When I originally wrote the volume, I had a lot of things I wanted to tell you about my design, my idea,
But after I really finished writing, I didn’t want to go into details all of a sudden,
Because it has become very difficult to even elaborate on the creative difficulties I have encountered.
Believe in the story of this volume, the experience for pirate book lovers should not be perfect. After all, almost every chapter is written, and I have to change it the next day.
Some places even took the time to almost rewrite it
The story in this volume is too complicated, it should be the most complicated plot I have ever written
This is also my own upward breakthrough, a challenge. Although it is the exhaustion of young people's blood, I don't want to write routines that have always been about saving people and exploding seeds.
So in this volume, I set the condition that Fangran can leave even if he withdraws,
Being forced by the outside world is different from choosing to be yourself.
..
In addition, some people said that I always write about the changes in my heart over and over again, and I just feel that people who say this may not have read those words carefully.
When he was in the Arctic plane, he recognized his strength and moved forward even if he was uneasy. The National War Scroll was to step on the stage and stop leaving the daily life in place.
Wandering in London is to admit that you can do something without strength, and at the same time, you have to think about what you want to do
On the escape train in the wild, it was he who was struggling with why he chose to stay
After escaping from the UK, I have already thought about this issue clearly on the rooftop of the hotel, faced my heart honestly, and have already figured out what I will do in this incident, but I have not yet figured out what I want to be in my big life. people
And finally hear the voice of wish,
So these are completely progressive changes in my heart. I don’t know why people always say that I am always sensational and repetitive.
In fact, I don't know how much easier it would be to write if I didn't bother with these things
But I have always believed that characters who simply experience events without changing their moods are very monotonous and brainless, like Xiaobaiwen who only pretends to face.
It was these actions that supported Fangran, from rushing into the manor, desperately trying to save Osphia, to the cult group, to his flamboyant rushing out of Paris,
Mental activities are linked to the actions of the characters. In order to filter these, I don’t know how long I have had a headache.
...
Then I will talk about the plot of this volume as a whole, roughly divided into five parts like this,
London, Paris, mentor base, going to Rome, final battle,
For the London part, to be honest, I was very happy to write at that time, because I had nothing to wander to a foreign country, being hunted down by people, and the development of being confused was really exciting and interesting.
I really like the plot of working with Tang Bing Supermarket. In order to write this well, I don’t know how much I learned about studying in London and living in London during that time.
I spent hours looking up prices in supermarkets
As for the escape part, I was influenced by Tang Bing at the time so that I didn't grasp the rhythm and atmosphere well. It was obviously about escape but the writing was too daily, and I rewrote it later.
I was actually confused by that paragraph, and I didn’t know how to write it down.
Fortunately, the appearance of Osphia gave me a breakthrough to start the main plot.
As for the small or numb foreshadowing, it was finally recovered
In fact, I originally planned to let Fangran and the others cross the sea to Paris, but because Bath is on the left side of London, the plot conflicts, so I gave up
This part, to be honest, the second half of the writing is not perfect, if I can design more in advance, it may be more interesting;
In the Paris section, among the five sections, this is probably the best section I wrote, because the outline of this section is relatively substantial,
I've been anticipating what to write here a long time ago, so it's pretty smooth
Similarly, yes, it took a lot of time to look up Paris information, (and it also made me completely disappointed in this city)
And based on the life of its bottom-level people, the plot of the cult group and the dark side of reality is designed, and it is related to witch hunting
Just like London is divided into two parts, the city and the escape, Paris is divided into the upper and lower ends, using the upper-class dance party to compare the lower-class cult group, and recovering the foreshadowing of Kerim and Li Dana,
This part is full of various things,
For example, I carefully thought out the setting of extracting night party companions and abilities, because the arrangement of various things is relatively compact, I didn't focus on the description, and the writing is more interesting.
It's my little regret,
Of course, in this part, the most important thing is to get out of Paris. At that time, I had just completed Invasion of Different Degrees. Buttfly’s Divine Comedy made my soul warm up, and my inspiration exploded.
There is nothing special to say about the tutor's base. It is all about the foreshadowing of the birth of the mechanical dragon and the hunting of the moon god, and then use the attack to lure Fangran to make another choice.
