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"Say it, let's listen." Zhang Zhixing put on a reluctant look.
Fang Yun sighed softly and spoke slowly. Everyone thought that he was going to criticize, and they all wanted to see how Yan Yukong would react.
"If I have to say there is any flaw in this poem, it is that this is a Spring Festival literary event, but his poem is like welcoming the spring. It is inappropriate and flawed!"
As soon as Fang Yun finished speaking, laughter erupted one after another, and Yan Yukong laughed the most happily.
Zhang Zhixing said angrily: "This is not a fault-finding, it is just perfunctory! The title of this poem is 'Spring', not 'Send Spring'. Sending Spring is a literary event, not a poem title. You have to say this seriously. The shortcomings of poetry, otherwise it is equivalent to contempt for this article! "
"Yes, you look down on us old students too much. No, you must criticize!"
"I must say it harshly. This so-called flaw is nothing but an imperfection!"
Even some new students felt that Fang Yun was protecting Yan Yukong.
Fang Yun looked embarrassed and said, "Isn't this good? I have already picked out the flaws and I can't continue to pick them out. Zhang Zhixing, you are covering the sky at the literary conference. Be careful that I complain to the gentlemen of Chongwen Academy!"
"Complain? It's up to you, but before you complain, you must find out Yan Yukong's fault for me!" Zhang Zhixing said confidently.
Everyone found it more and more interesting that the old student had forced Xu Sheng to do this, which would never be seen in the future, so everyone started making noises, demanding that Fang Yun could not avoid the important and take the easy, and must give an explanation to Wen Hui.
Even some new students joined in the booing, and the atmosphere was extremely lively, which was more and more in line with the purpose of this cultural gathering. Everyone was here to have fun, and the dignified Xusheng did not put on airs, and he wanted to have fun.
Fang Yun shook his head helplessly and said: "There is no way, you can't blame me, I really said it!"
"Say it quickly!" Zhang Zhixing laughed.
The laughter gradually subsided and everyone looked at Fang Yun.
Fang Yun coughed slightly and said: "This poem itself cannot be said to have any flaws. The problem is that you are not afraid of not knowing the goods, but you are afraid of comparing goods. The first two sentences are 'spring water and spring ponds are full. In spring, spring grass grows', and in spring, spring grass grows." "生" can definitely be regarded as a good sentence, simple and specific, and the imagery is real, but the first sentence is a bit poor, and "Spring Water" is not bad, and even "Spring Pond" is good, but the two together are a bit redundant, and the key is better than the following sentence. There is a huge difference. If it is replaced with "spring comes, the spring pool is full", it not only echoes the following "spring time", but as the beginning of the whole poem, "spring comes" goes straight to the point of the poem, which makes the words more sophisticated. Although it is lacking, it can be changed to words such as "to" and "warm".
Many students nodded slightly. In spring, spring grass grows very naturally, but spring water and spring ponds seem too deliberate, and the change of luck is obviously better.
Yan Yukong smiled and nodded, knowing that he had written in a hurry and without careful consideration, otherwise it would not have been like this. Fang Yun could only see the problem within a few breaths, and it was obvious that he had profound knowledge.
"One is not enough, add another!" someone shouted.
Fang Yun glanced at the man with a smile. The students from the Holy Academy were at least somewhat famous in various countries. He quickly recognized this person, his name was Ning Meng, he was from Qingguo, and he didn’t have a close relationship with his friends. He was the nephew of a Qingguo minister, and the Qingguo minister often criticized him in the Qingguo court.
Fang Yun said with a smile: "I only see this one flaw. This brother must have seen that Yu Kong's new poem has many flaws. Come on, please stand up and criticize a few sentences so that I can learn from it."
Ning Meng was stunned for a moment. like a statue.
