She was supposed to go back during the summer vacation, but she couldn't make any money when she got home, so she couldn't afford the tuition fees, so the original owner spent 500 yuan to rent a single room outside the school, hoping to make some money by coding.
She has been writing and writing non-stop since last semester, but she can only do full attendance all the time.
But months of full attendance add up to a lot of money for her. If she returns to her hometown, she won't even be able to earn a few hundred dollars a month.
In the original plot, the original owner had no choice but to borrow 2,000 yuan from Ruan Mengmeng, plus his full attendance, to make up for the tuition.
But now, Tang Wan will naturally not work as hard as the original owner.
…
After simply getting herself something to eat, Tang Wan lay on the bed, thinking about it, and slowly changed the part where Lin Tongyin wanted to restore her memory.
After the modification, I went to find Zhao Tong.
"Are you there?" Tang Wan asked.
Zhao Tong was sitting in front of the computer drinking animal blood.
Although it is not difficult to get fresh human blood in modern society, if you drink human blood all the time, you will become addicted. If one day you smell a particularly delicious smell of blood, he may lose control.
So he has been restraining his instincts, instead drinking animal blood to maintain normal.
Seeing Tang Wan looking for him, Zhao Tong immediately replied, "Yes, what's the matter?"
"That's it. Didn't I write that the hero entered the secret realm and is about to regain his memory?"
"Ok?"
"But I feel that the writing in the back is not very smooth, and I haven't found the problem after I revised it again and again. How about you read it for me from the perspective of a reader?" Tang Wan said.
Hearing this, Zhao Tong's heart moved.
The next moment, he replied: "Okay, send me."
"Hmm!" Tang Wan curled her lips.
No, if we meet every day, wouldn't there be one
Then he sent Zhao Tong the passage he had just randomly modified.
…
Zhao Tong quickly opened the document and browsed quickly.
In this paragraph, Tang Wan intentionally added a psychological description of Lin Tongyin's panic and confusion after she found out that she was actually a Demon Lord.
After all, whether it is Lin Tongyin before recovering his memory, or Lin Tongyin, the former Demon Lord, they are not the kind of people who will easily panic and be at a loss.
Even if there is, it will only be for such a short moment, and it will not be unacceptable to her true identity as Tang Wan deliberately described.
Zhao Tong naturally discovered the problem very quickly.
However, he is not surprised. After all, sometimes, what the author wants to express will always fail to express due to various reasons.
The author probably wanted to describe Lin Tongyin's surprise after discovering her identity, but the description was too biased, so that the calm or cold side of Lin Tongyin was written down.
So, Zhao Tong quickly started typing on the keyboard, "Starting from this part, your design is broken..." Zhao Tong circled the problematic place and took a screenshot to Tang Wan, and then analyzed it with her.
Seeing this, Tang Wan looked at the dialog box on the computer screen with a smile, and then pretended to be surprised: "Yes, yes, I just feel that something is wrong, but I can't see it for life and death. Fortunately, I asked you to see it." Take a moment, or I will collapse from here.”
Then he immediately said: "You are really good, you found my problem at a glance!"
…
Seeing what Tang Wan sent, Zhao Tong curled his lips lightly, "It's nothing, the main reason is that I read it from a reader's point of view, so I understand it more clearly, right?"
"You're right, but your eyesight is really good! Fortunately, you are here, otherwise I don't know how long I'll be mad. I'll edit the manuscript first, and I'll send it to you when it's done. Chirp! (*￣3)(ε￣*)”
Zhao Tong: ...
Why does this girl like to send him kiss emojis so much