Du Yinyun.
The Du family is fond of martial arts, and Du Lie often practices martial arts at home. Although Du Yinyun doesn't learn it, he has been familiar with it since he was a child, and he is no stranger to many martial arts moves. But the Fan family did not practice martial arts, and even deliberately resisted martial arts. This made Fan Ziruo naturally know little about martial arts.
Even in this situation, she watched He Yunxiao's Enlightenment Palm Technique once, and when she tried to do it herself, she was able to restore it to the sevens and eights.
He Yunxiao saw that she had almost learned it, so he said: "Miss Ziruo, come and try to fight me. You don't have to worry about it, just use what you just learned, and hit me as you like."
Fan Zi nodded weakly, learned the moves from the book just now, and waved towards He Yunxiao.
In He Yunxiao's eyes, Fan Ziruo's moves were really light, soft, and slow.
But he deliberately slowed down and accompanied Fan Ziruo to experience martial arts, so it seemed that the two were evenly matched.
Fan Ziruo waved his plain hand, and slapped He Yunxiao straight with his palm. He Yunxiao didn't want to back down, so he used the same move to slap Fan Ziruo.
Of course it is hard.
Thus, in the classic scene in martial arts novels, two supreme masters clashed palms, and appeared in Fan's study.
After aligning palms for a while, Fan Ziruo suddenly felt something was wrong.
A man and a woman, palm to palm...
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