Many people looked at Ning Meng with smiles. It was fine for his friend to mess with Fang Yun, but if he still wanted to force Fang Yun to make mistakes for his friend even though he was not familiar with Fang Yun, don't blame Fang Yun for fighting back. What's more, this cultural conference is just a joke, and Fang Yun's behavior is in line with the theme of this cultural conference.
Zhang Zhixing laughed and said: "If this literary friend feels that this poem is inappropriate, he can stand up and say it."
Ning Meng sat there stiffly, secretly thinking that this Fang Xusheng was very powerful, he smiled and said: "Don't you dare, just join in the fun. I can't compare to Fang Xusheng in terms of poetry and lyrics, so I don't mind saying anything."
When Fang Yun saw that the man had given in, he stopped saying anything. If he continued to fight back, it would not matter if the other party pretended to be wronged and admitted his mistake again in order to retreat instead of making progress. However, it would be too boring to let the atmosphere of the cultural gathering be completely dull. He had to master this balance.
Fang Yun smiled and took a sip of spring wine. Everyone understood that Fang Yun didn't want to cause a stalemate at the cultural meeting, so he stopped making noises. After all, Yan Yukong was a disciple of the Semi-Saint, and the banter could not turn into an attack. .
"After reading Yan Yukong's poem, let's look at the poems of the other nine people at his table." Zhang Zhixing said, taking out the poems of the other nine people and reading them one by one.
Soon, everyone realized that Fang Yun's previous words, "Don't be afraid of not knowing the goods, be afraid of comparisons" were also very appropriate here. It was also written in a hurry, and Yan Yukong's poem was obviously better than the others.
The literary meeting continued, and Zhang Zhixing and Sun Renbing successively caught people from five tables. Some of these people made one or two witty sentences, and some had a slightly strange format, but their skills were only acceptable. It was difficult to produce outstanding works. After all, they were Impromptu poetry.
After calling the names of the five tables, Zhang Zhixing said to take a rest and eat and drink to refresh himself. After eating and drinking, he would take away all the poems. Finally, he asked ten old students to quickly select the ten worst poems, and then select the ten best poems. , give rewards, and be able to enter tomorrow's Infinite Battle Palace as soon as possible like those famous bachelors or great scholars.
Fang Yun, like everyone else, was ready to eat.
Duan Qing, who has a cheerful personality, stood up and said with a smile: "We are all scholars, so we can't dirty the paper while eating. I will collect the paper first, and then I will distribute it to everyone after eating."
"Thank you, Brother Duan!" Everyone felt that this man was thoughtful and handed the Four Treasures of the Study in front of them to Duan Qing one after another, and asked Duan Qing to put them aside.
Duan Qing collected everyone's papers and looked at everyone's poems. He found that several people had not finished writing, and Fang Yun only wrote ten words.
Some hot dishes were served one after another, and everyone chatted while eating and drinking. Adjacent tables also toasted, making the atmosphere of the cultural gathering more and more lively.
Only then did Fang Yun understand why he had to disrupt everyone's seating order. After such a literary meeting, the people at the same table had become friends. If anyone wanted to continue to get acquainted, it would be a matter of course. Anyone who wanted to find another person would also have an excuse. , allowing students to strengthen communication, which is of great benefit.
Just after a quarter of an hour, before the meal was finished, Fang Yun received a letter from the Holy Court.
Fang Yun reached out and took out the official seal and took a look. It turned out that the war hall was going to hold a meeting of the elders. There were two topics. The first was how to let the army from the Kong Shengwen realm cooperate with the two realms of battle. The second was to discuss how to defend against barbarian attacks. And The second topic mainly discusses the participation of the Sihai Dragon Clan. The Sihai Dragon Clan was obtained by Fang Yun in exchange for the True Dragon Order. Any planned actions need to be informed by Fang Yun.
Fang Yun saw that such an important meeting could not be delayed. He said a few words to the people at the table first, then walked quickly to Zhang Zhixing, explained the reason for leaving in a low voice, and finally walked out of Changhongyuan.
.(To be continued.)
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