Of course, Yang Qi also made some changes when telling the story, including Feng Yan returning to the tribe and killing her enemies in the end, to design a perfect ending.
"This story is good, and there are quite a few action scenes, but it would be better if the hero and heroine had more emotional scenes and could be together in the end." Liu Qian nodded slightly.
Poof!
Yang Qi almost spit out the tea he had just drunk. The man in the story was none other than him, and his experience was based on his.
"Who told you that man is the leading actor?" Yang Qi looked at Liu Qian with a helpless look.
"Apart from Feng Yan, this man has the most scenes in the play, and Feng Yan is obviously interested in him. If he is not the male lead, then who is?" Liu Qian gave Yang Qi an unpleasant look. Fortunately, Yang Qi was just telling a story. If he was a screenwriter, he would probably piss the director off to death.
Hearing Liu Qian's words, Yang Qi's mouth twitched fiercely, and then he said, "This is just a story. If you think it's good, just find a screenwriter to adapt it."
"This story is indeed good, but it is not the story I want in my heart." Liu Qian shook her head slightly. Although the story of Feng Yan falling from the peak to the bottom and then standing back to the peak is good, it is not what she wants.
"Not what you want?" Yang Qi was stunned. When he saw Liu Qian said it was good, he thought she would like it. He didn't expect that this story still couldn't satisfy Liu Qian.
"This story is very similar to the story of the Martial Saint, but it's not as exciting as the story of the Martial Saint, and the ending is too hasty." Liu Qian said lightly.
Cough~ cough~
Yang Qi coughed lightly. The ending of this story was just something he made up. It never happened, so it was naturally less appealing. In fact, he didn't even know who Mu Yan's enemy was, and he knew nothing about the internal situation of the Phoenix Clan. He just said it according to his own ideas. He was not a professional screenwriter, so his ability to tell stories was naturally a lot worse, so the ending seemed a bit hasty.
Yang Qi continued unwillingly, "I have another story here. This story is about the ancient times..."
This story was based on the ancient war in Zichen Continent that Yang Qi had modified a little. It was a story about a female cultivator from the human race who led the human race to defeat the monsters in ancient times.
“It’s a good story.”
Liu Qian's eyes lit up and she said with surprise.
"Is this a good story?"
Yang Qi looked at Liu Xi with some surprise. This story was completely adapted by him. He even felt that it was not as real as Feng Yan's story. After all, he didn't know much about the ancient times of Zichen Continent. He just changed Zihuang into a woman based on the war history between humans and monsters.
"This story is simple and clear, and the image of a female practitioner suits me very well. I have decided to adapt it based on this story," Liu Qian said quickly.
"Is it okay to keep it simple and clear?" Yang Qi looked at Liu Qian in disbelief.
"What else do you think?"
Liu Qian said unhappily.
Yang Qi nodded with a wry smile. If he had known it was so simple, he would have simply picked up a book about strange stories from the Zichen Continent. There were countless stories recorded in it, and all of these stories had historical basis.
"The scenes involved in this story are probably not easy to achieve with current technology, right?" Yang Qi frowned.
The war between the two races involves a lot of war scenes, and they are all fights between practitioners. It is probably not an easy task to achieve this with the current technology on Earth.
"With 1 billion US dollars in funding, there is nothing to be afraid of. At least we can make it so real that it looks indistinguishable from the real thing from today's perspective." Liu Qian chuckled.
Hearing this, Yang Qi was suddenly at a loss whether to laugh or cry. To put it bluntly, Liu Qian was just dissatisfied with the previous story. It was not a technical problem at all.
In the end, Liu Xi chose this story. As for the adaptation, it would naturally be done by professional screenwriters, so Yang Qi didn't need to worry about it.
“I will contact the screenwriters of Female Martial Saint and Investiture of the Gods and ask them to help revise this story.” Liu Qian said quickly.
Yang Qi reached out and hugged Liu Qian, saying speechlessly, "There's no rush. You haven't practiced much in this period of time. Let me check your progress first."
"You do bad things when Sister Yuxuan is not around." Liu Qian's body softened and she glared at Yang Qi unhappily.
Seeing this, Yang Qi chuckled, and then he carried Liu Qian back to the bedroom.
…
Outside southern Xinjiang, within the territory of Daguang.
Deep in the mountains, in a small fortress, teams of soldiers armed with live ammunition patrolled back and forth. From time to time, mining carts entered and exited a dark cave not far away, transporting stones out. After being sent to the nearby pool for a simple wash, these stones were immediately escorted by a team of soldiers armed with live ammunition to a nearby warehouse, where a large number of stones of various sizes were piled up.
If there were someone who knows about jade nearby, he would definitely be able to see that these inconspicuous stones in front of him are jade ores, and this fortress is the location of a jade vein.
Inside the wooden house, a soldier respectfully said to the Central and South Chinese man who was sipping tea, "General, the warehouse is almost full."
"Um."
The middle-aged man nodded slightly. The goods in the warehouse would be delivered to the family headquarters after a period of time. There were already enough goods in the warehouse, and it was almost time to prepare to send them away.
It is not safe in Daguang. Even the top Jade families, who have their own armed forces, are often harassed by some desperate criminals.
"I will contact the clan leader immediately." The middle-aged man looked at the soldiers and said, "Before the goods are shipped out, you must strengthen your security. If there is any loss of the goods..."
"Boom~"
At this moment, a loud noise suddenly came from the city, as if a bomb exploded.
Click~
The middle-aged man pulled out a submachine gun from under his seat, loaded the bullet into the gun, and rushed out of the cabin with the soldiers in the cabin. However, to his surprise, no gunshots were heard from the camp.
"General!"
Just then, a soldier quickly came to the cabin.
The middle-aged man saw the person coming and asked hurriedly, "What happened? Is there an enemy attack?"
"The mine collapsed." the soldier said hurriedly.
Phew~
The middle-aged man breathed a sigh of relief, but his expression turned ugly. He quickly asked, "What's the situation in the mine?"
"Several miners were buried and the entrance to the mine was blocked." The soldier said with a wry smile.
"Damn it." The middle-aged man cursed, and then said, "Organize rescue immediately, and the defense of the warehouse must not be relaxed."
However, before the middle-aged man finished his words, another loud noise was heard in the camp, followed by a deafening roar of a beast from the direction of the mine.
"What is that!"
From the direction of the mine, a huge monster about a hundred feet long suddenly jumped out and appeared in front of everyone. (To be continued)