Today's 9th update, I'm a little tired.
I revised and uploaded it early yesterday morning, and revised it again when I got home from get off work in the evening. Just after I posted it, I read and revised it again.
For example, in the first chapter, the first 400 words used three "ba" words to express emotion, so I deleted them all.
Some book friends complained that too many "ah"s were used in the previous chapters, which made it awkward to read.
This is how I write faster, and I also want to be more colloquial and look simpler and more relaxed. But I think this point of view is correct. Now while writing, correct this problem.
Furthermore, some book friends said that the recommendation of the main storyline is too slow.
In fact, for today's class, I almost want to leave it to Su Yun. But after all, Boss Zheng is the protagonist, and everyone also likes to see the scene where Boss Zheng is sure to win as soon as he appears, so thank you for your hard work, Brother Yun.
In the next book, you will be the hero! Do you want me to tell you about a play
Well, come to the clinic to see me after get off work today.
When I first designed the outline, I climbed the technology tree in the local hospital in the early stage, earthquake relief in the early and mid-term, and entered the House doctor mode after the mid-term.
Now that Boss Zheng's technology tree has basically been climbed, the real main plot is to see a doctor again and again. Correction of misdiagnosed cases, extremely difficult surgeries and a lot of hospital gossip.
Of course, as a web article, it still needs to have the main thread, but it should be lighter. For example, the Nobel Prize...
For example, after the Nobel Prize, there is a greater honor.
Myasthenia gravis updated today is a misdiagnosed case.
I will not mark the source of the misdiagnosed cases. After a misdiagnosis, you can tell others about rare cases where you made mistakes and share your experience with others. I think this is the spirit of great medicine.
There are no big pig hooves. Doctors are all real people, and diagnosis and treatment must be based on high probability.
I have a more detailed explanation in the book.
Well, that’s all.
A new day has begun, and there are new chapters to write.
Unconsciously, it has entered Dr. House's moment, with countless difficult cases. Doctor House lasted for nine seasons, and I enjoy the short segments like today's sitcoms.
There will be a big plot in the outline soon, which is... According to the current update rate, it will take at most ten days to go to Nanyang.
Nanyang, there are several large and difficult surgical cases, each of which may require tens of thousands of words to be written. The remaining small cases basically do not exceed 10,000 words each.
The plot and speed are very fast. I say that the main plot is slow, but I still insist on this point.
Finally, seriously ask for votes.
It's the 27th, the last 5 days of this month.
Asking for a monthly ticket!
Asking for a monthly ticket! !
Asking for a monthly ticket! ! !