The spying plan, the plot of going to Rome, the part of the link between the past and the future, in order to be more dramatic, and to correspond to the role of the witch cult, Her Lady Queen's appearance in You Ye can be regarded as a contrast to the strength of the mentor
In this part, what I want to focus on is the character image of the mentor, and the others are foreshadowing and foreshadowing
As for going to Rome, alas
This plot is the worst end of the five parts I wrote,
Because when I wrote this at the time, I was almost hollowed out. Inspiration, enthusiasm, status, outline, everything was insufficient. I didn’t know what to write or how to write this paragraph.
And because of the rhythm (that is, when the base was attacked, the atmosphere of the last moment was already set off), I couldn't write any light-hearted plot in this paragraph, which ruined the atmosphere.
The whole month of May, tortured me to death,
I originally wanted to write a group of people going to Rome, but encountered many obstacles, like the feeling of rpg breakthrough (this volume is rpg),
Although in fact it was written, but it still feels not neat enough, how to describe it, it is the feeling that the plot design is not very neat and clear,
And this paragraph, I dare not slow down the rhythm, because it will make the tension of the previous attack all in vain (after all, the timeline is only one night)
So it’s very tiring to write, and I guess you will be very tired after chasing. I don’t know how to feel fattened. After all, I haven’t seen any comments on the end of the volume. (The only one sent to me by a group of friends is still Very personal subjective color, in my opinion, what he doesn't want to see is the shortcoming, just a few sprays)
It is also a pity that both Mucheng and the young master were originally drawn in this part.
I was very concerned about the whole scene, the young master only showed his face, Mucheng's plot was compressed, and I couldn't even write Le Guin carefully.
In the European volume, what I regret the most is that the characters drawn from the night game,
I originally wanted the members of the night bureau who hadn't appeared before, or who appeared infrequently, in this volume, to supplement their characters, stories, past, and so on, to strengthen the bond with Fangran
However, due to the failure to design all aspects of the problem, only Yota's writing is probably not bad.
Secondly, the most regrettable thing is the planning and action of the association. I found that I was not good at writing such things. Although I worked hard, I still felt that I could not write well.
In addition, there is still a shortage of clichéd scenes, there is no place to write them, and I don't like to write the plot very straightforwardly, which probably makes it even more difficult for you to understand.
I probably have been giving you what they seem to be doing, but I don’t know what they are doing.
Maybe I've been playing Bloodborne Wolf too much, and I was influenced by the old thief Hidetaka Miyazaki... .
...
As for the part of the final decisive battle, there is nothing to say,
How difficult it is to write the final orgasm, and how hysterical and meaningless I was when I finished writing it, I won’t share it with you,
The source of inspiration, probably when I was in my junior year, I heard the song "Light Energy Messenger", the old rhythm lyrics, accompanied by nostalgic background special effects
It made me uncontrollably come up with the picture of a huge silver dragon standing behind me, and then contacted me who always wanted to write a story about being thrown abroad for adventure.
Afterwards, it was successfully connected to the national war and the association plan,
With this volume of European Raiders.
That's right, I actually planned to write this volume when I was a junior
So far, the handsome plot in the big stage of this book has almost run out of stock in my mind, and the second part is half finished.
So I'm still hesitating about the next volume of stories,
I was still deeply impressed by the extreme Calvin’s torment in May and June. The pain of not knowing what to write is actually not bad.
The most painful thing is the feeling that you don't know what to write and write down stuff that you know is not good at all,
This is too painful for an author who wants to write his own debut, which can be regarded as a dream
Believe me, if I want to earn more money, I can make up and continue to write the plot anyway, and I will never slow down and occasionally stop it to ensure the quality.
But, I want that, royal feel,
That feeling of "it has to be written like this, and it must be great if written like this" in the plot
alas, headache,
Finally, let's talk about the characters.
Tang Bing, Osfia, Kerim,,
They have different divisions of labor and responsibilities, and their characters and experiences are also completely different, so adding Fangran,
In this way, four different people formed a team and finally solved the story of this incident.
I don't know how long I imagined in those rpgs I played
I like the three of them very much. In this volume, the other characters may be because of the rhythm, or because there is no place for the content, the lack of roles, and the characters are not well described.
But there are only three of them, I can say with confidence that I have written the best,
(Gourd, huh, interesting woman)
Huh... ..
In the past, I always asked you whether you were satisfied in the nonsense at the end of the paper, and then said that I was very satisfied,
But this volume, let me see my upper limit and my shortcomings, I can't say I am satisfied, I still have a lot of places to write better,
But anyway, this volume is finally finished,
I should post the outline of this volume to the full order group. If you are curious, you can read it, but the plan cannot keep up with the changes. Many plots are completely different from the outline.
That's all